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jackdg

PostPosted: Sat Jul 12, 2008 3:39 pm


watching and remembering...
thine eyes are a pathway to thine soul
for they show the things that thine endure
thine life has been a gateway for thine love
thine love always shining down from above
thine beauty a radiance to be greeted
thine hands a raveler to the finesse

thine life progresses in such freedom
rarely being mistreated
thine walk has shone a beauty less forgotten
thine hands never less departed
thine eyes have shown the beauty of thine love

thine lips have told the time you bear
showing with the radiance that seems so fair
giving birth to the things you hold so dear
giving life to those you have shone the way
showing your love and dearest of all!!!

Love and life...
Oh their life is like a Red Red Rose!
Being born in the newly born spring!
Their life shall blossom in the everlasting nights!
Though watever the hardship might be!

Oh their life is like an Everburning Fire!
Shining brightly so everyone can see!
Shining a pathway for their lover!
For even you and me!

Oh their love is like an Everflowing Spring!
Flowing so freely and triumphantly
Flowing with such grace that only they can see
Flowing in a way that’s for you and me!

Oh their love is like an Evershining Star!
Shining radiance on their love
Showing the purity of the light
Which is too bright for thee!

these 2 i really haven't gotten to making a name for so if you can could you give me ideas?

Thine life is like a red red rose always blooming
in the nights of dark no matter the condition.
Thine vines lead a way to the everlasting light
no matter how hard the road may make.
You grow and blossom in thine own way,
shining in thine beauty.
Thine body flows in the wind in every glorious
way belying the beauty you have become.
You show this beauty that makes others turn away.
For in thine way it's too beautiful to believe.
You bely your beauty, you bely your mind but
in every way possible you can make the dearest
occasions turn into a greater notion of love.
You prove in thine eyes a glorious angel come
down from above.
You deny any notion of anger to pass by you.
You show great kindness to all and gain love from all.
You don't deny the love you shine by but let it
glow in thine glorious walk.
You can make the lives of others grow and fly.
You can make the glorious style of love show
in all and in that notion believe in us all...

here's the other one...

you shine in my eyes like a glorious light
you are the most beloved in mine eyes
you are the most sweetest in me
i want you and i need you

i believe that you can accomplish anything
you are the light in mine eyes
you are the shine in my life
i want you and i need you

i show my love in ways that you understand
you show your love in the ways i will
i love you for wat you do for me
i love you for mostly though for your love in these

you shine when you walk
you shine when you talk
you shine in the way you love
you shine to me in all above

i love you i want you
but to tell the truth
i know we can not be
for as you have said it would be our end...

idk wat else to put so if you want to talk to me about the poetry or if you want to talk about poetry i'm all ears and well i would like to talk to you to get to better know you...
PostPosted: Sat Jul 12, 2008 3:40 pm


yea this is some of them but i would like to talk to you people who like poetry so if you would would you write back so that we could actualy start to talk?

jackdg


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PostPosted: Sun Jul 20, 2008 7:24 pm


Ah, not too bad....a very positive outlook on the concept of love, though that last one is amusing considering it actually resembles a problem I had with a friend. Wouldn't have me because she didn't want a chance to lose me as a friend if something bad happened.

Anyway, yes. As for titles, I generally stay out of it. It isn't for me to decide. It is the writer's responsibility to create his titles. Hmm, besides, it depends on what mask I decide to wear for the moment...you could have about six or seven just from me....
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