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xeroabyss

PostPosted: Mon Sep 22, 2008 12:44 am


Ok, so i've decided to edit this thread in to a little dimension for poetery, limericks and lyrics.
Don't be shy, any and all types are welcomed.

So here is my original post for the thread when it was just a poem (but you dont have to read it wink )
"In The Gothic Moonlight"

Beneath the benevolent eye of Luna
Veiled in the vagabond cirrus
I smell the night air,tainted of belladonna,
As I await my Dark Mistress
Yearning to fall prey to her gaze,
For the silk touch of her lips....
To set my cursed soul ablaze
With the sharp taste of her kiss

Through the hightening winds,I hear an opiate lullaby
As the clouds fade away
Through my hightening sense's,I hear a lusting sigh
As the shadows fall at bay
Bestial rage flourishes to corrupt my every vein
No longer man-meek,but beast-berzerk
Her lethargic song calls to my pain
Soothing the the madness with in the murk

An obeisant nod to a willow that weeps,
To show her a gift lie under
A virgin that sleeps,
That she may facile her fain hunger
Gracefully she caresses her mortal chalice in adoration
And drinks heavily of its libation
With eye's dead of lamentation,
My Lamia completes her ritual mactation

Her hand runs through the hair of my still molting body,
And I nuzzle my face against her breast
Frigid she is,of pale flesh only
As the scent of her loins will attest
My arousal,is second only to my restrain
The world i would devour,lest harm befall my inamorata
Gently I bit though skin,and her passion flows without refrain
Dragging my claws along her thighs,cold eye's explode like a nebula

Shrieking in pleasure,a sirens serenade to my ear,
She runs deep across my neck with her sinuous finger tips
Warm pools upon the wounds appear,
That her serpentine tounge may savor their piquant drips
The asperity of my howl intesifies her morbid jubilee
A garnet streak escapes her lurid grimace
An illuminat face of pernicious beauty
Her igneous smile bears fangs,relapsing in to chaotic bliss

To me,she pledges love eternal,and I to her
Over our wicked Eden pleasance twilight looms
This morn,our damned souls will be freed forever
In demise,loosed from these demi-mortal tombs
Upon my neck she places her last kiss
Her sullen final tear falls to my face
As I drift in to the abyss,
She burns in my embrace  
PostPosted: Tue Sep 23, 2008 12:01 pm


Woah, awesome poem! I like it. :]

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xeroabyss

PostPosted: Tue Sep 23, 2008 2:17 pm


Thanks much!
I was thinking of mayhaps starting a poets thread to see if anyone else writes.
I dig reading poems and what not.
OOOH!
Maybe i'll edit this one and turn it into one.
Pretty sure I can find some leftover radioactive goo lying around Gaia to mutate it!  
PostPosted: Sun Sep 28, 2008 8:23 pm


that would be cool
not very good a poems anymore

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xeroabyss

PostPosted: Sun Sep 28, 2008 9:00 pm


Well if I turned this into a writters thread, would you post anything?
Mayhaps some old stuff, or maybe try your gears at something brand new.
If you do, and anybody makes you feel uncomfortable about your writting, i'll flay, salt and grill them for the hounds. wink  
PostPosted: Mon Sep 29, 2008 8:27 pm


heh thanks but my old stuff is long gone i don't think i can find it, and new stuff will come if i get the urge

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xeroabyss

PostPosted: Mon Sep 29, 2008 11:57 pm


Bummer.
Well, encourage any other guildmates to come and show their stuff.
I would, but I don't know anybody here.  
PostPosted: Wed Oct 01, 2008 4:17 pm


i really like your poem, i may post any if i can get creative enough

preseaS


xeroabyss

PostPosted: Thu Oct 02, 2008 7:28 am


preseaS
i really like your poem, i may post any if i can get creative enough

Thanks.
Hope to read something(s) from ya in the near and distant future.
Don't be afraid to post whatever.
I'll read it all biggrin  
PostPosted: Tue Oct 07, 2008 5:14 pm


on the white wings of a dove
goes the thing i call love
you see i set it free
hoping one day it will come back to me.

now i watch the clock
listening to every quiet tick tock
wonder then if that day
i should've gave my love away

now it is getting late
and i can no longer wait
will my love ever return
or is it something i have to relearn?

preseaS


Abysscreature

PostPosted: Tue Oct 07, 2008 5:19 pm


I heart your poem presea biggrin

I love writng and take most forms of it
Poetry isn't my strongest but I love writing novels
PostPosted: Tue Oct 07, 2008 5:25 pm


thank you i'm not good with writting

preseaS


Abysscreature

PostPosted: Tue Oct 07, 2008 5:32 pm


I can do journalistic writing as I do in school
Creative/novel writing for the enjoyment of it and my humanities english class before I can take creative writing
PostPosted: Tue Oct 07, 2008 5:47 pm


preseaS
on the white wings of a dove
goes the thing i call love
you see i set it free
hoping one day it will come back to me.

now i watch the clock
listening to every quiet tick tock
wonder then if that day
i should've gave my love away

now it is getting late
and i can no longer wait
will my love ever return
or is it something i have to relearn?

So sad and abandoning feeling sad
Love doesn't hurt, it commits aggrivated assault!
Great little piece of writting PreseaS, thanks for posting a little.
Hope ya show some more in the near and distant future smile

Now...abysscreature, whats that about a love for writting?  

xeroabyss


preseaS

PostPosted: Tue Oct 07, 2008 5:50 pm


thank you xero redface heart
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