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Blood eye chapter 1= the beginning

September 18, 1986

I was watching her with intense probing eyes; I could hear my heart beating in my chest. My hands were breaking into a cold sweat, I don’t know why I am prone to danger but this was different, she was different in a hard way to describe.
She was sitting in a casual position with her hands in her lap with an emotionless expression on her face, I watched with anxious eyes for she was on a bench across the street from me. She was always there at the end of the day; she was even more beautiful in the twilight.
I was behind a faded white picket fence watching her…. a Waiting her victims. I was curious about her way of life. I felt like I was in a fairy tale or in a horror movie, though I’ve only seen her three times, and I was frighten the first time I saw her.

Then SHE came; my eyes widen in panic, for my sister was walking towards a trap, what was she doing out so late? I needed to do something. There was no longer time to make a plan to help her without any of us getting hurt, I had no time left; I jumped the fence, racing across the road as fast as I could.
My sister jumped when I came up on her “who-who are you?” she asked in a small frightened voice not recognizing me, I pushed her down into the bushes “stay there” I said in a whisper in a low voice she hopefully couldn’t recognized.
She was whimpering in the bushes as I left.
I turned slowly toward the bench. The girl was a few inches away from me now; she was stunningly beautiful up close, her onyx colored eyes were like a black hole sucking me in, her hair was new moon black, in the moon light though it looked blue.
She wore a buttoned up jacket that was crimson, and she had worn-out blue jeans on. And was Sizing her up; she was a couple inches shorter then me; she was so beautiful that it came out of my mouth unwillingly, “your beautiful.” She sprang out at me before I could finish what I said.
I must have startled her because she had an anguished look on her face.
I don’t know what happened next; it was a blur, before I knew it, I was out cold.
* * *
I woke up with blinding pain all through out my body. I was Feeling dizzy and lightheaded and could feel my head throbbing.
Why am I still alive? She never lets her victims live….
There was a lot of pain through out my body, which made it unbearable to move. I struggled to tilted my head backwards to see if my sister was still in the bushes; no one was there.
She must have left while I was knocked out. I thought.
I scooted my hand up my body painfully to look at my watch to see what it time was. It said four o’clock in the morning; I’d been out for six hours. I inched my way over to the bench and barely got myself up on to it and laid there.
While I was trying to regain my energy, a cold breeze hit my face. It felt so refreshing. There were light clouds in the sky tonight; they made different familiar shapes in the sky; birds, ducks and some symbols from a show on TV I watched as a kid.
It was a silent night. Everyone in town is most likely asleep; the houses them selves looked asleep. It was a full moon that night. During those nights I feel full of life and strength; it sometimes frightens me for some reason.
Well I was feeling a bit better now, so I tried to get up, it was hard.
I hope I don’t fall. I hoped
So I stumbled like a drunk back home.

Outside my house… it was a two-story house and it looked haunted. It was a faded brown color and looked more modern inside though. It’s kind of funny too, during Halloween tricker treaters get scared of the house, which makes it so I never have to get candy.
Maybe it is because it was the old mayors home 70 years ago.
The pain in my body never got much better it felt even worse, like I was burning in a pot of boiling grease. Then I thought maybe the girl in the jacket got my sister which helped me gain enough energy to run.
I ran as fast as the pain would let me toward the house, I slammed the door open. Someone in the house jumped from the couch and screamed “ZACK!!” it was my sister, she was crying uncontrollably “its ok Ellie it’s me,” I said in a calm voice.
Ellie was my long curly burgundy blond haired, pudgy faced, and short older sister
“Are you okay did someone do something to you!” she rushed over and hugged me. “I got pushed into a bush by someone I was so sc-scared!” she cried. she then started shivering uncontrollably “Z-Zack yo-you’re so c-c-cold are y-you o-okay?” she let go of me and backed away being a little clumsy and fell backwards onto the couch.
I don’t feel cold at all? But…. My neck feels numb? I wondered
I lifted my left hand to the numb spot and felt crusty flakes… it was dry blood. I was a thin, seventeen year old teenager with light brown hair that was over my face, a cowlick making an upside down wave above my forehead, and grayish blue eyes. I stiffened in shock.
I don’t know why I’m still alive. I thought
This must be the beginning… Ellie looked at me with a glare “you look tired, you should go to bed…. YOU know school is tomorrow right?” I sighed as she started ranting on about my responsibilities and how if I don’t get an education ill be at the bottom of the barrel of poor people, which was a lame analogy that I mistakenly laughed at causing her again to complain.
I was struggling to stand. “ I’ll see you tomorrow morning.” I slip off to my room before she could say anything else. As I got to my room, the pain surged through my whole being; I tumbled onto the bed.
Everything turned black and before I lost consciousness I heard the words. “Bey lo oed…”

Blood eye Chapter 2= the pain



I awoke in a daze, I felt as if I’d been hit by a truck; It was so painful to move It felt like a million needles stabbing me all throughout my body. I tried to think but my stomach was screeching biting at me with hunger. It was around five in the morning now and Ellie must have fallen to sleep a wile ago.
Why am I in so much pain? I thought to myself.
Just a few hours ago I was watching her and thought that they were just a myth but….
That cant be… they’re not real. I assured my self.
I got out of my bed and headed for the bathroom, I snuck by my sister’s room so she wouldn’t wake; she’s a light sleeper.
As I reach the bathroom a surge of pain hit me in my neck and I had to catch myself on the door handle and my reflexes made me smack my neck! And just barely touching it before hurt like hell, but smacking it made me yell in agony. I fell to the floor faster then I could process through me mind.
As I lay there I was wondering if my sister heard me, probably the whole neighborhood heard me. I hope they didn’t, I hate showing my pain. My problems should only be for myself, even if I hurt all over or if there’s cuts and bruises for all that mattered.

After lying there for what seemed like forever I got up slowly; All the while feeling the pain in my body. I looked at the bathroom mirror and saw the lumps on my neck,
Well last night was not a dream, I sighed to myself.
I got a few Band-Aids out of the mirror cabinet and easily put them on my neck to cover the spots.
Man, Ellie must have been out cold last night.
Once I got the band-aid on my neck I left the bathroom and went to the kitchen to find something to eat. There was left over roast beef and Sunny D in the refrigerator. I picked the beef that was on a plate and stuck it in the microwave, and put the Sunny D in dad’s mug on the table and took a sip. “This tastes like dirt?” I said out loud. I dumped the liquid out and filled the mug back up with water.
Before I could take a sip of water the microwave buzzing was telling me that the beef was done, I stepped toward the microwave when my alarm clock in my room roared to life. Now not feeling so hungry anymore I ended putting the beef back in the refrigerator and ran up stairs to my room and turned the alarm off and started getting dressed, for it was the first day of school after all.
Ellie came to my room still in her pajamas and said “I had the weirdest dream last night.” She said still half-asleep. And then she looked up at my neck. “What happened to your neck?”
I hesitated “I-I got bit by a spider its nothing.” I tried to sound like I was telling the truth, She looked me in the face. The look she always does when she tries to see if I’m lying, “Well I guess I’ll believe you for now but if you have anything you would like to tell me just say it okay?”
I sighed “yea sure whatever.” I said sarcastically. She punched me in the chest playfully “Don’t be such a jerk Zack” she complained. “Oh yea don’t miss school this year or you will get kicked out for sure this time, no ones going to help you don’t repeat your self too much.” She scolds.
Yea I know, I thought to my self then nodded to her.
“Well I got a job interview today; wish me luck!” she ran out the door without another word. She use to not have to be so responsible but it all changed after the car accident…
I hate Mondays, I thought to myself.
I left for my special place a little early that day so I would be able to travel a little longer before I had to get to school. That day was not too different from other days. I traveled to and through the maze of the forest; marking places I have been and going deeper into the forest. People say that there is a magical place out there that changes people forever, but its just myth it’s not like its true or anything.
Stemfeld is a small town in Northwest Washington, covered with a wall of trees all the way around the town. I lived on the north part of town, and the forest area I travel in is on Market Street at the western edge of town. I walk there every day, I have a car but I‘ve never had to use it; the town is so small that mostly everyone walks to where they need to go.
The sidewalks are old; they’re just stepping-stones then concrete sidewalk in the city. I don’t really know why the town is so old fashion; it just looks crummy to me.
I was 4 blocks away from my house now and it was 2 more till I was on Market Street. Market Street is also where the only bench in town is… It’s the monument to the mayor’s great grandfather’s daughter.
Things don’t seem to change here. Nothing exciting happens here and it makes things quite and boring. That’s why I travel the forest so often. it’s always changing and the forest is so alive with wild life.

As I turn on Market Street, I saw the alley that I use to hang out at. I use to through eggs at rich peoples cars; they are the only ones that drive around town. The alley was behind the Market Street’s general store. It has a creepy old man that works there. People in this town are stale: they get too old to fast. I knew a kid that was in a college classes and he was only 11 years old. He never had fun or had any friends it’s kind of sad how his life is going by so fast.

I had reached the base of the forest now; as I approach the forest I saw a wave of string like blackness speeding into the forest.
I think I’m hallucinating…
I did not think much of it and continued walking into the forest. The forest was over flowed with mist, making the air thick with water and also made it better for wildlife in the forest so I didn’t mind.
After an hour I was feeling like something was watching me. The forest was real quiet and the air was starting to get harder to breath. Then I felt a shock going through my body; it was so painful that I felt like I was close to passing out. I just shook it off and continued on my way deeper into the forest.

I saw the first tree that I marked, it was a tree that twisted its self up on a different tree; I had also cut out a few holes in it and placed a rose seed in each them and filled the hole back up with the moss on the ground. There were a lot of other marks I had left but most of them were the rose seeds in the trees I thought they would make the forest livelier in the future.
The forest was starting to get thicker with fog and the feeling that someone was watching me was getting stronger.
I looked up and saw the shadow that had rushed into the forest earlier, shooting from branch to branch above me. I gasped and just kept going as if I didn’t see anything,
What is it? I thought
As I approach the last mark the shadow skipped to the tree and landed right in front of it and turned to look at me. The tree was a giant. and it was covered with rose seeds. As I enclose toward the shadow. It became a she and she then to the girl from last night.
“I’m not too surprised that you came after me.” I said in a calm voice hiding the shock that she was here leaning against the enormous tree with the face that sent a shock familiar to this morning’s pain, She laughs “Did you expect me to kill you?” she said in a voice that made me feel like screaming.
“Well why didn’t you last night?” I asked confused, She turned and looked up at the tree “Intriguing. you’ve done a good job with the rose seeds. Do you think they well grow?” she said changing the subject.
“Why Do you care, and how do you even know I did that?” I asked frustrated but amused.
She turned on her heels and started walking towards me “You know,” she proceeded closer. “What if there was a reason I didn’t end your or your sisters life?” she asked strategically that hinted something I couldn’t comprehend.
A shock went through my face like lightning. “What! How did you know she was my sister, and what reason are you talking about?” my frustration was showing in my voice now.
She stopped a few feet in front and starts laughing at me again “you ask a lot of questions,” she said in a playful voice. “Well would you like to know my name first?” she asked.
I looked at here strangely “umm yea sure...what’s your name?” I wasn’t actually aware how bad I was at keeping a steady conversation going.
She laughs, “My name is Jennet. What’s yours?”
Jennet… why does that name sound so familiar?
I looked at her face. Her eyes were an amber color that I have never seen before. “Well are you going to stop staring at my eyes and tell me your name?” she said with a playfully high voice.
My face started to feel really hot “m-my name is Zack Zellis.” I stuttered turning my head away to hide my face.
“You’re a real shy one aren’t you?” she cued. “People and fairy tale creatures all seem to find me that way?” I groaned.
The little talk we seemed to be having starting to make me uncomfortable with her.
“Maybe because you are,” She said calmly. I turned my head away with my arms crossed.
“Well be expecting to see me again soon.” She said then turned and disappeared into the sunlight in shadow like lines.
I felt really confused now.
What just happened?
I looked back up at the giant tree and saw a rose bud sprouting out from the tree.
I was jumping up too get a better look at it as I thought about what I had to do today.
My watch showed that I was going to be late “Crap!” I yield. I was backtracking as fast as I could.
Wow I feel really light, but my body feels as if it was burnt…
Before I realized it I was out of the forest, some how…
How did I get out THAT fast?
I was now right next to the bench on Market Street.
The shortest way to school was to go a couple streets down from the market and take the hill alley way and the school football field would be just beyond that point.
Before I left I looked down at the bench, at the leg of the bench it said “To my dearest Jennet” my eyes widened at the name.
This seat was made around 70 years ago… Jennet? My thoughts rushed at me so fast that I forgot that my legs were even moving.
I was half way up the alley hill already; I was running so fast…
Well I’m going to ponder more on it later.

* * *

“Wow Zellis you made it on the first day! I am vary proud of you.” Mr. Roein announced sarcastically to the class right as I came into the classroom. I just gave him a smirk and asked where my seat was just as the bell ringed.
“Well, I will be handing out your world history books on Wednesday so today is get to know everyone day.” He said to the class. I’ve known Mr. Roein sense elementary school and I have never liked him.
While everyone was saying there names I was checking out my schedule; “World History, English 2, life science, pre-algebra, ceramics, and P.E.” I mumbled to myself.
“Well are you going to tell us about your self Zellis?” Mr. Roein beamed at me.
I glared at him then answered him “Cut the crap! We all know each other and everyone knows me for that matter. WHY do we even do this period?” the whole room was silent “Okay, if anyone in here is new please speak up and tell me you don’t know anyone one here!” the class sounded all the more hollow, all I could hear was my own voice.
Well, after all of that, all they did is skip me and kept going like they didn’t hear anything I’d said. The rest of the day just went by with no homework given out today and everyone did know just ignored me.
Lunch was just a heap of annoying voices, so I didn’t eat at school; I walked out side to the only tree on the campus and sat underneath it throughout lunch looking up at the clouded sky from beneath the fern.
P.E. was a breeze I felt like I could physically do anything. We were doing the mile run, which consists of us running around the school two times. I ended up doing six laps with ease and time to spare.
That was the last period of the day so after that I went home the same way I came from.
The streets were shining in the early moonlight tonight; houses all open to what’s left of the twilight.
It has been okay weather lately: It’s been nice but it won’t last for much longer.
Right as I entered the house Ellie was there to greet me.
“Hay Zack! How was your first day at school?” I sighed at the question,
She frowned “It was that bad?” I was starting to get irritated already, “Ellie you know how school is, why did you even ask?” I snapped back at her.
She looked down at her feet with a sad face and said nothing. “I‘m going to my room,” I said to end the short conversation.
My room was kind of small and my bed was a mess; my room had no color to it, it was a storage room before I moved in to it so it’s a tad bit dull like most storage rooms.
I also had many shelves full of junk and crap I don’t use, and a computer that I don’t even turn on either because I have no Internet.
I usually go to sleep when I come home but for some reason I cant sleep at all, every time I close my eyes for a long period of time my head started to throb, but after a while I ended up falling asleep any way.
But at the edge of my conciseness I could hear someone talking, “he is the bey lo oed I can just feel it,” there was a different person talking but I couldn’t make out what he or she was saying but then the first voice came back again “why kill him? And yes I did administer the bite.” Once again the other voice mumbled. “Yes that’s true… but if we can control him, maybe we can…” Then I lost all comprehension and conciseness.

Blood Eye Chapter 3: The Awakening

Running through the forest with brush slapping onto my legs holding me back. I felt like I was running in a frantic stride through the forest from a hovering fear that I sensed coming at me.
My breath felt labored, my mind felt clouded in fear that everything was closing in all around me.
The space around me was becoming overshadowed with the darkness, creeping up on me, scorching my flesh, and causing panic to whelm through me.
Then as the dark consumed everything around me a light shown in the far distance that I reached out for, barely thrusting and squeezing my body out of the paining darkness, I stumbled a bit as I start a life-threatening sprint toward the light with the branches grabbing at me.
As I got closer the light it brighten causing me to feel the warmth, I craved it the closer I approached it, but the branches got thinker and made me stumble also making it harder for me to see.
I tripped after I couldn’t move any more from the both the branches and brush. It folded and wrapped around me as I stuggled. The dark wave flowed onto me and engulfed my body, as I reached out for the light with my free hand.
I was screaming and struggling to breath as the entanglement squeezed against my ribs, I took one final breath and started fighting with all I had, but the light was fading and I realized my yells were not coming out my mouth that everything was being indulged with blackness.
Then I was being yanked and pulled apart back into the blackest part of the forest, despite all my actions the enveloping tide of anguish and fear pulsed through me once the light completely diminished and was consumed by the blackness of the forest.

I roared awake in tremendous pain that over loped my body, causing my skin to crawl, and my sight flashed spots into my eyes. My chest started pounding with agony, gritting my teeth to stop from yelping my pain. I was shredding at my chest where the agonized ripping pain was; it was my heart, which was beating at high velocity that bounded in my neck.
I was still clenching my chest as it settled down some but not completely, the time escaped me sense last night so I turned my alarm over on its stand so I can see the time. Five ’o clock in the morning…I slept for only two hours.
Sweat rolled down my forehead as I easily sat up, it was hard to breath and my body felt as if it was burning. My thought came to hoping no one herd me after I woke up, it was hard for me to understand why all this was happening to me?
Why didn’t I run when I had the chance…. I didn’t even have a chance; she could have out run me or take Ellie instead. Why didn’t she finish me off? I wondered.
I sorely got of the bed and went to take a shower and freshen up for another predictable day…

I took a cold shower today because the burning was worsening. It calmed my muscles but the blazing didn’t simmer down, I kept hold of the railing so I wouldn’t fall down from a sudden pain.
After carefully getting out of the shower I went to the mirror to clean my face, but when I looked into the reflection I saw a person that looked over half way dead with snow-white skin, purple and blue around the eyes and dull black eyes.
Is that me?
The color of everything besides my hair was black and white, my eye really through me of balance; there wasn’t even a hint of blue left in them, and my skin looked as if there were no flaws, but perfection was showing slick smooth skin and muscles on my body.
This was growing a lump in my throat, as I took in the flawless body that looked sickly and drained.
H-how in the… I gasped
The surprise in this overwhelming changed through me into a rage that didn’t pass tell I got finished getting dressed and shot my alarm clock out the window when it billowed a ringing in my ear, and descended down stairs.
It was odd that I haven’t seen or herd Ellie all morning? Usually she would wake me up an hour earlier then my alarm, I circled the house a couple time trying to find her the gave up, thinking she might of obtained the job she had went to yesterday.

I was out of my mind. I was heading for the bench to find answers from Jennet about all this; I left two hours early so I could have more time to interrogate.
There was a quite breeze out side that helped my the burning blaze my deep into my skin to the bone, I winced at the pain but kept going regardless.
The air was thick with fog that made thing even darker then usual.
I haven’t eaten sense Monday and I’m STILL not hungry?
For some reason I reached into my bag and grabbed a baggy of jerky and took a piece and started chewing but spit it back out; it tasted of dirt? Then I grabbed the bottled water and tried to rinse my mouth but the water didn’t even satisfy my needs…
My tastes it… changed too?

The street lamp over the bench shown in my view as I closed the distance to it, hesitant at first but caught up the pace with new confidence, There wasn’t anyone near the bench as I proceeded toward it.
My mind was holding so much anger that it made my hearing ring and a feeling in my chest of emotion pain that was carving a hollow hole through me.
I stopped in front of the bench and stared at it with hatful eyes of despair, after the minute went by I sat down on it and folded my hand over my face so I could hold my feeling in,
Where is she?

“Look at you, you’re already falling apart on me.” Someone spoke from behind, I whorled around at that instant. Breathing in hard from the heating pain inside.
Jennet laughed with amusement, “Let me guess? More question or did you just come to visit?” she was leaning with a cat-like look about her.
She wore all black besides the crimson jacket. I then rose from my seat and backed up some. “I’ m here for answers.” My voice was cutting in and out like a bad signal on a radio.
With agile steps she rounded onto the bench, looking at me the whole three long seconds then with a motion with her hand she signaled me to sit with her. I slowly took a spot next to her, a foot of space in between us.
I looked towards she was still looking deep into my eye she then looked away as if she found something. “Can I ask a question first?” she then looked back at me with gentleness that startled me; she was more blunt earlier and I was sure if she had a question she wouldn’t have asked for permission.
I nodded for her to go on, she then smiled her pearly white teeth. “Have you ever thought that maybe you could be more then you think?” she then paused and looked me dead in the eyes waiting for my answer.
I turned away so that I could think strait, her starring and face were making it hard to think, “Why would I? HOW could I be more then I already am? What kind of question is that?” I could feel myself slipping on my hold with my anger that is trying to explode at this moment.
“You have a lot of anger bottled up inside you don’t you?” she stretched her arms and got up then spun to look at me again. “The question is a simple yes or no answer, you just think to hard on it. Loosen up a little.”
“Why are you doing this to me? What do you have to gain in it!” my heart was beating with my mind now. “Quit being selfish and ask the right questions or we won’t be able talk at all.” She countered with an annoyed laugh.
She was confusing me with the way she talked to me it seemed impossible to talk fluently, “what are you?” I asked in a weak voice. She smiled again with new resolve “now that’s the right one, I hope you figured out how to talk with out the obscured selfishness.”
She sat back down and looked up then came back to look into my eyes. “I’ am a predator of your kind that drinks blood, as you should come too know by now from your nightly visits,
“We have the power to change humans into being such as myself, but the number of us are small because of the path of transforming is so severe that it kills the victim,” she was getting even brighter as she explained almost like she had a load on her shoulders that she was finally unloading.
“By now you should be feeling how the transformation is right now, I’m actually surprised you aren’t huddling in a corner basking in agony from the burning effect in your room right now?”
The last statement was more like a question to me; unwillingly I answered that part “I’m feeling it right now… so how does it work?” she looked at me like she had know ideal I was talking about. “The changing process?” I broke the silence.
She shifted her position some and her smile twisted a little to reveal sharp perfect teeth. “It starts by a administered bite; when our saliva comes into contact with your blood stream it acts like venom and once it come in contact with your heart,” I could tell she was hinting that this was what I’m going through after she said “Your heart”.
“In about three to five day the heart stops and the reanimation with your senses change including smell, hearing, reflexes, and even the sense of touch intensifies.” this was all mind boggling to me, how am I supposed too feel about all of this?
She paused and studied my face for a moment, trying to search for emotion in my blank face. “You’re a rare one indeed to be able to fight off all that pain, I wonder…” the curiosity in her voice was getting on my nerves but I waited patiently for her to start up with subject again.
“Well anyways, in the end of the reanimation, part of the human life; most of its experiences and all past memory’s will be forgotten, there is a fifteen percent chance any of it at all will come back to you.”
She obviously was done by the way she stopped talking. “What happen afterwards?” my voice was monotone for these didn’t seem real and I couldn’t find the right feeling I wanted, I was excited and it was wrong that THESE was what I wanted.
Jennet looked away and then looked at her wristwatch. “You have at the least four hours till the reanimation starts. Oh- you have school today you’d best find a empty room and lock the doors…well actually I don’t even think that will work.” She laughed out a joyous chime; she back flipped over the bench and sped off into the forest.
I saw a glimmering object next to me; I grabbed it and looked at it in the shallow light; it was a yellow stone with a leather lace at the top and a milky white cloud weaving around in it.
I put it around my neck and let it dangle down in place, but as it stopped swinging it started turning color, too a blood red color and sent out a cold feel as I examined it again; all that changed was the color and its temperature.
I awed at it then suspiciously stuffed it in my shirt so I could protect it for some reason, it was like the burning heat that was keeping hold on me but I felt as if I was holding ice.

The walk home was aching; my ignorance to this pain was starting to crumble all too gather now, it would seem that all this time holding back all this pain was coming back to haunt me.
My life was ending and all this time I’ve been weak and succumbing too it with no regrets… was the anger holding me back from the full force of my feeling or was it because of my selfishness?
I was more confused then ever before, I just didn’t register with what any person would feel, was I emotionally incapable or was it something else?
I didn’t notice I was already home, I was thinking so critically that I lost thought of even going home.
Man it’s getting worse to move around… my heart won’t stop rapidly beating; it’s sucking the will power out of me! My thoughts still roamed as I entered the house.
“Hay Ellie are you home!” I yelled in a raspy voice, but no one answered. It was odd. It just wasn’t like her not to call after me when I went strait to my room when I got home.
I went up to her room too see if she was even there last night, the panic that was building up inside me was starting too show now and I could feel my heart accelerating even faster now making the pain in my chest throb and I felt as if my skin was an inferno now.
Her room was thrashed and there was nothing that looked usual in there, it was like some animal was thrashing at the walls and her bed was shredded up all over the floor nothing looked untouched, I couldn’t even tell what most of everything was.
But the thing I did notice was the blood everywhere and it looked as if it was done yesterday. This was too much, everything was turning red and my mind was straining to keep in control. My heart was hammering against my chest making me cringe and stumble forward from the doorway onto the floor of the room.
I lost. The pain was taking over every inch of my body and there was thunderous shocking in my chest, it was making the screams of agony become muffled by the raging beats of my heart.
What’s happening! My mind blasted the thought.
I was afraid. Not for me but for Ellie… I was stupid not to think about her safety then to pursue Jennet for answers… Tears started flowing down my face as I wept in horror, I was alone now.
The hollowness inside me grew even more open inside my stomach. Mom, Dad, and now Ellie… I quivered to the pain that added to my agony.
I howled out everything. My pain, sorrow, loss, and the anger exploded through my nerves. I was on my feet without knowing it I was destroying everything in my path in a rampage through the house. My heart was a high pitch buzzing noise now in my head and it felt like a hammer being smashed into your ribs over and over at superhuman speed.
I couldn’t feel myself doing this… My fury was driving me like a machine. The up stair rooms were thrashed and as I started descending from the stairs my heart skipped a beat, and I tumbled down the steps with a crash into the wall.
My heart was slowing and dieing out as it sputtered like old engine. My lungs weren’t working and a ringing sound fluttered in my ear, my vision was zooming out toward the front room.
There gracefully sitting on the table was Jennet and she had a huge grin on her face.
“y-you u-used my s-s-sister t-to as a t-trigger?” I mouthed out not having enough air to say anything.
She then she walked with a cats grace over to where my crippled body lay, she then laughed a laugh that sounded sinister. “You’ll be the perfect puppet.” She said through her laughter.
Everything was blackening like my dream and the cold feeling of emptiness curled up into my weak heart as it stopped.
The last thing I herd was mumbling, but the words that I did hear was “…poor Ellie she suffered the whole time you were gone…” my heart stopped with a final whispered beat.



I'm sure there's mistakes, sorry if you don't understand stuff. there will be more chapters in a while.

lol that would be awesome!

I finished my third chapter not too long ago so it has a few bug in it but ya i'm still editing my fourth chapter.

I cant wait too put up chapter five. it was fun making that one.

lol. did you have something simular to this?

lol I didn't even know I was good at stories till I decided to write one last year xp

Wow man, you already got editors lined up. Good job! Vampire stories are all the craze recently.... why not Dillian's idea of "Hybrid mutant potato babies?"

I don't see why not, as long as he doesn't get caught (OMG, thats a horrible way at looking at it)