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My tears still fall
My heart still breaks
My nights are lonely and
my days I spend waisting away
As I cruz the streets under the star light and street lights
Running on roads I havent been on for awhile
I race back to yesteryear
And watch my pain disappear
As the sun rises
I close my eyes
And wish I could fly
Cuz I'd fly away from here
As I cruz drinking beer
I drown my sorrows and hide my tears
Because my tears still fall
My heart still beraks
And my nights are oh so lonely
Since you left me

A few times I didn't realize you were using slang and thought you had misspelled a couple of words because of other errors I saw, so fixing the spelling would help. I also like to see punctuation to help the rhythm of the poem. It was pretty good, but a bit confusing and I had to reread a couple of lines to figure out what was being said. I did like the last few lines and thought that was really good way to end it whee

I like the first half of the poem a lot, not sure how I feel about the rest. I didn't like the drinking and driving part, but whatever. I love the title, and really liked the word yesteryear, you don't see it that often.