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 Posted: Thu Aug 07, 2008 3:40 pm
Young Ms.Conner
Young Ms.conner was sixteen years old,
Her heart to a lover had already been sold.
But her parents said no to her young Mr.Wright
So he and her planned to sneak out at night.
She snook out of the house at half past ten
and left a goodbye note written in pen.
They were to meet at the bridge over Shawn lake
She couldn't have know her life was a stake
But her prince charming was no where to be seen
To bad her senses were not too keen
For she held all the gold from her parents jewel box
While he snook around silent a a fox.
Young Ms.Conner was sixteen years old.
Her heart to a demon had already been sold.
Now Ms.Conner sleeps in the ground,
While that lying lover never was found.
((Please comment.. 3nodding And sorry if I spelled something wrong, Its not my strong point... sweatdrop ))
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Posted: Mon Aug 11, 2008 8:46 pm
Okay..it seems no one wants to read it.... cry
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Posted: Sun Aug 17, 2008 4:29 pm
No one has commented yet!!! It must be bad!!! confused
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Posted: Mon Aug 18, 2008 5:30 pm
Wonderful. Just amazing. It gave me chills! biggrin
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The Ice Queen Diva Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Aug 28, 2008 4:00 pm
I really like it!
It reminds me of a little kid's story, only reallyreally twisted...
the rhyme really works for you
and I like how it tells a story
(not just a rant about how much the world sucks and all. I see that a lot. I cringe.)
all in all,
it was really refreshing (^^)
and I love the irony of Mr. Wright.
it's amazing.
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Posted: Sun Jan 18, 2009 12:11 am
Wow, that was amazing. I loved the irony, too. I feel so bad for the girl. God, that sucks. But, keep up the good work!
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