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Wholefood Specialist Captain
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 Posted: Mon Aug 18, 2008 9:45 am
Man... I am the one who created this and I am going to be the one to start things off LOL!
First off, this manga is a short one, 5 volumes. The manga is about a girl Airi, and she wants to become a singer/dancer... so she joins the Actor School. Cliche. Even though it is not as predictable as it sounds the story is just a happy go lucky discovery of one's own "inner light".
However this is where I was thrown for a loop. Volume 2 chpt 2, The main character and another girl were competing for a debut spot coming up. BUT here is the kicker Airi, the main character, DIDN'T win... thats right DID NOT WIN! My question for you, other than the obvious ones, Full Metal Alchemist and such, did the main character Fail in the story more than just like a mistake but like a serious missed opportunity. Something that could have been life changing if they succeeded. THAT kind of fail...
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Posted: Mon Aug 18, 2008 4:02 pm
I've created about 5 good manga story lines. One of my favorites is Nii's Plan. It is about a strange cat-like creature in another world inhabited by these strange creatures. Nii has a single goal: find the charm weilders abd use their power to restore the world peace of 4 years ago. He meets many wacky allies along the way, like Limba for example, who can adapt to any charm and use it's power at will. However, he has a low chi level, so he faints easily.In the last volume of the series, Nii and the others will join together to defeat the current ruler who calls himself the "Moustache king APOCALYPSE". Nii is found to truly be the destined moustache king, and in his first attempt to deafeat Apocalypse, 5 volumes before, he was miserably beaten by him. He trained for three volumes, and got 3 new allies, but it still wasn't enough. He then has to persuade his enemies to join him. they face against apocalypse, and the fight lasts 1 and a half whole volumes. Nii then reigns as the moustache king, and if you read it (not done yet) you will see the others endings as well.
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Wholefood Specialist Captain
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Posted: Tue Aug 19, 2008 5:02 pm
Kaze Ashita I've created about 5 good manga story lines. One of my favorites is Nii's Plan. It is about a strange cat-like creature in another world inhabited by these strange creatures. Nii has a single goal: find the charm weilders abd use their power to restore the world peace of 4 years ago. He meets many wacky allies along the way, like Limba for example, who can adapt to any charm and use it's power at will. However, he has a low chi level, so he faints easily.In the last volume of the series, Nii and the others will join together to defeat the current ruler who calls himself the "Moustache king APOCALYPSE". Nii is found to truly be the destined moustache king, and in his first attempt to deafeat Apocalypse, 5 volumes before, he was miserably beaten by him. He trained for three volumes, and got 3 new allies, but it still wasn't enough. He then has to persuade his enemies to join him. they face against apocalypse, and the fight lasts 1 and a half whole volumes. Nii then reigns as the moustache king, and if you read it (not done yet) you will see the others endings as well. Hmmm that does sound interesting.... Does that have the plot twist I mentioned with B.B.Explosion?
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Posted: Tue Aug 19, 2008 5:08 pm
Well in a way, yes, in the first and second attempts, they basically just get booted out of the castle, and fall into 2 week lasting comas. LOL
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Wholefood Specialist Captain
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Posted: Tue Aug 19, 2008 5:35 pm
Kaze Ashita Well in a way, yes, in the first and second attempts, they basically just get booted out of the castle, and fall into 2 week lasting comas. LOL Then I will definitely look that one up!!!
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Posted: Wed Aug 20, 2008 6:44 am
Well, you see I made it myself, and the storyline and sketches are already in place, and I'm working on the first volume.
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Wholefood Specialist Captain
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Posted: Wed Aug 20, 2008 8:39 am
Kaze Ashita Well, you see I made it myself, and the storyline and sketches are already in place, and I'm working on the first volume. Even better!
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