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 Posted: Thu Aug 21, 2008 11:52 pm
This is where I'll put my insanity, I suppose. I'm not sure if anything's amazing or not, but I have been published once...that made me happy. Tell me your thoughts and enjoy.
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Others More True
Sometimes it seems like eternity,
those long days,
those restless nights.
I'm thinking of the things I
should have done,
could have done,
and my own ignorant ways.
These days I know.
In falling I forgot.
what I was fighting for.
What I was dreaming for.
What some die for.
I forgot how to fight
and so forfited my will to fly
I now know my mistakes
and so never again will I.
I won't fall for you.
You can't make me.
I won't die for you,
there's others more true.
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For Sure
Sometimes, I think to myself...
Humanity, it's bloody and ruthless.
Amongst a truthless people, this is the truth.
How did we fall so far, become so wrong?
But for every demon there is an angel for sure.
How else do we come through this world.
There must be an angel,
There must be an angel for sure.
Throughout the twisted days, and twisted ways
there's always someone to lean on.
We just have to know how to say that we need them.
And eventually prove we know how to give,
and not just receive.
Proving that perhaps, just maybe,
We're not so ruthless as I was lead to believe.
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Remember Humanity
Once I heard the wind cry on a moonless night
trying to warn me of future plight
Yet in naivety I listened naught
and so was caught in malicious plot
Remember humanity
being caught up in hellish vanity
knowing what I know
and going where I've been
yet knowing too much
is a sin
Once I saw the sun go into hiding
living on the edge, denying
all relation to the others
even the just as heavenly bodies
I'd like to say from them I've learned
the lessons.
But I haven't.
Remember humanity
being caught up in hellish vanity
knowing what I know
and going where I've been
Yet knowing too much
is a sin
I walk a thin line
(it is my choice)
I walk a thin line
(an impossible voice)
It calls to me, waiting in the wings
This hatred, this greed
all consuming
Remember humanity
being caught up in hellish vanity
knowing what I know
and going where I've been
Yet knowing too much
is a sin
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Veniality
Death entangled time.
Bow before the useless ones,
the ones you saw as gods.
Go ahead, bow- where's your savior now?
I see the shadow of what you used to be,
and it saddens me.
Yet as you are now you cannot see
this grief.
You hate the ones who offer veniality,
Why don't you open your eyes to reality?!
Death entangled time.
Bow before the useless ones,
the ones you saw as gods.
Go ahead, bow- where's your savior now?
The consequences of this path are numbered
greater than you could believe.
Passion dies before your eyes
but yet, you cannot see.
The opposition, the tearing greed.
You hate the ones who offer veniality,
Why don't you open your eyes to reality?!
By now you see the light,
but by now it's too late...
Death entangled time.
Bow before the useless ones,
the ones you saw as gods.
Go ahead, bow- where's your savior now?
You hate the ones who offer veniality,
Why don't you open your eyes to reality?!
Your future is all in lies.
Your future is all in lies.
Your future is all in lies.
*note I am not pointing fingers at religion, if that's what came across, I'm sorry*
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Sometimes I Swear It's the Truth
Truth
What is this poison which spouts from your lips?
Sweet as rain, stagnant as spilled blood,
it enthralls just as it makes one want to run,
screaming.
You make it so believable.
Sometimes I swear it's the truth.
Lie
Lie to me. Make it sound true,
bring up the old and dead,
make them young and new.
Yet this I know you cannot do.
You make it so believable.
Sometimes I swear it's the truth.
And you make me so angry,
I want to kill you.
Truth
What is this poison spouting from your lips?
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Enlightened
Who shall reveal this facade
"We are the enlightened, bow before us"
Who shall call my name?
Set me free, take me home.
Nothing in this world is free.
How many feet are you willing to kiss?
No one in this world is free,
Our actions hit or miss.
Who shall reveal this facade?
"We are the enlightened bow before us"
Who shall call my name?
Set me free take me home.
Damnation is a story to keep the sheep in line.
Heaven is a glory many are denyed?
What is the truth? What is the lie?
By this facade we all abide.
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Posted: Fri Aug 22, 2008 7:29 am
Very good my friend, but also a bit ironic considering I can see how your style feels like my own. Just feels familiar in that way if that makes sense. But anyway, I notice you have a certain interest in the topic of "humanity" whatever that may be, heheheh.
By the way, insanity is simply a legal term XD. But anyway, as far as being amazing, I think they are. The rhyme doesn't limit, but rather adds a little something to your poetry....it tends to be forced with me usually. I rather enjoy your word choice in general. Great vocabulary actually...as a matter of fact, some of the words you use I haven't seen in such a very long time.
Otherwise, I'll think of more to say later. I just woke up XD.
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Kharne Bloodhowler Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Sep 21, 2008 2:53 pm
*takes slight bow* thank you.
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Posted: Sun Sep 21, 2008 3:09 pm
more stuff.
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You Coming?
Many miles to the next town
But I think we'll break down here.
It's inconvenient but we'll make it - somehow
And if we don't?
Well, we'll just die.
You can lay on the ground
You can lay down your life
But I'm moving on.
I'm not giving in
I'm not waiting up.
So I'm moving on- you're welcome to come with me.
The going will only get tougher
And the days are only getting longer,
But preserverance, dumb luck, and courage will get me through.
Don't you dare break down on me here.
You can lay on the ground
You can lay down your life
But I'm moving on.
I'm not waiting up,
I'm not weighted down.
So I'm moving on- you're welcome to come with me.
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