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oPlasticRoseso Vice Captain
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 Posted: Fri Oct 17, 2008 1:03 pm
I'm gonna post some poems up here every so often. Please comment on the poems and tell me anything that I can do better!
NOTE: These poems are not to be used anywhere. Got it?
Listen
Listen!
You talk
and talk
and talk
and never
ever
ever
listen!
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Calling Out
No one ever hears me
But I'm calling so loud.
Please, why don't you
ever turn around?
___________________________
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Posted: Fri Oct 17, 2008 1:33 pm
those are the worst hikus ever! good words in shtuff, but that wasn't 17 sylablesQ!
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oPlasticRoseso Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Oct 17, 2008 2:07 pm
THEY WERENT ******** HAIKUS!!!!!
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Posted: Fri Oct 17, 2008 6:11 pm
I'll post my poems as well, ok? And also, no one is to use them either. they are mine and mine only.
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Obsessed
I'm scared.
He's becoming obsessed.
It's just as I feared
but I know what's best;
I scream at him and tell him to go away,
but what if I want him to stay?
No.
I can't.
I feel like an ant,
being observed through a microscope.
But this is more than I can hope.
What if he comes to my house to watch me?
What if he has all of my memories?
Being at home,
a place where I was,
a place where I should have shown up.
What if he tries to hurt?
And what if it works?
I'm scared.
I'm scarred.
Please, it's not safe!...
If he goes to far...
Please,
put him behind bars.
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I has to go for now. Yes, I know it sucks. Silent, you fiends!
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RaNdOm ExPlOsIoNs Captain
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oPlasticRoseso Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Oct 17, 2008 6:13 pm
awesome!
lol, u has stalker! =D
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Posted: Fri Oct 17, 2008 6:17 pm
Poem time! =D This is about a guy and a girl. See if you can tell who's saying what!
Acid Rain
Tears are falling somewhere,
I hope they are not yours
This acid heart
is eating away our love
You're calling me,
So I won't pick up
My love is not yours
Just leave me alone!
This acid rain
Destroying this part of us
Our innocence is gone
Destroyed by this unholy love.
I miss the scent of you
Your black mascara tears
You bleach blonde hair
And those black, black eyes.
I've kissed a lot of guys,
But none as good as you.
You form is soothing my eyes but
Nothing will dimish my hate for you
This acid rain
Destroying this part of us
Our innocence is gone
Destroyed by this unholy love
This damned acid rain
This holy acid rain
Saving me from your love.
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oPlasticRoseso Vice Captain
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RaNdOm ExPlOsIoNs Captain
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Posted: Fri Oct 17, 2008 10:01 pm
I wrote that when I was going out with alex. xp
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Night Sky
Just looking at the night sky,
makes me feel so high.
I can feel the whisps,
and whispers of clouds around me.
I spin,
I sprawl,
and crawl
across the whispy ghosts.
I sing,
I sail,
I wail
Of the wonders of the night sky.
I cry, and try
to climb higher
As I started declining,
My happy world deflating.
And I'm back.
But not to the clouds, the stars, or the moon,
But the crouds, the cars, and the loon.
The loon scares me.
He loves me.
He hates me.
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Posted: Fri Oct 17, 2008 10:05 pm
Life Is A JungleMy mind is jumbled beyond repair. I feel I'm in a jungle with views so fair. But there's danger lurking in the jungle ready to strike. And I feel I'd put up no fight, just let myself die. There's no time to attempt to hide, no time to fight. The only hope is to die, and leave this jungle, leave this nightmare. Life is a jungle. Life is a horrible, scarring nightmare. LIFE
IS
DEATH
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RaNdOm ExPlOsIoNs Captain
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Posted: Sat Oct 18, 2008 1:07 am
....so they were NOT hikus...?
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Posted: Sat Oct 18, 2008 7:27 am
...No, honey. I sorry. -hug-
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RaNdOm ExPlOsIoNs Captain
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oPlasticRoseso Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Oct 18, 2008 9:09 am
ur nite sky one makes u seem like ur on drugs! =D but we luv u anyways. (jk)
and could u comment on MY poems plz? :3
ps luv the life is a jungle
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Posted: Sat Oct 18, 2008 11:20 am
Thank you. Your poems are very good too. I liked acid rain.
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Stars
There are stars everywhere
Stars are everything
They have many meanings...
There are stars in our hair,
Stars in my eyes
As I look to the skies.
They fly!
They are up so high.
And my
heart is pounding
aching
to be with them
its astounding,
their beauty.
There's no faking
it.
It doesn't work if you try making
it.
They dance,
they prance.
In the sky.
My,
My,
My...
Heart aches
to be with them.
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RaNdOm ExPlOsIoNs Captain
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Posted: Sat Oct 18, 2008 2:48 pm
i havn't read lilk any of them
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Posted: Sat Oct 18, 2008 3:57 pm
F00K J00!!!
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Run Away
They're out to get us.
They'd wish they'd never met
us.
Us,
us.
Good thing we're together,
for forever.
Ever.
And they,
they'll never catch us.
No,
They,
they're gonna,
gonna,
Watch us
get away.
Run away.
Hey,
Hello,
Do you remember,
ember,
We really,
really,
loved each other?
Oh.
Now, do you remember, emember?
We really,
really,
hated each other?
Oh.
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RaNdOm ExPlOsIoNs Captain
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oPlasticRoseso Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Oct 18, 2008 8:41 pm
U DIDNT REAAAAAD THEEEEEEM?!
-shock-
i like run away :3
POEM TIME!i was ridiculously happy when i wrote this...
Glorious Day
Screaming and running and
Playing and jumping
What a wonderful day!
This happiness
Is all around us
What an amazing day!
Dry your tears
Have no fears
On this glorious day.
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