This is my current work in Progress (WIP) and it's actually for a contest on DeviantArt...it's a pheonix character, but I still have yet to finish coloring the arms and add thewings. Critiques are always welcome also!
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Posted: Wed Jul 30, 2008 5:37 pm
i think your drawing is awesome! Critiques: The only critique i have is to color the arm (which you said you were doing) and the little goggley type glasses kinda get lost in the hair but as im thinking it seems best for them to be like that
~ i hope you win your contest ~
DanceRainbowRaver
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The Beatnik Beauty
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Posted: Wed Jul 30, 2008 6:37 pm
that looks great!! mrgreen love the coloring!
Posted: Wed Jul 30, 2008 6:53 pm
Very good. biggrin
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Posted: Wed Jul 30, 2008 7:55 pm
its a really amazing drawing :] i love the hair and the goggles X3
Posted: Thu Jul 31, 2008 2:24 pm
Thank you for the critiques everyone! When I have this completed, I'll update the above work and share the finished copy. ^^
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Posted: Thu Jul 31, 2008 3:59 pm
I really like the character design and his hair.
As for critique I suggest studying facial anatomy a little more. Yours is fine but a little more practice and it'll be great. Like the whole face shape could be changed, but that's the style of anime I guess. (I'm not fond of the whole typical anime face shape, but that's just me) Also his left arm seems to be thinner than his right, which shouldn't be the case since the right is farther away. More shading would be nice (But i realise it's a WIP of course).
But wonderful start anyways! ^_^
Posted: Mon Sep 15, 2008 2:25 am
she wins in my book. even though im a lil better she would kick my a** and have my vote in any contest