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It was just like any normal Saturday morning the sun began to rise, and everyone in the Mihara family started to wake up. Except one of the members of the family was still asleep even though school started in half a hour. In a room covered in posters of bands such as Dir en Grey, Gazette, and L'arc en cial a high school student laid underneath the covers, and his name is Daisuke. Daisuke was a very thin, and non athletic person, and his hair was black with blond highlights going through his hair. Daisuke was being shaken by a force while he was dreaming, and it was his sister waking him up for school. Daisuke looked, and said," Megumi its Saturday why can't we be like Americans and just skip Saturday?" Megumi said," Because we aren't Americans idiot, so get up you know I'm not aloud to go to school until you are awake." Daisuke was a freshmen while his sister Megumi was a senior, and she was at the top of her class while Daisuke was in the middle. Daisuke had gotten out of his bed, and took a quick ten minute shower, brushed his teeth, and got dress.

After he was done getting ready Daisuke was wearing his school uniform, and he followed his sister out of his apartment to her car. Daisuke got in the car, and said," Can we please listen to something I will like?" Megumi laughed ,and said," You know the rules of driving?" And Daisuke said," Yea the one driving chooses the music." Daisuke had to sit through this pop song terror of riding with Megumi. Daisuke, and Megumi had arrived at school, and were almost late. As they walked through the gates she said," Why is it always your fault that we are late?" Daisuke said," What you can wake me up earlier maybe." Megumi said," Any earlier and I would lose my beauty sleep." Daisuke sighed, and said," Well I have to hurry most of the time, and you are always prepared to go when I'm rushing, so it seems you have enough damn beauty sleep." Megumi just rolled her eyes, and said," Go to class freshmen." Daisuke sighed, and just went to class. Walking in he quickly got to his seat in the back of the first row. Daisuke was thrown a piece of paper, and it was from Yuri who was one of his only friends in school, and it said," Daisuke you know we have a test today?" Daisuke wrote," Yea I studied all night while I was chatting with people online." Daisuke tossed it back to Yuri, and she read the letter, and wrote down something quickly and threw it back at Daisuke. The letter then said," Really? Man I really should of studied, but some girl friends of mine had me at the mall all day." Daisuke wrote," Hahaha that's good hey come over here, and I'll explain everything real quick." Throwing it back Yuri then saw how they only had five minutes left before class started, and she got up, and Daisuke explained what was the geometry test was about. Even though Yuri was preppy as some would say, and popular she still thought as Daisuke as a friend even though many laughed at him, and thought he was weird.

As he was quickly teaching Yuri Daisuke looked up as Matsuda walked into the room, and he dazed off staring at him, and Yuri said," Daisuke pay attention come on I need to know this." Daisuke blushed, and said," Sorry." The bell rang, and the teacher entered the classroom Yuri swiftly went back to her seat. Mr. Shima was Daisuke's geometry teacher, and he said to the class," Well good morning everyone as you all know we have a test today, so as I quickly go and make copies you all may talk or study." Yuri went, and sat in the Vacant desk next to Daisuke, and she said," Why did you blank out all of a sudden?" Daisuke said," Umm it was nothing." Yuri knew when Daisuke was lying, and she said," Its ok to tell me things." Daisuke thought of a lie he could make up, but she had saw Matsuda enter the room as well, and he said," Umm it was really nothing." Taking out the letter they were just writing on she turned it around, and wrote," Please tell me Daisuke." Daisuke didn't know what to say, but he wrote," Look don't tell anyone, but I was staring at Matsuda." Yuri read it, and she wrote," Why did he say something to you?" Daisuke wrote," No its not that I just don't know whenever I see him my heart races." Yuri read what Daisuke had wrote, and she put her head down for a moment, and then said out loud," This is awesome Daisuke." Everyone stared at Yuri, and one of their class mates said," Yuri stop making a scene." Yuri blushed, and sat down, and she wrote," Daisuke why didn't you tell me earlier?" Daisuke wrote," Well its not the easiest thing to say." Yuri hugged Daisuke, and everyone looked at her, and she quickly got back to her seat as Mr. Shima walked in.

Mr. Shima passed out the test, and everyone began to take the test. Daisuke finished early, and he turned in his test. Sitting down he took out the latest Gintama, and began to read it. Daisuke thought it was pointless to have a crush on another guy especially someone who everyone knew. Daisuke closed his book, and put his head down, and he thought," Why is it that I stare at a guy like some school girl." The test was over, and Mr.Shima let everyone just talk Yuri of course sat next to Daisuke , and there was a awkward silence between the two, and she said," So..... Do you want me to ask him for you?" Daisuke looked at her, and said," Are you crazy?" Yuri laughed, and said," No not really, but its really simple." Daisuke thought she was seriously insane for being so ok with this, and Daisuke then turned his head towards the window, and said," I mean that is just something awkward to ask someone you know they might just take things the wrong way or you know might just say no, and then tell everyone." Yuri already had dissappeared, and Matsuda wasn't in the classroom, and he said," Seriously why did I look away." Daisuke asked to use the restroom, and he left class trying to find where Yuri was.

Daisuke saw Yuri and Matsuda talking, and he walked up to her, and said," Why did you disappear?" Matsuda was one of the fastest swimmers on the swim team, and was one of the cutest guys in the school, and with his reddish brown hair, and his cute face no girl couldn't drool over him. Daisuke looked at Yuri who had turned her head towards Matsuda, and Matsuda looked at Daisuke, and there was a awkward silence between the three of them, and Daisuke said," So did I interrupt something?" Matsuda said," Umm yea we were just talking about you." Yuri looked at Daisuke, and smiled, and she grabbed his arm and went around the corner, and she said," He said yes." Daisuke was unaware of what they were talking about, and then he remembered," Want me to ask him for you?" Daisuke said," You have got to be kidding me?" Matsuda was waiting around the corner, and Daisuke said," How do you know he's not lying I mean maybe its just to trick me or something you know how popular kids treat others who aren't." Yuri smirked, and said," Why do you think it would be a joke he has been waiting for someone to ask him out that's not a chick." Daisuke was lost, and confused, and he said," So he likes guys also?" Yuri said," Yes, but you know its not like he wanted to tell anyone, so go around the corner, and say hi instead of standing here arguing with me."

Daisuke went around the corner, and looked at Matsuda who said," So what were you two talking about?" Daisuke blushed, and said," Just how you might be tricking me with this whole wanting to go out with me." Matsuda smiled, and said," Yea its not a trick, and well I like how you're quiet, and bashful. Look I've seen you staring at me sometimes, and well I really would like to talk sometime, so how about we go out tomorrow at the Milk dipper." Daisuke blushed, and he said," Yea I would really like that." Matsuda kissed Daisuke's cheek, and walked back to class. Daisuke then turned around, and looked at Yuri who was watching the two of him, and he said," I'm never washing this cheek again." Daisuke then walked back to class with Yuri, and he said," You know I really just thought of something Yuri." Yuri smiled, and said," Yea what is it?" Daisuke said," You maybe are crazy, but if you are I really am grateful that you are." Yuri smiled, and stuck her tongue out at Daisuke, and said," Now come on you got to admit this though your face after he kissed you was priceless I mean you almost just fell over from shock." Daisuke sighed, and said," I know, but that would of been ok."

After school Daisuke rode home with his sister Megumi who said," So what happened today?" Daisuke said," Oh nothing I just got some really good news from someone I like." Megumi said," Tell me who she is?" Daisuke said," Oh like hell I'm going to tell you." Megumi pulled over, and said," Start walking then." Daisuke said," Fine her name is Sakura." Megumi said," That's what I thought." Not only was there no girl at their school named Sakura, butDaisuke also knew he couldn't hide it from his family forever, and that eventually Megumi or others at school would find out. It did scare him, but he didn't care at the same time.

I thought it was lovely, though like Reps said, it doesn't flow.

There's a part in the beginning where it says 'his hair was black with blond highlights in his hair.'

It's not, bad, it's just mistakes, and with me, i say mistakes are good things, since they teach you more powerfully then correct things do. Just edit it, go through and find mistakes, and if you can't find any, look through every paragraph 5406839045684 times until you do. That's what i do...sometimes. unless i'm in a rush. But that's most of the time. :/

Daisuke awoke to the sun's rays hitting his eyelids then he looked to see if Matsuda was even in the bed, and he was no where to be found. Daisuke got up out of the bed, and he walked into the kitchen. Daisuke saw Matsuda cooking breakfast which was great, and Daisuke then heard Matsuda say," So are you hungry?" Daisuke smiled followed by his cheeks turning bright red, and he said," Of course, and plus why wouldn't I want to eat your food?" Matsuda smiled like always with his smile he could bring peace to the earth, and he said in his magnificent voice," I don't know maybe you will have to try it to like it." Daisuke sat down, and Matsuda pulled a chair up next to him and placed the omelet he had made between him and Daisuke, and he cut a piece followed by feeding it to Daisuke, and after chewing and swallowing the warm omelet Daisuke said," You're a good cook." Matsuda rubbed the back of his head, and said," It's a necessity when you live by yourself." Daisuke reached over, and kissed Matsuda on his cheek then hugging him and pressing his head to Matsuda's chest he said," Well now you aren't by yourself." The two finished the breakfast Matsuda had prepared, and Daisuke then said," Holy crap we need to get ready for school."

Daisuke freaked out, and said," Matsuda I'll bring my clothes tomorrow, but I need to rush home." Kissing him goodbye Daisuke ran out of Matsuda's apartment. Taking the elevator down to the lowest floor Daisuke got on the bus heading towards his house. Matsuda smiled after Daisuke left, and thought," Wow I am seriously in love with him." Matsuda then began to change into his school uniform, and prepare his and Daisuke's lunch for school. Daisuke was in such a hurry to get to school, and thankfully traffic wasn't as bad as he believed it would be for Daisuke just pictured cars all jammed close together, but thankfully he got off near his apartment with time to spare. Running up to the second floor of his apartment complex Daisuke ran in as Megumi was leaving, and she said," Where the hell have you been." Daisuke was panting for air, and sweating with his face as red as his cheeks are when he sees Matsuda, and he said," I was at a friend's house studying." Megumi had hunches whenever Daisuke was lying, and she smiled with her evil smirk, and she said," You're lying, and I will find out what you were doing." Daisuke laughed knowing she would and he said," It's ok you'll know when I get home." Daisuke smiled, and then rushed into his room changing as fast as possible without even worrying about his hair, because he would just fix it in the car.

Megumi smiled as she waited at the door, but all she could think was," He does have a girlfriend, so maybe oh my god they had sex." Megumi was happy knowing that he could have some way to make Daisuke do all her chores so she would be able to study more, and she simply walked down the stairs as Daisuke raced down them to get to her car. Megumi laughed, and said," You know I have the keys, so why be in so much of a rush." Laughing Megumi unlocked her car doors, and then got in the driver's seat. Starting the engine the car made a roar as they drove off to school. While in the car Daisuke used his hands to fix his hair, but sadly it was a useful as trying to hide behind a leaf.

Like a normal day of school Daisuke, and Megumi barely made it to school, and she laughed, and said," See if you weren't banging your girlfriend we could of been early." Daisuke looked at Megumi and being angered he said," I did do it with anyone, and I was truly studying." Hurrying to class Daisuke walked into his first period where two days ago he was asked out by Matsuda thanks to the help of Yuri, and he sat next to Yuri seeing that Matsuda hadn't arrived. Yuri as happy as a kid after getting the latest kamen rider belt she said," How was it Daisuke? Did you get nervous? Did you freak out? Did you ditch him?" Yuri practically shouted this, and everyone just thought it was same old Yuri freaking out about everything, and Yuri said," Sorry my phone got hung up the other day Yuuto was with me, and well he thought my advice could wait." Daisuke scratched his head, and said," Whose Yuuto?" Yuri said," Oh he's my boyfriend you know he's a sophomore." Daisuke smiled with the same cheery look Yuri always had, and he said," That's great now we both are even." Yuri sighed and said," Hmm in all honesty you're winning."

Daisuke sighed and as the two chatted about what had happened between him, and Matsuda quietly the two could hear the girls chatting about Matsuda as he stepped inside of the classroom with a bag in his right hand. Matsuda walked over to Daisuke and Yuri and after putting the bag on Daisuke's desk he said," You know your hair is messed up?" Daisuke said," Yea I was in a real big hurry this morning." Matsuda thought about what his next words would be, because it could be the biggest thing for him to do, and he said," I would know." Matsuda lifted Daisuke's head up, and kissed him on the lips in front of the whole class. Yuri was shocked by the whole incident, and after kissing Daisuke Matsuda reached into his bag, and pulled out a Bento for Daisuke, and Matsuda calmly said," I made this for you I hope you like it." Matsuda waved hello to Yuri whose face was completely frozen, and shocked form what just happened, and she was also surprised at how Matsuda would take no risk to just show everyone he was in a relationship, and Daisuke was just not even caring.

Daisuke saw that Yuri was shocked, and he said," Woa Yuri it's ok I'm just as shocked, but at the same time happy." Daisuke then saw the looks everyone gave him, and how everyone was reacting like he put a spell on Matsuda. Yuri being like Daisuke's bodyguard stood up, and said," If any of you have anything to say I think you should keep your damn mouths shut." No one said anything as Mr.Shima walked in and said," What's all the bad looks, and yelling for?" Kusaka was a jerk to all in his great and always hated how Matsuda attracted so much attention, and he said," The goth kid, and pretty boy here were making out in the middle of class." Yuri's face looked like she was going to kill Kusaka, and Mr.Shima sighed, and said," Look we all are different, and if Daisuke and Matsuda are dating you can't do anything about it, so just go back to normal, because in this classroom we are here to learn not judge each other or make out." Kusaka had a sarcastic smirk on his face, and Matsuda looked as calm as possible. Yet Daisuke was mostly affected by everything, and he left his seat, and ran out of the classroom with Yuri, and Matsuda soon following him.