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Logan_of_the_x_men
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PostPosted: Thu Sep 18, 2008 7:31 am


So, Kit wanted me to post something original, so here you go!

"A long time ago, in the land of the Underdark, a young man was assigned a task. The Elders believed he was the one who could save both the Underdark, and the Lands That See The Sun. So, they put a tattoo on him, and sent him up above ground, to seek out the five friends who would assist in the coming battle. When he met the friends, he found out that Baal had been reawakened, and was killing and reviving humans to use in his undead army. The five friends set about to recruit people above ground, while Mage went around Underdark, recruiting humans. After a time, the leader of the base, Magilus, told Mage about a deep cave system in the area, full of spiders and imps. He said that several of their scouts had been sent to clean out the caves, but they had not been heard from. So, Mage went around the caves, killing spiders and imps, and rescuing the Elven Scouts. After a while, he came across a large tomb. He contacted Magilus and let him know he had found one of Baal's bases of operation. After defeating all the undead, he found a rare treasure. In the Underdark, there are legends that speak of lost Stones of Power that can grant those who hold them enormous power. He believed this treasure was one of those Stones. He picked it up, and felt a huge surge of energy. He also could tell he had a new magic spell. He chanted the spell, and soon felt his body heal much more than his old healing spell. He could also raise the undead to fight for him." That's all for now, I might post some more later!
PostPosted: Thu Sep 18, 2008 3:47 pm


*smiles* wonderful

Kitory_Guardian_Angel
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Logan_of_the_x_men
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PostPosted: Wed Sep 24, 2008 7:18 am


Thanks! I just love this! It's from a book I'm writing, if I get published you could read the whole thing, this is just a rough draft of the first few pages I have written! And kinda' revised a little, cause if I wrote the whole thing, it would have been a lot longer!
PostPosted: Sun Oct 05, 2008 3:32 pm


you jumped into the story to fast you just kinda forced the main bad guy on me and the plot of it if this is a sample then try and tease the reader into it make them want more not drop a boulder of it on em and expect good stuff im sorry but its good it really is nice idea just re word it is all im sayin man ok so dont get me wrong

Scyan


Blackroseray
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PostPosted: Thu Jun 25, 2009 1:07 am


Not too bad, a little rough around the edges, but otherwise, its nice.
PostPosted: Mon Jun 29, 2009 8:32 am


Thanks! This is just a small excerpt from a novel I'm writing, so the book will have a little more detail!

Logan_of_the_x_men
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