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 Posted: Thu Jul 31, 2008 6:24 pm
http://www.fanfiction.net/~theoriginalmoonprincess
That is my pro my story is on it i could use some ppls fair jugment on the story so leave a comint. Its a sailor moon crossover with gundame wing
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Posted: Sun Aug 03, 2008 5:08 pm
I could only run so far as the second Chapter before I had to switch to something else (I'll read the rest later tonight) you still have a few spelling and grammar mistakes, even the small words count. I'll say some more after I read the other Chapters, other than that though I can say I'm enjoying it so far.
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