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stinkyghost

PostPosted: Wed Dec 10, 2008 7:23 pm


♥. somewhere, maybe you'll be thinking of me.


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Hair pulled backwards to the point
That is so taut it pulls on the strings of my.................heart
The white pearls overflow onto the thick dark
Holding which leaves me
Thoroughly enthralled in the sense that no one can
Try to break my easily broken
Heart
The only exception is
The fact that you can see my backbone
Hovering over the project forgotten amidst
The makeshift pile of infatuation.


thinking of how we could be.
PostPosted: Fri Dec 12, 2008 6:30 am


Your unintended rhymes clog up the flow, and the last line is just...weird.

Vocab is worth some kudos, though. smile

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