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kresha darkblood

PostPosted: Fri Aug 01, 2008 7:35 pm




WHAT MOTHER TOOK
Most often when we think of mom
We think of what she's given,
The softness of her loving touch
A gentle guide for living.
A nightly tiptoe in a room
An understanding look.
But sometimes when I think of mom
I think of what she took.

She took a child
And taught it how to live
this life with pride.
She took the kindergarten tears
And kept them all inside.
She took the hands that longed
to hold her child and let go.
Used them to push her child
along the way
to thrive and grow..

She took sometimes to
do some other things.
Like sew and clean and
cook.
And never thought to ask for
THANKS.
FOR ALL THE THINGS SHE TOOK.


IN LOVING MEMORY OF DORTHY WILLIAMSON
PostPosted: Sat Aug 02, 2008 11:03 am


It's good. The flow of it works fine. It shows the love for a mother. I like it.

Scourged Angel


o0 Mystic Mama 0o

Rainbow Nerd

PostPosted: Sat Aug 02, 2008 1:36 pm


Awww, very touching heart
PostPosted: Tue Aug 12, 2008 8:04 pm


very nice poem. it flows nicely, and reminds me of my mom.

kashiena


AshoftheMidnightRose

PostPosted: Wed Oct 08, 2008 8:55 pm


gonk crying *is bawling* Imma send this to mah mommy!! gonk crying
PostPosted: Tue Oct 14, 2008 12:46 pm


It really feels like that came from your heart. It was very beautiful.

Plump Purple Gigi

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