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 Posted: Wed Jul 23, 2008 10:24 am
Has anyone read ametris up in here?
Okay, so Everan. at first I did a lovely job on making his personality constant. but now I'm rewriting...and he keeps turning from sensitive and smart to subtly pissed off at the world. And somehow...he's both. I don't get it, and I CANT WRITE IT.
Help?
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Posted: Thu Jul 24, 2008 7:28 pm
Well, we can't all have the same personality all the time. I think he's all those things, and it doesn't matter how he comes across specifically.
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Posted: Fri Jul 25, 2008 12:29 pm
IT MATTERS AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH
*dies*
it actually matters a LO?T. crucial to the plotline. He has to be nice enough so that Kamile loves him and thinks he's the best, but mean enough to make him feel bad later. IT's a fine line and I CANT DO IT RIGHT AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH
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Posted: Sat Jul 26, 2008 1:39 pm
calm down... you can do it.
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Posted: Sat Jul 26, 2008 5:51 pm
MAYBE.
Ugh.
Not now, anyway...and I hate not being able to write when I want.
But Sunshine is coming along....
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