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 Posted: Sun Nov 30, 2008 1:50 am
(This poem came out like a song is why I posted it here)
Comein' up from where I've been, soakin' up things
from now and then. Times come and go like playin'
a game, no matter what Jesus is always the same.
(Chorus)
I'm like a fish outta water, graspin' for air; feelin' the sun
on my skin, Jesus refreshes me from within. Like the spring
that flows, so does the peace he brings and it makes me sing!
VS II
Spreadin' myself thin for everyone but me, it's takin' a toll
but no one can see. Lord help me please! As he guides me
along my way, I am grateful for his loving grace. When I
tend to feel alone, I think of Jesus on his throne and ...
(Back to Chorus)
Written By,
Claysong/kokopelliqueen (c)
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Posted: Sat Dec 06, 2008 3:48 pm
I liked it. The topic was great and the vision you picked stayed true throughout the lyrics. And don't worry if it was supposed to be a poem but ended up more like a song, I've done that quite a few times myself biggrin
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