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 Posted: Tue Jun 24, 2008 3:26 pm
I'll give you all the nails you need,
Cover me in gasoline,
and the punchline to the joke is asking,
Someone save us,
And will you take these sins,
and wipe away those tears of blood,
and take me to the only safe place,
hidden in these lonely hills,
sitting on the cathedral steps,
spitting out the blood and screaming,
HEAVEN HELP US,
and take us to this place,
this haven,
no pain,
but all this blood is making me sick,
and take this knife,
take my heart,
leave no trace behind,
and go away,
go away as fast as you can,
I'll forgive you for the pain you caused,
but you have to disappear,
and take everything with you,
leave no trace, leave no hope,
and take my soul with you when you go,
Cause i'm gonna love you forever.
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Posted: Sat Jun 28, 2008 7:48 am
It really pulls at the emotions, and I think it's very well written. What was your inspiration?
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Posted: Sat Jun 28, 2008 5:12 pm
uhh...a mix between music and general life....what most people wont get is that i mixed some lyrics out of my fav song into the poem...they i wrote it...the lyrics work and it's not plagerism.....but it is meant to be inspiring....i try to take what i am feeling and put it into the best words ever...it's what i do....on top of....I am an emotional person....so that always helps!
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Posted: Sun Jun 29, 2008 6:42 pm
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Posted: Sat Jul 12, 2008 5:10 pm
*takes a bow* thank you! thank you! lolz! ok...that was a bit much....I don't like being cocky about my work...I am not big headed and don't want to seem as such!
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Posted: Sun Jul 13, 2008 7:07 pm
haha, no worries, you're not being cocky =)
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Posted: Tue Jul 15, 2008 12:59 pm
YAH!!! You make me feel good! lolz!
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