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 Posted: Thu Jul 10, 2008 7:18 pm
Comment here on any of the stuff you see in the topic Josh's writing.
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Posted: Thu Jul 10, 2008 7:22 pm
I like your first poem. It is deep and insightful.
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Posted: Thu Jul 10, 2008 7:32 pm
thank you i wrote it about my ex girlfriend alisha. she ment the world to me
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Posted: Fri Jul 11, 2008 9:43 am
hey the first poem you wrote touched me I know what you mean with that one person means everything and you just want them to be there for you and with you through it all.
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Posted: Sun Jul 13, 2008 2:26 pm
thank you for saying that it means alot i really appreciate when ppl praise my work i don't think i'm that good a writer though, and i like to know that i connect to ppl and their problems
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Posted: Sun Jul 13, 2008 5:27 pm
that was really good i could tell that you love this person and would do anything to gewt them back and allow them to trust you. i almost cried.
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Posted: Tue Jul 15, 2008 7:14 pm
hey ppl i wrote a BUNCH more for my writings so plz when you get the time or are bored read 'em and tell me what you think their some of my novels
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Posted: Wed Jul 16, 2008 11:18 am
Ok I have begun to read Vampires. I like what I have read so far. It is very interesting and well it seems to be exciting. ... Ok I finished reading Vampires... I want to know what happens next!!! people and enjoying cliff hangers... u have me hooked on that one... If it ever gets published I would love a copy... when it gets completed...
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Posted: Wed Jul 16, 2008 8:29 pm
All I Can't Say. i havent cried in a long time. i havent really had emotions since my ex left me.
It almost made me cry, its so hard for me now to just let it out. i think one more good kick will allow me to...
thanks, its really good.
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Posted: Thu Jul 17, 2008 10:10 am
hey thank you all for commenting on my work i didn't think anybody would read my work let alone actually like it thank you alot really
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Posted: Thu Jul 17, 2008 12:17 pm
i love it because it connects with me.
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Posted: Thu Jul 17, 2008 1:54 pm
thank you have you read the novels yet?
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Posted: Fri Jul 18, 2008 1:41 am
not yet. sorry. work's been crazy lately, and my night class is taking up time too. i will soon though.
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Posted: Fri Jul 18, 2008 6:38 am
ya i know what you mean i hate my job. i do landscaping(fancy term for diggin swimmin pools razz )
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Posted: Fri Nov 07, 2008 11:32 pm
I love all of your writing! The poems really do relate to me. They're very touching and meaningful. Keep writing, I'm waiting for more
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