Short Story Dream Journal

[Leshirin]

Angry Master

A walk..that's all that she was looking forward to. A nice long walk inside the board school. 'So many people are here.' Nathjes thought while staring at the large groups of people in the hall. Her short black hair fell loosely from her shoulders. Her light chocolate brown skin matched her brown eyes. She didn't notice that she was about to walk right into the wall. Clumsily she bumped into the wall and winced while a few people laughed at her for not paying attention to were she was going. She hurried quickly to a set of doors that led to the gym but was stopped when a young man beckoned her over. Slowly she smoothed her hands down over her red sleevless tank top then straightened her black pants over her boots. Her hands finally trailed down to her back pockets as she aproached the man. "What's your damage?" She asked while tilting her head to the side, looking so curious and calm. "I'm just looking to have a good time." The man purred in a smooth voice. Nathjes could hear his friends snicker as they listened in on the conversation. "Oh, really?" She said while pulling up a chair in front of him. As they talked and talked throughout the night and got aquainted, things got interesting. Most of the people left to go home while others stayed. Somehow 'Jacob' had convinced Nathjes to sit in his lap. For a while he tried to flirt with her but she just didn't bite back...He thought she was very interesting and laughed when she didn't believe him when he said that he was a werewolf. At the last moment before Nathjes was about to leave Jacob sank his teeth inside her neck, finally deciding to claim her. Then he let her go...she was confused and disoriented. Her final thoughts were..'If Master finds out he'll kill me..Please don't find me...please don't kill me.' Slipping down, her back to the wall her eyes filled with tears as she saw her Master coming into focus. She hid her face from him as if that would help make her invisible. No..it didn't work...dang..."Come along little one let's go home." He said. When Nathjes got up she forgot about the bite for a split second and then to her horror he found it. "What's this?" He asked while turning her cheek roughly to the side. "It..I.." She couldn't find the right words to say and backed up against the wall , seeing his expression change from total calmness to total furry. She was so afraid of being hit..and yet her fear was confirmed as he slapped her. "Abomination!" He hissed angrily. She could feel mixed feelings swelling up inside her. Nathjes never liked to be hit in such a way. Her hair started to waver as if defying gravity itself, her head slowly turning, and then tilting up as if to show that she was proud to be bitten by another species. "What's wrong Master? Mad that you didn't bite me first?" She retorted, another slap that stung at the very ends of her core. She cringed at the pain and held her tongue to prevent from getting hit again. She could tell that for once he was angry..not at anyone else...but at her. She was 'perfect' up until now. 'Is this some stupid teenage phase?' He would probably wonder while walking her home.

Uhm..I'm not that good at writing as you can see...My teacher said I have potential but I still have lots to learn. sweatdrop I heard that my setences can be choppy sometimes..and I'm not sure on how to improve upon my writing. I would love it if any of you have any suggestions.