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Animefreak1192
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PostPosted: Thu Jul 24, 2008 10:25 am


Yeah i felt like posting some of my poems here too like Ed..hope you like them and tell me what you think.




I AM LOST
I'm deep in the forest
Lost in the shadows
waiting to be found
And brought back into the light
I am lost
I need your help
To find my lost soul
And bring me back into the light
I need your hand
To find mine and pull me back into the light
Are you my friend
Or just another shadow
PostPosted: Tue Dec 02, 2008 5:47 am


awesome!!!!!
love it!
for some reason, i like the last two lines....
oh, i also like how you used the title in there twice, kinda like you were reminding us what it was about or something....GOOD JOB!!!

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