In my opinion, the first drawing you have posted is missing something. It could be a very interesting piece if there was more range of value and more details or well... not as much negative space. It is a nice drawing, but you could make it a lot better. I hope this gives you any help. ^^
Posted: Fri Jul 18, 2008 5:50 am
Thanks. Hmmm... I'll have to think something to put in it. ^_^