so i want to be a writer, right? well i want some feedback from you all.

my topic right now is a guy in high school, hes a freshmen. he finds out that he can control the element of fire. well hes traind by this guy amed jim who tells him that he is one of the four chosen ones to help protect the world from the forces of evil like weturinterchener, the name for the Bane of darkness in the book. then three of his friends find out they can control one of the other three elements.


so what do you think so far?????
P.S. i know my grammer and spelling is not the greatest but i don't feel like editing this that much