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 Posted: Wed Jul 09, 2008 8:26 pm
Basically I'm going to post some of my poems here. Most of them are depressing so if you don't like that you shouldn't read them. I hate criticism, so please if you have thoughts of how it should be changed, keep them to yourself. Most of these are about my ex-best friend who I fell in love with... Here, just read them....
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Posted: Wed Jul 09, 2008 8:28 pm
Our Place I close my eyes and can see the place we shared
Down that partial road between my street and yours
With the trees hanging over the row of rocks
Backing up to a cornfield that stretched for miles
We used to walk through that field laughing over nothing
Into the woods with the dirt floor and the forts all the kids made
We would sit and smoke, talk about anything and everything
For hours until the sun set and I had to go home
You would then walk me to my house
And we would hug goodbye before you watched me go
And from inside, I would watch as you disappeared
Down my road, heading home to be alone
I can still hear your laughter, echoing in my ears
And sometimes I think that you’re actually here
All the times we shared still make me smile
And remembering your face can still make me cry
I know the reasons you left and I know it was my fault
But sometimes I think maybe you didn’t mean for it to hurt
Maybe saying goodbye was hard for you too, and I’m not alone
Perhaps one day the phone will ring and I’ll hear your voice
But reality and time have made two things so very clear
You never cared and you’re not ever coming back
I was nothing but naive, a girl who loved too easily
Your favorite word –– pathetic –– can still make me flinch
And your memory still haunts me, I live a waking nightmare
There is a forever lingering feeling of nostalgia
And the ever-present pain that replaced the numbness
None of which has eased even slightly with the years
Your name can bring tears to my eyes and make my heart ache
And everyone around me knows better than to talk about you
They don’t mention the things they think I don’t know
And I don’t mention how their efforts at hiding them are in vain
I wish I could visit our place again because I know it’ll be the same
That’s the only thing remaining of us that hasn’t been torn to shreds
All my notes I’m sure you’ve burnt and the one you wrote me is lost
My memory is fading and you’ve already forgotten about me
So if I could be in that place once more, where you held me as I cried
Where we laughed and talked and shared our lives with each other
I could find the relief I’ve been looking for and finally be able
To stop holding on to your memory with the false hope you’ll return
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Posted: Wed Jul 09, 2008 8:32 pm
My Best Friend
I tell you I love you
You return the reply
In your perfect voice
And I know you don’t lie
We grew up together
Spent countless years
Talking and laughing
And confessing our fears
You know me better
Than anyone could
You got a lot closer
Than I thought you would
The love we share is stronger
Than any I’ve felt
Every time you look at me
I can feel my insides melt
My heart skips a beat
As you play a melody
And sing one of your songs
Especially for me
You know that I
Completely adore you
You know that I’d
Do anything for you
We do things together
That I’ve never done
We sit and admire
The setting sun
Ending another perfect
Day spent with you
You’re my best friend
You know it’s true
We’ve never kissed
And we barely hug
But when I see you
There’s that familiar tug
Pulling at my heart
Making me smile
At how time flies
And the way it’s compiled
Into minutes, then seconds
That change to hours and days
And weeks to months then to years
While slowly, memories fade
But so long as you stay
It matters not that I forget
Because you’ll be here
To remind and forgive
So once again I
Tell you I love you
And I know you realize
That it’s completely true((This one actually is about my best friend Tyler. It's actually not sad...))
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Posted: Wed Jul 09, 2008 9:12 pm
I love the poems! Your poems reached out to me and I felt the same way about my past ex. Keep it up and I'm looking forward to reading more. ^_^
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For3v3r_Lost Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Jul 10, 2008 12:03 pm
HEY friend from RP who is my gay-boi's lover! blaugh
Anyway... wow. I love reading your poetry. I feel for you and I understand. I can't wait to read more!
Keep writing! heart
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Posted: Mon Jul 21, 2008 8:03 am
awww...sweet, sad, but sweet...I love them!!!
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