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 Posted: Mon Aug 25, 2008 6:20 am
<3-I am not the Only Cowboy-by PistGurl-Category-Games - Final Fantasy VIII-Genre-Poetry | Humour-Status-Complete - 1 Chapter - 458 words-Rating-T-Summary-Hints of shonen-ai : SquallxRinoa SquallxIrvine : The morning after the night before is a bit complicated in this poem-fic.-Disclaimer-FANfiction...
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Posted: Mon Aug 25, 2008 6:22 am
<3-UPDATES- -22nd August, 2oo8-Corrected rhyme issue.
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Posted: Mon Aug 25, 2008 6:24 am
<3-TEASER- -First Two Stanzas-The girl, ebony hair dancing in moonlight,
Put on her clothes and stepped from the room,
She sank to the floor, feeling used and alone
And she cried to the music of night.
He woke, early morning and ruffled his hair,
Pulled on some trousers and walked to the door,
He opened it nervously, watching the floor,
Dreading she might still be there.
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Posted: Mon Aug 25, 2008 6:29 am
<3-REVIEWS- -What About Them?-I love this poem-fic...but I don't know if anyone ACTUALLY understands what happens in it.
I would love more reviews on what people thought happened...other than her getting upset and him liking him. xD
Just so I understand how people are interpreting it.
Also, I always make lots of mistakes with poetry...especially when I make it rhyme! I either miss one rhyme or totally throw off the flow in one or two stanzas...any feedback on the actual build of the poem would be fantastic. heart
EDIT: It seems no-one thinks it's funny besides me. xd
I suppose I should change a genre in that case. >,>;
I find the humour in it because he thinks she's Irvine when he sees her in the bar...just for the record. ):
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