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 Posted: Wed Aug 13, 2008 3:56 pm
Got an idea for a plot, prophecies, deaths, ect?
Post them Here, and I will read over every idea/pick those I like/tweak those that I may consider/or consult with the crew over ones that may be so so.
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Posted: Sat Aug 16, 2008 11:44 am
Quote: Darkness engulfed the building with only one ray of moonlight shining through a crack in the only window. Slim peices of wood covered the window,with a sliver of light escaping and entering the darkness. Twoleg trash littered the hard, bare floor. Cold flames ran up your spine every pawstp. Outside you could hear noise of monsters rumbling past. Silhouetted against the moonlight stood a muscular tom. His fur rippled like waves, as he waited.
Two cats approached the tom. The she-cat's tabby brown pelt was thin and limp, her ribs were visible clearly against her small body. A tom walked beside her, just as pitiful. His pelt looked to big for his body as it hung in clumps.
"You dare come back." The first tom spoke in his deep, strong, and cold voice. His eyes glinted with fury. "You sell us to the forest cats and they throw you out. You now come back, seeking mercy." Cats started coming from behind two cats that had appeared. The silently formed a circle around them.
The second toms eyes darted from cat to cat. His body trembled. The she-cat tried to stand her ground, and looked into the first eyes.
The cirlce of cats got thicker, making a band so great they barely fit in the closed down warehouse. The started to move in closer to the two cats.
"We have information on the Forest Cats!" The she-cat meowed. "T-they plan to overthrow you!"
The first tom signaled for his tribe to stop.
"And why should I beleive that? Why would they want this pitiful building?"
"W-we may h-have lived with them, b-but that doesn't mean w-we understand their u-unusual ways." The second tom stammered.
The first tom thought for a moment.
"Very well." He meowed. "I beleive you."
Both of the starving cats resumed breathing, full of releif.
"Since thay wish to take over our land, we shall simply beat them to it." The tom continued. "Tell them we have given up. Our land is theirs. We shall leave, and it is there's for the taking. But, don't tell them we moved camps." A malicious grin crept onto the toms face. Then he hissed. "Go!" To the two. He jumped off of the twoleg desk from which he was standing. When the pair left he padded to three cats near him.
"Our allies will need reminding." He said.
The three nodded, and turned. The followd the pair and passed them easily, and the seperated when they had left the building completely, going three different. To three different allies.
Bone jumped back onto his stand where he was previously.
"Fire, Death, Claw, and Bone will come together once more and see the destuction of the Forest!" He yowled to the tribe. Yells and cheers reached his ears as the tribe leaped to their feet.
"Our time has come."
Okay, so I thought about how this was where Firestar and all of them never existed, and I thought of the first plot, with Scourge and all of them, I thought maybe we could mix it up. Let me explain.
Prolouge Moons ago, thos two cats, Raven and Hawk, abanded Bone and his tribe and left for the clans, thinking they would take them in. They went to ShadowClan, where they told them all of the tribes secrets, where their camp was, and everthing. The ShadowClan leader threw them out, only after he consulte with the other leaders at the Gathering. The agreed, seeing as those rouges were the ones who often took their prey, and one of them was bad enough, but two wouldn't stand. Hawk and Raven fled, only to find Bone and also left, and took the tribe to a different place. He knew where Hawk and Raven had gone, and what they had told them. It took them about a week to find them, but no ood entered their bellies. (Hence their thinness) Explanation of the Scene Bone is trying to trick the clans to come, with only a few warriors. They have allies in different tribes, names after their leaders. Fire, Death, and Claw are also rouge bands, or tribes. All of them are allies, and they will be able to inheret the forest once they get rid of the Forest Cats. The three cats Bone sent are Bear, Sage, and Blade (Like a blade of grass). Sage is the only she-cat. Bear is going to Fire, Sage to Claw, and Blade to Death.
Now, the clans are going to take the bait and send a warrior each to the old Bone camp, as Hawk and Raven followed Bones instuctions. The warriors were there to see if they were actually telling the truth. You didn't think I was going to have the clans that stupid, did you? xD
Hawk and Raven are going to tell Bone exactly when the Clans cats will get to their old camp, and how many. The four warriors are ambushed by forty different fighters* from the rouge tribe. Bone joins the fight. They capture the warriors. Bone now takes the bait further.
Bone "These are all of my fighters. We are ready to kill you. If your Clans do not stand up to the fight, we will ambush you and kill you with out a fight. That won't be fun though. We like challenges, strengthens our muscles. It gives our lives meaning. Go! Tell your clans to be ready in ten days. We are. We will give you a head start though. Leave your home, or perish."
The four warriors flee, taking Bones message with them and they tell their leaders. The Clans think it is not much of a challange. Only forty warriors against the mighty of all four clans? They stand their ground. When their time is up, they nearly die with shock as Bone, and three other warriors just as big show up with at least five times as many warriors that they thought they had. The clans are defeated. DarkClan inhabits the Forest now.
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Did you think I was done? xD
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The remaining cats are enslaved to hunt for DarkClan. They take over the normal Apprentices duties so the apprentices have more time to learn how to fight. Now, Sage, The she-cat of the three who went to recruit the other three tribes, has given birth to a litter of four kits. Two tom, two she-cats. The two toms, Basil, and Snake, and the two she-cats, Falcon, and Apple. They grow up to be loyal DarkClan fighters. Apple befriends two siblings older then her, who were a kits when DarkClan took over, two of the Clan Cats. Their names are Mountainpaw and Meadowpaw. They tell her what it was like before DarkClan took over, where peace lingered in the air, the four Clans only fought when they protected their camp.
Apple loves to hear about the clans. Every day DarkClan seems more and more evil, and Clans are more and more welcoming. When she fifteen moons, she runs away. She finds a nice clearing. Then she starts her own clan. The Rebellion against DarkClan. Original Clan cats join her, including Mountainpaw and Meadowpaw, and even some DarkClan members who were against the way the four leaders treated them. When DarkClan hears one of teir own is leading them, they become very angry. They sought destruction and gained it moons previously, and now another one just comes up. Apple tries to restore peace, but they refuse. Only a few days later d othe DarkClan fighters realize they need the Clan cats to survive. They hadn't hunted in so long, they couldn't any more. They were starving, but Claw, the only remaing orginal DarkClan leader, takes them into battle. HeartClan**, previously, the rebellion, well fed, and strong, defeat them after a while. DarkClan is driven out of the forest.
The four clans are seperated again, Apple, deciding not to be leader, but just decides to wander the clans. She helps restore peace over silly arguments. She sometimes stays in the clans for a night or two, to tell stories to the kits, but never called one of them home.
Apple "My home and heart is in HeartClan**."
She replies after every time someone asks her why she doesn't stay in one clan. When she gets too old to wander, she decide to live in Fourtrees, where her final resting place lays.
*Warriors
**Or another name if we do this.
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