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So I just had my heart broken now what...

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Dre_aka_Nova

PostPosted: Sun Jun 22, 2008 5:14 pm


I feel like writing a peom. So what other place to do that than here..... no one comes here.... So yeah.. Here it goes.


What is this I am feeling
Pain. Hate. Solitude. Regret.
Maybe its all of them.
it just hurts.

School is bad
Everyone laughs at me.
Everyone told me it was gonna happen
Evn my own friends
So I did not listen.
Now I pay the price.

Why me.
Why now.
Why at all
Why won't it go away.
Why can I just leave it alone.
Why me

So now what
Do I talk to her?
Do I hit her?
Do I go out with her best friend?
So many questions
No answers
So now what

In the End
This still hurts
Though I dont know what to do
Ah well
Nothing to do now but move on
PostPosted: Thu Jun 26, 2008 12:07 pm


Now looking back. I am realizing how bad tis poem is. Ah well I am not a writer so I really don't mind submitting bad poems for the world to see....Or nobody. lol. This poem is funny because looking back I cannot believe I wrote that.

Dre_aka_Nova


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PostPosted: Thu Jul 03, 2008 12:44 pm


Actually, It is quite good. Poetry is about expressing ones feelings, no matter what those feelings are. It doesn't follow the normal writing guidelines.
It is up to the writer to define whether it is good or bad. If you say that it is bad, then that is what you think. Other people might think otherwise. I think that it is a good poem. It expresses your feelings of hurt and regret. It is your own unique style or writing.
PostPosted: Thu Jul 03, 2008 2:44 pm


Little-Lenah
Actually, It is quite good. Poetry is about expressing ones feelings, no matter what those feelings are. It doesn't follow the normal writing guidelines.
It is up to the writer to define whether it is good or bad. If you say that it is bad, then that is what you think. Other people might think otherwise. I think that it is a good poem. It expresses your feelings of hurt and regret. It is your own unique style or writing.

True, I agree! I really like your poem. It made me feel emotional.

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Dre_aka_Nova

PostPosted: Fri Jul 04, 2008 9:15 am


Thank you. That made me feel better. Though I really was not expecting aynone to actually read it. Or maybe that is why I post it there. Well all in all thanks again.
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