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My eyes are spinning, my heart is pounding
What you just said is too compounding
You do love me but I don't feel the same
And yet my mind is slowly turning insane

Love or hate, I can not decide
What I feel towards your burning pride
Your open heart, and your perfect soul
What I feel I can't extol

My eyes are spinning, my heart is pounding
What you just said is too compounding
You do love me but I don't feel the same
And yet my mind is slowly turning insane

Love or hate, I can not decide
What I feel towards your burning pride
Your open heart, and your perfect soul
What I feel I can't extol

A tortured minion to do your bidding,
Upon this wrist I do the digging,
Deeper and deeper, this love bleeds
Not a single care for this souls needs.

I can't decide what to do
You don't always think things through
I don't want to risk my heart
To this new and hopeful start

Will you always be beside
Me, my choices, and my pride
Or will you leave me behind
After my heart to you I've signed?

(ooc: Thank you!)

My eyes are spinning, my heart is pounding
What you just said is too compounding
You do love me but I don't feel the same
And yet my mind is slowly turning insane

Love or hate, I can not decide
What I feel towards your burning pride
Your open heart, and your perfect soul
What I feel I can't extol

A tortured minion to do your bidding,
Upon this wrist I do the digging,
Deeper and deeper, this love bleeds
Not a single care for this souls needs.

I can't decide what to do
You don't always think things through
I don't want to risk my heart
To this new and hopeful start

Will you always be beside
Me, my choices, and my pride
Or will you leave me behind
After my heart to you I've signed?

A love forever meant to bind
Two souls in a love so blind
To the curse of lie upon lie;
Shall I then sit here and die?

Yet whom among this earth has
Felt pure bliss and spoken "alas!"
From a love so true, an exotic
Sensation only to make you sick!

Truth upon truth or lie upon lie
Will you sing the first words or be so sly?
I will fall if you're disloyal
Never dreaming of you in toil

Now you must answer, my friend
Or this chance shall come to an end
For my heart is slowing down
Rotting away in this town.

My eyes are spinning, my heart is pounding
What you just said is too compounding
You do love me but I don't feel the same
And yet my mind is slowly turning insane

Love or hate, I can not decide
What I feel towards your burning pride
Your open heart, and your perfect soul
What I feel I can't extol

A tortured minion to do your bidding,
Upon this wrist I do the digging,
Deeper and deeper, this love bleeds
Not a single care for this souls needs.

I can't decide what to do
You don't always think things through
I don't want to risk my heart
To this new and hopeful start

Will you always be beside
Me, my choices, and my pride
Or will you leave me behind
After my heart to you I've signed?

A love forever meant to bind
Two souls in a love so blind
To the curse of lie upon lie;
Shall I then sit here and die?

Yet whom among this earth has
Felt pure bliss and spoken "alas!"
From a love so true, an exotic
Sensation only to make you sick!

Truth upon truth or lie upon lie
Will you sing the first words or be so sly?
I will fall if you're disloyal
Never dreaming of you in toil

Now you must answer, my friend
Or this chance shall come to an end
For my heart is slowing down
Rotting away in this town.

With this foundation of lies
And that look in your eyes
I can still hear the cries
As my heart slowly dies.

But to martyr my happiness
To ensure your bliss
Would be the very end of this
A relationship based on lies and piss.

My mind is dying, my eyes are crying
Do you love me or are you simply lying
To know this much would be all that I need
To make my choices away from your greed.

Now my life has turned inane
As my mind is turning insane
So many choices, so little time
What do you do when your mind doesn't rhyme?