I would like to ask that you do not use asterisks, these **, for actions such as *runs over*. And use third person.
I don't need you to type a whole bunch, and I don't really care if it's like one sentence... just not three words. Something like Smallpaw ran over to her person, her tail swaying happily behind her. "So what are we going to do today, Wildfoot?"

Okay, and when your in a roleplay and your talking but not roleplaying, but your text in [[(({{ brackets }}))]] or something to show that its out of character. And make sure it's clear when your character is thinking but not talking.

And grammar would be nice to. It's not required though.
Names, Clans, and special places starts with capitals. Sentences end with periods, and you can spell things easily when you download a spell check or use microsoft word.