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Immishsu
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PostPosted: Sun Jul 20, 2008 4:49 pm



Congratulations to entry number three, Lavi! As the winner she has a chance to choose anything from the Gaia Cash Shop up to $3!

1
There is no-one, so they say,
Who posts here more than ImmishFae,
But I vow that I will claim
The Post Queen title to my name.
And even if this great plan fails
I will leave here and set sail
To find her in the USA
And steal her computer away!

2
Fins for the random and confused,
To describe, weird has been used.
Muffins, our choice of snack,
Bite Immi's and she bites back.

3
Give up my crown?
I must not hear right.
I am duty-bound
To defend myself in fight.
Mercy I need not
For though your foul fish
Will be quite the onslaught
It will soon be on a dish.
Served with vegetables and rice
Even though I hate seafood
It will certainly suffice
And victory will be good.

4
A ninja is what I wish I was,
flying high, and all else ninja does.
Stars at the ready, dressed in black,
Always on the alert for an attack.
Swift and stealthy through the night,
Getting th bad guys before it is light.
Upon the dawn of another day,
I would have put evil away.
Protecting the innocent, hiding in shadows,
Creeping around at pianissimo.
Violent means would be my forte,
And it would help that I am short.
When the children come out to play,
No one would know I had saved the day.
Living by stealth, and stealth alone,
I could protect every home.

5

O: I challenge you sir to a duel
But I warn you that I am cruel,
With my fish I show no mercy
For only the best fighters are worthy
Of my scaley weapon of doom
Ahead your end will soon loom!
I ask you to consider whether
You prize your life or pride more, however
I may spare you should you choose
To defer to me and when you loose
Give your crown over to me
So I may be Queen of Flattery!




Well this is something a bit diffrent, so feel free to ask questions if you don't understand.
It's really simple though.


How To Play:Make up a short poem [4 lines or so, can be longer] about the person who posted before you, the guild, or any other random thing you think of. You may post as many times as you would like. Meaning you can make up as many poems as you would like. That's it.
How To Win: On August 31st, five top favourite poems will be selected. Each finalist will receive 1.5k.
Voting will then be open to the public to pick the grand winner. The prize for this is any item in the cash shop under $3.00. If the winner wants something more expensive then $3.00 we can work out a fair gold exchange for the item.

I'll be playing too, just for the fun of it, but I won't place myself as a finalist.



PostPosted: Sun Jul 20, 2008 4:53 pm



Contest running kind of slow
I hope someone posts below
Writing poems takes no time
And are easy when they rhyme

Immishsu
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Lavistar

PostPosted: Wed Jul 23, 2008 12:23 pm


User Image



There is no-one, so they say,
Who posts here more than ImmishFae,
But I vow that I will claim
The Post Queen title to my name.
And even if this great plan fails
I will leave here and set sail
To find her in the USA
And steal her computer away!

Yeah, got a bit random by the end sweatdrop
Oh yeah, Immi, do I need to do a contest?

x
PostPosted: Wed Jul 23, 2008 6:20 pm


Bleh,

Was never goood at creative writing...
With my mind racing and all thoughts fighting...
Bet that Lavi is WAY better...
She'll beat meh by a head-er-two!

[WolfVs.Wolf]
Vice Captain


Immishsu
Captain

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PostPosted: Thu Jul 24, 2008 1:23 pm



Onii, Onii what a sight
Stays up talking threw the night
Shining bright in all his light
My Onii is a delight

-grins- Of course you do Lavi.
Nice how they all rhyme so far.
PostPosted: Sun Aug 03, 2008 10:14 pm


Muffin's,Muffin's sweet so sweet
The Fin's family choice of treat
Mix em',mash em',throw em' at each other
But if you don't like Muffins.....don't even bother!!
eek

xx Havok xx


xX-Celcius-Xx

PostPosted: Sun Aug 10, 2008 4:23 pm


Fins is a great guild,full of excitement
muffins are also great,full of delightment >.<
i like to eat muffins,i hope you do to
but watch how much you eat you could go from 89 to 102
im just playing now,its more like 103
but if you dont believe me,just ask mr mcdonald and you will see
anyway fins,full of immi's and alot of faee
wolfies there to brighten the day,lavi and others yay hip hoooray
this is the end of ma poem,who wrote it ???
WTF i dont know him??ahhh ignore him
but if you do ill spam you with " I WIN,I WIN"
so give me money please please yup yup im in

PEACE!!

p.s:im not begging.....just ma poem lolz
PostPosted: Sun Aug 10, 2008 7:56 pm



Wow, I love all the entrys so far. Very creative. It's going to be hard to judge them. Best of luck to everyone! Remember, you can post as many diffrent poems as you'd like, just make sure they're in diffrent posts.

Immishsu
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Peecko

PostPosted: Mon Aug 11, 2008 2:55 am


I'm not good at rhyming especially in English cool
PostPosted: Mon Aug 11, 2008 8:48 am


Peecko
I'm not good at rhyming especially in English cool


They don't have rhyme Pim!
Thats just what has happened so far...

Soring threw the guild
Posts of randomocity
Yup thats Fin for ya.

Haiku!

Immishsu
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Birdie-licious

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PostPosted: Mon Aug 11, 2008 5:22 pm


I'm way too special...
User ImageImmi Immi Immi
Said "gimme gimme gimme"
Wailing all through today
As her beloved muffin was taken away.

xDUser Image
To ride the short bus.
PostPosted: Mon Aug 11, 2008 6:23 pm



But funny and sad. Wow. I think I've got a new favouret. >.<

Immishsu
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Birdie-licious

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PostPosted: Mon Aug 11, 2008 6:41 pm


I'm way too special...
User ImageYay!
<3

Happy, pleased, and joyful driven,
Immi is cheerful at the lengths striven,
By many loyal Fin-found friends,
To be the best at contest's end.
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To ride the short bus.
PostPosted: Mon Aug 11, 2008 6:53 pm


I'm way too special...
User ImagePlease don't tag me as a loser, but I really have nothing better to do, so I submit another poem. xD

Birdie-licious, I must say,
Is rather spazzy in every way.
Although Fin has not seen lots,
She pokes around many spots.
Spotty in mind as well as room decor,
She runs around screaming "more, more, more!"
"More energy, bounce, and play
Will induct me to Fin, keep boredom at bay!"
As she spins and jumps and wails,
She frantically pulls at her piggy tails,
Hoping all who read this poem here,
Further enjoy and are completely endeared,
To Birdie-licious, the cute and the loud,
Who runs around making Dr. Seuss proud.
To all those delighted, may it ring true-
Birdie is exultant to be part of you!
With gifts of muffins, rum, and other yummies,
She hopes to satisfy your eager tummies.
So alas, she must say audeu,
To each and every one of you.
For although you are all very nice,
She must take her tummy's advice...
And eat.
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To ride the short bus.

Birdie-licious

5,000 Points
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  • Autobiographer 200

Lavistar

PostPosted: Tue Aug 12, 2008 7:06 am


O: That is too awesome to even try and rival.
x
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