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Posted: Sun Aug 03, 2008 12:37 pm

As of recently I've been experimenting with styles, here are the results:

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This was my first attempt at a centaur, I'm sorry it looks so bad.

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I'm in the process of getting a tablet so the line art will look a bit better in the future, I hope.
I would love some constructive criticism.

I'm also open for requests.

Posted: Sun Aug 03, 2008 1:30 pm

You have an adorable style there!

As for constructive criticism, you can't have the eyes be seen through the hair. It makes it kinda look like she has cellophane for hair. ^^;
Adorable cellophane, but cellophane. XD

:> But! I still want one drawn for me, if you will~

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Posted: Sun Aug 03, 2008 1:52 pm

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You have an adorable style there!

As for constructive criticism, you can't have the eyes be seen through the hair. It makes it kinda look like she has cellophane for hair. ^^;
Adorable cellophane, but cellophane. XD

:> But! I still want one drawn for me, if you will~

A lot of manga artist do that with the hair. It's just a style of anime =) very cute btw mad girl.

Posted: Sun Aug 03, 2008 1:52 pm

Thank you very much! ^^
I really wanted to avoid the see through hair on the bottom one, but it makes coloring the eyes difficult since I never draw the pupils or anything in the line art and the picture just looks off. . . I'll try to fix the problem in the future. ^^;
I'd be more than happy to draw one for you, please provide me with details or anything if there are any.

Edit: Thank you Rinws *forgive me if I've spelled that wrong. o_o;*.

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Posted: Sun Aug 03, 2008 9:39 pm

Those are very pretty! I like the style where you can see the eyes through the hair. 3nodding

Posted: Mon Aug 04, 2008 5:37 am

I like it, its really cute! But I guess it looks a bit messy in a way, what program did you color it on? Hopefully it'll look a bit better when you get a tablet. :]

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Posted: Mon Aug 04, 2008 11:07 am

Thank you Merily.

Noirotic, I know it's messy, I'm trying to improve.
I use Photoshop 5.0, it's fairly difficult to color with a mouse.
I used to color my drawings with Copic markers, but the scanner messes them up. :[

Posted: Sun Aug 10, 2008 9:36 am

I'd love to take you home with me and tuck you into bed,
I'd love to see what makes you tick inside your pretty head.

The centaurs' front legs seem a little unattached to the back. Maybe the shading is odd? And the pictures are very large. If you were to sell them to Gaians, people would want them to be smaller, so they could fit the pictures on their profile, signatures, ect.

And, about the "messy" look, I like messy! o: I think the messy look makes it more attractive.

But, I think it's absolutely beautiful. Especially the first one.

I'd love to hear you laugh tonight, I'd love to hear you weep.
I'd love to listen to you while you're screaming in your sleep.

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