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 Posted: Tue May 06, 2008 12:58 pm
Caveman Era Dinosaurs and humans live at this era, tribes of man are spread throughout of the lands as the Black Flame is curious to see as Human takes it's first steps throughout Earth 6,500,000 years before evolution reaches man.Epilogue The bigger tribes of White Tiger and Black Mammoth has long been fighting over the ages and none of the smaller tribes has even remembered why the white tiger and black mammoth fought in the first place, the smaller tribes of The Uuks and The Gars however are at peace now where they tame dino for their own and are safe of the T-rex beyond a safe wall of "the wall of the grand" which only they can hear the roars.
However, peace is swiftly interupted in which the White Tiger's son approaches The Uuks and the Black Mammoth's son does the same with the Gars.
Will the Uuks and Gars split up the same way and humanity be just wild around the land like little critters or stay together?
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Posted: Wed May 07, 2008 3:02 am
Sitting on a rock, one leg hanging down and the other used as leverage for his arm to rest on, Echo yawns as he in on another hunt. He was in long neck territory this time- he wanted something big to try out his new plan and to get the tribe off his back about hunting for a while.
Waiting for his pray, his eye catches a lone long neck adult male slosly walking towards his trap. The young male jumps to his feet from excitement and observes the giant reaching for the free leaves he had left it. Suddenly the ground collapses under the giants feet and it falls a few metres down- nothing too dangerous. Suddenly though, 6 spears impail the plant eater. Two strike in the neck, two in it's chest and two in it's hind legs.
Having seen this Echo yells in his tribes characteristic battle cry and runs towards his pray. Upon uproaching the beast, he slows down as he knows that dying animals are the worst.
"Come on... Die quickly and you'll save us both the trouble!"
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Posted: Wed May 07, 2008 3:12 am
Young Ashby was a rather tall girl, with messy brown hair and blue eyes, covered in tiger fur and ornamented in fang jewerly.
She had been watching her tribe member from a few steps back, and snorted loudly. She wasn't happy to go hunting with him, the showoff always brought back the best hunt. Why they had asked her to tag along was beyond her perception.
She watched him run towards his pray, but remained silent now watching the longneck struggle.
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Posted: Wed May 07, 2008 3:23 am
Holding up his spear and pointing it at the screaming animal, Echo squints his eyes slightly. Dropping to the ground, he places his ear against it. Hearing something he regretted hearing, Echo jumps to his feet and begins running away from the long neck.
Not looking back, he runs towards his fellow clansman and signals for her to run in the only way he could think of. "RUN!!! RUN!!! GET OUT OF HERE!!!"
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Posted: Wed May 07, 2008 3:27 am
The sudden trembling on the grounds could be heard from afar as the trees split from afar, two Adult Longnecks suddenly splitting apart whatever coming in front of whatever was in their way as they had heard their child cry of help and suddenly swinging their tail at the two Cavepeople, lucky for the experienced hunters to yet dodge such an attack but now the hunt was on for revenge.
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Posted: Wed May 07, 2008 3:36 am
She had gotten to her feet as quickly as she could, as she started running to get out of the way, of two angry parents. She looked over her shoulder to see if her fellow member had reached her yet.
From the weight of the two large longnecks the ground was shaking much like a strong earthquake, making it hard to gain ground while running.
"Hurry up!" She shouted to the young hunter, struggling to make her voice heard over the loud stampede.
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Posted: Wed May 07, 2008 3:48 am
Running in a zig zag pattern so as to avoid the stampede, the young hunter suddenly remembers a weapon in his arsenal. Reaching into his pouch, Echo retrieves a hand full of long and extremely sharp nails. With these carefully crafted stone nails, the young man catches up with his fellow clansman.
Handing her a bunch of these nails whilst running, he shouts out orders, hopping they would overcome the sound of the rumbling feet. "Throw these nails at positions where you think the long necks will step! These are sharp enough to pierce tri-horns I hope they can pierce long necks... It should slow them down!"
These nails were not ordinary nails. They had special heavy stone at their base so that they would always land with sharp side up. They're main use was for slowing down a tri-horn attack and they were used by quite a few in the tribe. Hoping the nails would have the same affect on long necks, Echo began throwing his nails.
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Posted: Wed May 07, 2008 3:58 am
Ashby took the nailed from Echo, she ran to a nearby tree, it was an old thing that stood quite high. She started climbing it to get a better view and aim at the beast's next moves. She noted they ran in a straight line, and she took aim carefully. She threw them as close as she could to the longnecks feet, as they seemed to run towards the nails, with no clue of what she had just done.
"Right!"
She jumped from the tree and landed with a knee on the ground, taking off once again soon after, reaching Echo.
"Keep moving!"
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Posted: Wed May 07, 2008 4:18 am
The longnecks suddenly scream in agony as their heavy weight embrace the nails into their feet, suddenly standing up on their back feet but suddenly a boulder had slammed into the Male of the Longnecks, making it fall down at the other one and making the both unconscious.
A silence breaks down on the surrounding area before a caveman approaching the two hunter wearing black fur matching the tribesmen of the Black Mammoth tribe, he was much taller than the both and roughly built as well, his hair was black and roughed up.
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Posted: Wed May 07, 2008 4:31 am
Letting out a sigh of relief upon seeing the giants fall on their sides, Echo lets out an annoyed grunt. A Black Mammoth tribesman had emerged. He would probably want all of the hunt as usualy- which always lead to conflict. Oh great... I have to pick my words carefully now or we could both be dead...
Knowing how hotheaded his hunting partner is, Echo raises his hand in order to signal her to stop from doing anything fullish. Dropping his weapon pouch to show he just wants to talk, the young hunter grins slightly.
"Uh... Thanks for the help with the longnecks.... You can have the two you killed and we can take our prey..."
Echo speaks with an assertive voice, assuming that was all the opposing tribesman wanted.
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Posted: Wed May 07, 2008 4:37 am
Ashby made eye contact with the larger male in front of her, watching hie every move carefully. She would not trust a living being from that tribe, and it took all it had not to just attack the man with her spear that second. A low soft growl could be heard emerging from her neck, as she clenched her spear, unlike her tribe fellow she did not put away her weapons.
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Posted: Wed May 07, 2008 4:53 am
The big Caveman was not aware of the whole hunting situation but he seemed much different until he let out a hearty laugh. "HAHAHAHA! So you go out hunt little longneck with pointy stick? Trog think little stripes was brave! Fight BIIIIG Longneck on front."
Trog left a smile on his face from his little laugh but was more of his simple side.
"Trog think stripes do good, ugh, stripes fight other way."
Trog then picked up another boulder and finished the longnecks and broke the head of the Male, the female being still unconscious.
"Trog leave longneck for stripe, stripe finish longneck."
Trog then stands away from it and watches the others.
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Posted: Wed May 07, 2008 5:07 am
As Echo watches the large man kill the longnecks by use of a huge boulder, his eyes widen as he feels a cold sweat run down his back. Pulling himself together, the young hunter clears his throat and grins. He called me little... Heh.. He is huge... I just hope Ashby keeps her cool...
"Ashby... Keep calm..."
Leaning down to his pouch, Echo removes 3 sticks, each with a hollow stone on one end. Attaching the three sticks together, he draws a sharp final stone, attaching it to form a sturdy spear.
With his weapon now ready, Echo lets out a battle cry before jumping into the sky above the females head. Spinning his spear, he guides the sharp tip for her eye, plunging it into her brain and killing it instantly.
"That's how we 'stripes' kill!" he says with a smirk.
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Posted: Wed May 07, 2008 5:17 am
Trog make a quick snicker. "Trog think stripes make alot of noise while kill. Alerting prey is what done in big cave party." Trog had taken ahold of the longnecks neck and begun twisting it.
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Posted: Wed May 07, 2008 5:21 am
Ashby felt quite irritated by the man present, yet even more irritated by the younger male. What she hated most was being told what to do.
But she knew that with this much food the White Tiger tribe will have it good for the upcoming winter.
She walked over to the beast that was now their pray as she examined it closely, she still kept at a safe distance from the man, watching him from time to time, just in case.
"Echo, finish up quickly..."
She said in a low tone.
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