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Bradley_Nephilim

 
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PostPosted: Thu Oct 13, 2005 1:22 pm


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PostPosted: Sun Oct 23, 2005 7:03 pm


Eh, I'm sorry I haven't been here! cry

Brad, your poem was very well-crafted, as always. Nicely-choiced figurative language as well.

It may just be me, but I felt little emotion reading the poem. It didn't leave an imprint of its feelings on me, you might say. That may not be what you were going for, but it was something I had to voice.

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