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The Year is 2012.

A young girl named Feranis is transferred 2000 years in to the future were she finds her self in a mech bunker. there are a lot of loud noises going around the area and the place she is in is shaking uncontrollably. within the darkness of the bunker she sees a robot named the "E.X Valkyrie" and something insider her tells her to get in. Strangely enough, she doesn’t question it and gets in. it activates on its on and they are launched into space.

they are now in space and a epic battle is going on but with out much work, Feranis makes quick work of the attackers.
after the battle, fellow pilots and scientist rush her to a lab and starts interrogating her. She is totally silent. The biggest mystery was why was a little girl able to operate a robot that not even a ace pilot could manage. After a while, they figure they might as well let her stay on board for a while.
The reason faranis is quiet is because she witnessed something horrible. For every person she killed in battle, she saw there life flash away with them. the ones they loved and how she took that away. in that battle, she uncontrollably killed dozens of enemies.

a day passes and the ship is under attack again (the story takes place on a battle ship btw for now)

she stays in her room the whole time just spaced out when the commander of the ship calls for her to got to the bridge. she just lays there and eventually, soldier come to escort her to the commander.

He asks her to go into battle but she refuses. He then puts on the battle monitor and shows her that if she doesn’t go out there, the battle would drag out and even more lives would be lost. Hesitantly she agrees.

er... and that’s it for now. Sorry if it sucks to badly. I've personally wanted to do a story like this for a while. but if the guild wants to use it go on ahead.

er and about the futuristic war, In 2013 there was a apocalyptic natural disaster that killed out 2/3 of all life on earth. Even after that, the earth was left a barren wasteland. With what materials were left, scientist built several space colonies for the rest of life can live else were but one thousand years later, four of the seven colonies suddenly stopped functioning. The reminding colonies blame each other for what happened and for the last thousand years, they have been bickering. Now a major war is about to start but many feel this all happened through a act of god. that he wants humans extinct for all there sins and that all that has happened is because of that.


Unknown to them, one girl from humanities past will lead to the salvation of all of them....

Feranis in pilot uniform

Thanks ^_^

Sorry I jumped the gun, however, I always thought it was basic plot, characters, everything else and then the completion of the plot.

Its hard to make characters if we don’t know what the point of the story is.

Sorry if I seem selfish. xp

your Ideas are good. They work.

I also see when the similarity lies with xenosaga and this game, however the similarities end there. (I played the first one and beat the third. the end made me sad crying )

the concept of the character is realism and emotion. not saying she’s a emo b***h but like more realistic than the average shonen mech protagonist.

she agrees to fight later on not to bring peace to the worlds. she feels alone being a stranger in a new world and she feels empty. the only thing that makes her feel alive is seeing the flash of others lives as she kills them. she becomes a sort of distorted battle junkie. towards the end of the game, the war finally ends and while this is good and all, she no longer gets her fix so during a peace keeping conference where all the colonies are aligned she gets in her mech and unleashes her whole arsenal of weapons on them destroying all of them. the story ends with her sitting in the cockpit dazed as all the lives of her victims flash before her.


is that too dark?

cool, thanks.

mechs have been used way to many times look in the store there are all these games with hightech stuff mechs everything that has technology why not just make a game where the main character is stuck in wars in and out of the game

dont make all the characters have mechs and if we do use mechs make mech suits like armor kinda like samus only way different in weapons because i mean come on all characters being mechs is like i said before kinda...... overused make mecharmor kinda mech but not mech at the same time has the ability of mechs but is a human inside

and if we do use mechs mechsuites because those are kinda never used also one or two mechsuit users if anything

i know were your getting at and its a good idea but mechs or lots of mechs and only mechs have been used to much why not if using mechs and please no space game thats been overused also but if using mechs make it mechsuits like on metroid but only different models of mech suites instead of just mechs