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aigis_raiden

PostPosted: Mon Jun 02, 2008 1:32 pm


Feel free to try to put music to my lyrics (and if you happen to record it and put it on youtube or some other site, please post the link.) Let the music begin! (My lyrics are in indigo, chorus is bolded)
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Liar
Madness
PostPosted: Mon Jun 02, 2008 1:47 pm


Liar
Such sweet words from such a dark soul
Your eyes are lead, your heart is coal
Let me see through the barrier
Liar


You sing words of praise to all who will listen
You try to delve into their souls
And when you're there you claim all that you can
Before leaving them empty

You fabricate lives for yourself
All masks for who you really are
You're nothing but a monster I can tell
Nothing but a liar

You don't know who you are anymore

Such sweet words from such a dark soul
Your eyes are lead, your heart is coal
Let me see through the barrier
Liar


You lost yourself ages ago
To the lies that you created
Now do you regret it?
Will you forget it?

You don't know who you are anymore

Such sweet words from such a dark soul
Your eyes are lead, your heart is coal
Let me see through the barrier
Liar


I know the truth
Of who you really are
Have you forgotten
Under the stars

I know the truth
That you have forgotten
Will you erase this
Or will you leave forgotten?


Such cunning words from such a lost soul
Your eyes have bled, your heart is cold
Now you see through the barrier
Liar
 

aigis_raiden


LunarHybrid
Captain

PostPosted: Wed Jun 04, 2008 1:12 pm


Wow I love it! Great job w/ the rhyme scheme and keeping the general theme of the lyrics together.
PostPosted: Fri Jun 06, 2008 12:45 pm


Thanks! Here's another one:

Madness
Darkness consumes us
As we fall to the ground
Our hearts are bleeding
As we all go 'round


This wheel of madness spins us all
We cannot tell who we are anymore
As we all go to the ground and fall
We don't know what's in store

I see through everything, everyone lies
Deception bleeds through our souls
And as one by one everyone dies
Our life speeds past and rolls

Darkness consumes us
As we fall to the ground
Our hearts are bleeding
As we all go 'round


From birth we are hiding
The truth from our eyes
Trying to make perfection
From all these lies

Darkness consumes us
As we fall to the ground
Our hearts are bleeding
As we all go 'round


Do you know the truth?
Or do you sink in your lies?
Do you know the truth?
Or do you think everyone flies?

Darkness consumes us
As we fall to the ground
Our hearts are bleeding
As we all go 'round


Darkness consumes us
As we fall to the ground
Our hearts are bleeding
As we all go 'round


As we all go 'round
 

aigis_raiden


Scazarith
Crew

PostPosted: Tue Jul 01, 2008 8:19 pm


Wow, aigis. You're a really great song writer! ^.^ Theres nothing wrong with it, but I was just wondering out of personal curiosity: Why do you start the song with your chorus instead of leading with some lyrics?

Oh, I really like how you ended the second one "Madness". I can just hear the music fading out softly after the lyrics end. (I'm a big Dave Matthews Band fan so I'm used to really great instrumental songs)
PostPosted: Tue May 26, 2009 5:32 am


I really loved them both! You are a very talented songwriter! smile My favorite part of Liar was the chorus and the bit at the end, and my favorite part of Madness was:

From birth we are hiding
The truth from our eyes
Trying to make perfection
From all these lies

Darkness consumes us
As we fall to the ground
Our hearts are bleeding
As we all go 'round


Do you know the truth?
Or do you sink in your lies?
Do you know the truth?
Or do you think everyone flies?

Darkness consumes us
As we fall to the ground
Our hearts are bleeding
As we all go 'round


Keep writing! & God bless!
~Hillary

Sings4GodsGlory

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