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Kizume-Chan

PostPosted: Wed Jul 30, 2008 7:37 pm


..::Summer In the Fudel Era::..
Description:
When Rika,Rei,Shiro,Mizuki,Meyri,Kisha,Kino,and Kyori were playing soccer outside of their house the ball accidentally fell in the well.When Kyori got it she got sent to the fudel era.The others went to get her.Eventually they were stuck in the fudel era.But what they didn't know was....THEY WERE STUCK THERE FOR THE SUMMER!!!!Can they survive the fudel era for 2 months?

Chapters:

1.Were Comming Kyori!
2.The Yuriko
[Will update this post later]
PostPosted: Wed Jul 30, 2008 7:39 pm


Chapter 1:Kyori were comming!

With Kyori
"Huh?What happened?"She asked herself then the light came again.

"Ok guys now that we got kyori lets go home"Rei said.

"suurrreee"Shiro said.

they went out jumped in and nothing happened.

"What?NOTHING!?"Rika screamed.

"Oh no were stuck here"Rei said.

"Well as long as were here lets go to kaede's village"Mizuki said.

"who's she?"Meyri asked.

"A friend of our parents"Rika said heading their way to the village.

~

"So ye children stuck in here?"Kaede asked them while they nodded,"Ye might as well stay here"

"Kaede-sama I've gotta question"Meyri said.

"Yes child?"Kaede asked her.

"How long are we going to stay here?"Meyri asked.

"Hmm....I guess about 2 months"Kaede ansewred.

"NOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!"The kids shouted.

Kizume-Chan


Kizume-Chan

PostPosted: Wed Jul 30, 2008 7:48 pm


Chapter 2:The Yuriko

After the scream in another place a gold spear was activated.

"Heh heh...so they return...and ohh I see my new bride to be..."a fimilar evil voice said.And when he ment bride to be he ment kyori.

~

"Meow!"Meyiko said.

"what is it Meyiko?"Rika asked her.

"Meow"Meyiko said.

"She's saying theres something outside"Kyori said.

Then Rei went to see what it was it was a gold sphere.

"What is that?"Rei asked.

"It is the Yuriko"Kaede said.

"What is the Yuriko?"Mizuki asked.

"A powerful orb child"Kaede said.

"What is it doing here?"Rika asked.

"You must take it to the Nym Forest"Kaede said.

"Why us?"Kisha asked.

"Because ye children has been chosen to keep the imp[XD gaiaonline's ANGEL IMP!Only a girl!XD]"Kaede said.

"Then lets take it home"Shiro said.

"But what should we name it?"Kino asked.

"How about Asuya?"Kyori asked.

"Ohhh it's glowing!"Hana said.

"It must have liked that name"Meyri said.

"Asuya it is!"The said.
PostPosted: Wed Jul 30, 2008 7:56 pm


Chapter 3:The Journy Begins!

"Come on guys were going tomorrow lets get some sleep"Rei said.

They fell asleep then it became morning.

"Lets go!"Meyri said.

"Yeah!"Kino said.

As they left they became hungry.They forgot to eat.

"Aw darn we forgot to eat!"Kino said.

"I have an idea"Rika said while pulling out a book.

"Whats that?"Kisha asked.

"Spell book"Rika said while flipping pages.

"Let me guess you got it from mika and aika?"Mizuki asked.

"Ah ha!Here it is!Service Food for our empty bellies give us a peanut butter and jelly!"Rika said ignoring Mizuki then PB&J sandwiches appeared.

"Mmm..!"Shiro said.

"Ha!Training with them wasn't bad after all!"Rika said glaring at her brother,"And you said it was a waist of time!"

"Fine I'm sorry!"Rei said.

"Good Cause I was about to take your sandwhich!"Rika said.

"HEY!"Rei said.

Kizume-Chan


Kizume-Chan

PostPosted: Wed Jul 30, 2008 8:05 pm


Chapter 2:Asuya,The Angelic Imp!

After a few days on a journy they decided to take a break.Then Meyri saw a water fall.

"But we don't have bathing suits!"Hana said.

"One reason because a certain pervert!"Shiro said while glaring a Kino.

"The other reason is some one will steal our clothing"Kino added.

Then Meyri grined.

"What if we still had our clothing on?"Meyri suggested.

"Good Idea..."Rika said.

"Then lets go!"Mizuki said.

~

"What is it Asuya?"Kyori asked the sphere as it floated,"You want to go to the water fall?Ok then"

As kyori went over to the water fall and climbed on rocks she held the sphere to the waterfall.Then it transformed into a flying shpere with two blue eyes and it's body was white,White wings,and a gold tail.

"What happened?"Rei asked.

"Asuya,She transformed!"Kyori said while asuya came down to her arms again.

"Why don't we get dried up?"Kino asked him because there was leaves all over him.
PostPosted: Wed Jul 30, 2008 8:16 pm


Chapter 3: A Dreamer

When they slept after they got dried Kyori had strange dreams...

In Kyori's Dreams


"Who's there?"Kyori asked.

"Heh heh heh...."the shadow laughed.

"Who are you?"Kyori questioned.

"You will be my bride or die!!!"It yelled.

"No no!!!"Kyori said while running away.

"You can't escape now!!No one will save you!!"The shadow said when kyori fell,"Now be my bride or die!!!"

"NO!"Kyori said.

"Then Die!!"It said while trying to attack her kyori closed her eyes then another shadow appeared.

"I Thought we killed you already!"The other shadow said.

"You guessed wrong!I'm still alive even though Naraku's dead!"

"Go away hitoku!"

"No not unless she become's my bride!"

"Then I'll kill you"

"Do your worst"

After the battle Kyori was saved.And then she was woken up.



"Kyori!Wakie Wakie!"Meyri said.

"Kyori!Wake up and smell the roses!"Rika said then sighing,"Fine I'll guess I'll just..."

Rika said while reaching for her tail and going to pull it.

"No!"Rei said.

"But she won't wake up!"Mizuki said.

"Then I'll just..."Kino said pervetedly.

"Oh no you wont!"Meyri said grabbing his ear.

After that Kyori woke up.

Kizume-Chan


Kizume-Chan

PostPosted: Wed Jul 30, 2008 8:22 pm


Chapter 6:Am I Alright?

"Kyori your finally up!"Kisha said.

"What's wrong?"Rei asked.

"Some one was trying to kill me!"Kyori said.

"Did you heared his name?"Mizuki asked.

"Yeah...it was hitoku or something..."Kyori said then Rei,Rika,Kisha,Mizuki,and Kino gasped.

"I thought he was dead!"Rika said.

"He must be still alive..."Rei said.

"Some where...."Shiro said.

"But why did he threaten you?"Kino asked.

"Well I think it was about me making him his bride..."Kyori said then Rei began to be annoyed.

"I'M GONNA KILL HIM!"Rei shouted in anger.

"Oh my....Rei don't go full demon again!"Rika said.

"Still I'm gonna kill him!"Rei said they knew he was beginning to be jelouse of hitoku.
PostPosted: Wed Jul 30, 2008 8:32 pm


Chapter 7:Jelousy,The one thing that won't Happen to Rei and Kyori

"Momokyo I have something for you"Hitoku said.

"What is it onii-chan?"Momokyo asked him.

"I have a new boy for you"Hitoku said while pointing to rei on his crystal ball.

"Why?You hate me having a relationship!"Momokyo said.

"But I need you to take him away from this girl"He said while pointing to Kyori.

"But Nick will be mad!!"Momokyo said.

"UGH!Fine wheres Shyo?"Hitoku asked.

"What do you want hitoku?"She asked.

"I need you to take this boy away from her"He explained.

"I'll do it!They boy will be mine!!!!"Shyo said while looking at rei.

Yeah First he liked rika now kyori!?Has the boy gone nuts?

~(Muahaha!!I wanted to skip to the delema!!)~

"Become mine"Shyo said to rei.

"No!"Rei said.

"Why?It's because of that cat!"Shyo said,"Then I'll kill her!"

"You can't do that!"Rei said.

"Then be mine!"Shyo said.

"No!Even if you kill her I'd still say no!"Rei said going away.

Kizume-Chan


Kizume-Chan

PostPosted: Wed Jul 30, 2008 8:39 pm


Chapter 8:The Cresent Moon;Kyori becomes a human!

After rei got back from the delema it was night time and kyori hid in the trees.

"Where's kyori?"Rei asked.

"She's up at the tree"Kino said then Rei jumped to the tree.

"What's wrong kyori?"Rei asked her and no ansewer,"Kyori?"

Then the moon light went to kyori she turned human.

"Kyori is that you?"Rei asked she nodded.

"Guys come down from there!Or we'll eat your ramen!"Rika said.

"Wait rei can you get mine?"Kyori asked him.

"Sure"Rei said.

"Hey that other ones for kyori"Mizuki said.

"I'm giving it to her"Rei said then went back to the tree where kyori was.

"Here you go kyori"Rei said.

"Thank you"Kyori said while asuya fell asleep again.
PostPosted: Thu Jul 31, 2008 7:31 am


Chapter 9:Kyori,Has been captured!!!

After that day they woke up.When they traveld around they were surrounded by demons.

"Give us the girl and we leave you"The demon said.

"No"Rei said.

"Then die!!"It screamed attacking him.

"Should we run?"Meyri asked.

"No stay here!If you run they'll get you"Kino said.

"Well let's finish this up"Rika said while slashing a demon with her katana.

"Kisha stay here with Meyri and Kyori"Shiro said.

"You too mizuki"Rika said.

When they splited apart Rei heared a scream.

"What was that?"Rika asked.

"It was...Kyori"Rei said.

"Rei go make sure if their ok we'll stay here"Shiro said.

"Fine if you scream you better protect Rika"Rei said as they nodded.

When Rei got to them he only saw asuya,meyri,mizuki,and kisha.

"Where's Kyori?"Rei asked.

"She's gotten kidnapped by Hitoku"Mizuki said.

"What?"Rei screamed.

"Yeah!When we ran he appeared and grabed her Asuya fell away from her arms then she disappeared along with Hitoku!"Kisha said.

"What!?"Rika asked.

"Were gonna kill that guy and get kyori back!"Rei said.

"But rei we don't know where he is!"Shiro said.

"We don't but maybe asuya dose..."Rei said looking over to asuya

Kizume-Chan


Kizume-Chan

PostPosted: Thu Jul 31, 2008 11:48 am


Chapter 10:Betrayed?

After an hour of finding for kyori,Hitoku decided to make and illousion[I forgot how to spell that word! >_<].

"Oh Kyori I wan't you to look at something"Hitoku said.

"What is it?"Kyori asked.

"Look Here"hitoku said.Then a vision of Shyo and Rei appeared.Kyori cryed,"I'm going to go now"

After he left he didn't knew that kyori could look into the crystal.After she stopped crying she wanted to see if it was over.Then she gasped.She saw Rei and the others in the air.

With Rei and the others(Crystal)

"Where now Asuya?"Rei asked it went to the left.

"Were never gonna get in time!"Meyri screamed.

"Be paitent Meyri!"Hana told her.

"Guys...I think theres something wrong...."Rika responed.

"What?"Shiro asked.

"That"Rika said while pointing to the mountain.

"Oh...SCREAM!!"Kino said.

"STOP PANICING!"Rei said turning left as asuya did.
---
'So...their rescuing me...?I'll wait for you guys'Kyori thought.
PostPosted: Thu Jul 31, 2008 2:06 pm


Chapter 11: Do Cats and Dogs Match up?

When it was night time in the castle kyori was having those dreams again.

"My My,still in love with him?Tsk tsk you know cats and dogs don't add up!"Hitoku said.

"So?"Kyori asked him.

"You can't marry him or love him"Hitoku ansewred.

"I don't care!!Besides there was a ledgen about the Yurikos!"Kyori yelled.

"Is that so?Tell me"Hitoku said.

"Fine as long as it gets me off of your back!"Kyori said,"When you take care of a Yuriko untill you get it to it's rightful home in a month It grants you a wish"

"Heh I'll make sure that dosen't happen..."hitoku said while in a laughter.


When Kyori woke up she still thought about that sentence...

'Do cats and dogs really match up?'She thought to herself.

~

"Rei wake up or fall"SHiro said.

"Don't you dare push me off"rei said while glaring at him.

"You know you act older than me some times"Rika said.

"Hey!one more minute then I'll be older then you!"Rei protested as Asuya leaned to the right.

"But faith chosed me first"Rika laughed.

"You scare me some times Rika..."Meyri said.

"I know!Thats what shippo said to Mika and Aika!"Rika said.

"Well there was a good and bad thing to you being with them"Hana said as they nodded.

"Hey what's that castle in that cloud?"Meyri asked.

"Mika and Aika's home"Mizuki said.

"Woah..."Meyri replied in an aw...

"And it connets to the Modern Era"Kisha said.

"Good after were done with things were gonna go there"Meyri sighed.

"But the problem is...that they change the spell each month!"Rika said.

The all sighed and then continued to travel.
---
Lol!This is like another version of the fudel fairy tale--Inuyasha!XD I laughed when I had that in my head!!Well all I can say is...the next chapter will be...When it rains I cry! XD See ya next time!

Kizume-Chan


Kizume-Chan

PostPosted: Thu Jul 31, 2008 2:33 pm


Chapter 13:When it Rains I Cry

When it's been the 4th day of serching,and kyori been trapped in the castle she decided to go outside.It was Raining.She began to cry but lucky for her there was no roof top or no umbrella.Then she heared faint voices.

"KYORI!!!"Rei screamed.

"KYORI-CHAN WHERE ARE YOU!?"Meyri screamed then rika screamed it louder.

"RIKA!Don't bust our ear drums!"Kino complained.

"Kino don't complain or off!"Mizuki warned him.

"Oh no...Kirara you'd catch me right?"Kino asked the two tailed cat then the other one,whitch was Meyiko.

~With Kyori~

'Those voices seem fimilar...'Kyori thought still crying but harder.

~
"Guys!Can't we stop for a while?"Kino asked.

"He's right Rei we can't save Kyori if were sick"Shiro added.

"Fine untill the rain stops"Rei said.

"Hey I see a cave!"Meyri said then asuya glowed brighter.

"Asuya is there some thing wrong?"Mizuki asked.

"I think...I think were close to Kyori!!!"Rika beamed.

"Then lets go!"Rei said.

"REI!"They yelled at him.

"Fine but if she's dead I'm gonna torture you guys"Rei warned them.

"As if!I've learned worse!"Rika said.

"And I've watched worse!"Rei declared.
PostPosted: Thu Jul 31, 2008 2:52 pm


Chapter 14:Am I Saved?
[Author's Saying: OMG!!Lol this one's longer then 'When We Met' *laughes like a mad scientist or a maniac* And I will hold you captive untill it's done!XD nah kidding but comment!!!I would love a comment!]

When they landed in the cave they saw some one.

"Who's there?"Rei asked then Kyori appeared.

"Kyori!!!"Rika anouced.

"Rei!Rika!Mizuki!Kisha!Meyri!hana!Shiro!Kino!Asuya!"She screamed then hugged Rei.

"Heh heh so you finally came?"Hitoku asked them.

"Yes now were finally going to kill you once and for all!"Rei screamed at him while he putted down kyori.

"Heh heh not if you beat my sisters first"Hitoku said then Momokyo and Shyo appeared.

"Oh no not you again!"Rei said in an annoyed tone.

"Yes sweetie it's moi!"Shyo said.

"I think she's gone coo-coo-crazy..."Rika said whispering to meyri while she nodded.

"Mhmm and she has no scence of style!"Hana said.

"But hana--"Rika began.

"Shh!She's up to something!"Kisha said.

"So?"Shyo asked.

"You'll never be loved"Hana said.

"ohh!give me a make over!"Shyo said.

"As you wish!"Hana said when she began to giggle....

After 10 minutes of them laughing hana was done.When she was they laughed.Hard.Shyo was bald,with make up all over her face,and her nails were badly colored.

"WHAT HAVE YOU DONE TO ME?!!?!?!"Shyo screamed in anger.

"I gave you my new attack,Giving your enimes a make over of DOOM!!!or...GYEAMOD!!!"Hana said.[lol the other way was the inistals.]

"Your dead!"Shyo screamed.

"But girl your style is too!"Hana said.Then she attacked.Luckily hana got her wepon and thrust it back at her.

"Ha!Beat that!"Hana said.

"Ok who's next?"Momokyo asked.

"I guess I'll give it a shot!"Meyri said.

Kizume-Chan


Kizume-Chan

PostPosted: Thu Jul 31, 2008 3:11 pm


Chapter 15: Don't Leave Me!

"Heh!This will be a snap to beat a human!"Momokyo said.

"You don't know what your saying!"Meyri said while she got out a rope and a katana.After 30 minutes of sowrd play it finally ended when meyri tied momokyo up.

"Ok Momokyo,tell us where your brother is and I'll spear your life"Meyri said.

"He's up at the northern towers!"Momokyo said.

"Good..."Meyri said.

---

"Oh I see you defeated my sisters eh?"Hitoku said.

"Yeah and were gonna kill you!"Rei said.

"Heres the deal,You give me Kyori I'll let you go,if you don't I'll kill you"Hitoku said.

"Then I'll guess I'll battle you..."Rei said.

"No rei don't!He's too powerful for you!"Kyori said.

"But I won't give you up and your parents don't either!"Rei said.

"Ok but if you get hurt I'll regret it!"Kyori said.

"Then lets do it!"Hitoku said.

Then his other brothers appeared

"1...2....3...GO!"One of them said.

As they fought they brought eachother down.

"So you think your better then me?Then your wrong!"Hitoku screamed.

"At least I have a kinder heart then you!"Rei said while doging his attack.

"you think you have it all don't you?"Hitoku began then shooted an arrow to Kyori.When rei saw it he blocked Kyori.

"Rei!!!!!"Kyori screamed then cried.

"You hurt my little brother!!!"Rika said,"Now your gonna die!!!"

"No rika let me do it"Kyori said.

"You think you can defeat me?"Hitoku laughed.

"At least theres some one for you to car,belive,and love is there for you!"Kyori screamed at him while his eyes widen,"You think your better then every one so you kill every one else that is better then you!"

"Why you!"He screamed.

"NO!I don't want to be your bride!I'll never be your bride!"Kyori screamed.
---
This Chappy continues on the next one! ;] it's almost the ending...I say about 4 more chapters then BAM!Finished!
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