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 Posted: Sun May 04, 2008 5:08 pm
New Age Adventures of Captain Planet
The Intro, Part One
Message From Gaia.
In 1996 we thought we had finally saved the world. Clean air, water, food, beautiful green forest and blue seas as far as the eye can see. Sadly I was mistaken and now, twelve years later, I must once again call upon five individuals to ban together and summon our savior, Captain Planet. I am Gaia, the Spirit of the Earth. My mission is to defend the world from pollution, criminals, and natural disasters. I, however, cannot do it alone. My nephew, Raymond is looking for four others to join him in saving our Planet. I hope you choose to help as well, the Planeteers are more than just the five chosen ones, it is all those that do their part to keep our world clean and safe. Please join us, become a Planeteer.
-Gaia, the Spirit of the Earth.
Message from Raymond.
I am the nephew of the Spirit of Earth. My name is Raymond, you may call me Ray. If you are reading this then you have been chosen to be a member of the Planeteers. What was once a group of five, like a decade ago, is now a worldwide organization. Keep it real and real green is my motto. Anywho, your mission is to protect the world from pollution, crime, and poverty. We must do our part to save the planet. I am, no, we are counting on you. Good luck and keep it green.
-Raymond Kwame Burton
Secret Message from LeVar Burton
Greetings, I am LeVar Burton, younger brother and Vice Presedent of PoE Corporation. That's Planeteers of Earth. If your reading this you are one of the four chosen to work with Gaia and help in summoning Captain Planet, our Savior. You have been invited to meet Ray Burton and Gaia on Hope Island in our state of the art eco-friendly Geo-Cruiser. See you there.
-LeVar Burton
Guess who LeVar is referenced to and score 250g. Guess who Kwame is referenced to and score 250g.
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Posted: Tue May 06, 2008 1:22 pm
LeVar Burton - as in the guy from Reading Rainbow and Star Trek: Next Generation? surprised
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Posted: Tue May 06, 2008 7:09 pm
rabbit and coyote LeVar Burton - as in the guy from Reading Rainbow and Star Trek: Next Generation? surprised You forgot a show, it's not hard but can you figure it out? I'll give you your 250 gold tonight, and Part Two of the Intro will be up sometime tomorrow.
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Posted: Wed May 07, 2008 7:41 am
New Age Adventures of Captain Planet
The Intro, Part Two Hello I am Computo, a fully solar powered energy efficient computer created by Planeteers of Earth corporation. So you want to know the identity of the five Planeteers with the special rings and what the rings do huh? Well that's top secret information. What's that? You were sent by Raymond? Well then I guess you have access. Let us begin shall we? The five magical rings have the powers of five elements of Earth. These elements are Earth, Fire, Wind, Water, and Heart. What Heart is not an element? Why not? Exactly, now may I continue? When the power of these rings combine they form our savior Captain Planet. Now the five individuals. We will start with the wearer of ring of Earth, Raymond Burton. Raymond, as you may know, is the nephew of Gaia, the spirit of Earth. Don't ask me how that happened. He is the CEO of Planeteers of Earth Corporation. Before he became CEO and found out Gaia was his aunt he was a movie star. He was also far from Planeteer material. One day his career suddenly ended, he was lost and broken. His aunt found him and showed him his destiny, the ring of Earth. He started putting up flyers not long after starting his corporation. He attracted thousands of members to help keep the Earth green, four however would join him in special missions. The wearer of the ring of fire is not exactly who I would have chosen, but I'm just a solar powered energy efficient computer. Anyway, his name is Ryan Wheeler. Ryan was an High School dropout that practically had no future or job. He thought his guitar could score him a shot at stardom, but with no money it wasn't easy. He saw one of the PoEC Corp. posters that read, "Need a future? Give Earth one. Become a Planeteer." He joined, got his GED, and is now an efficient member of society. Next is the wearer of the ring of wind. She is a beautiful young woman from Paris. She was once a beautiful model until she met a guy that promised her the world. She believed him and would do anything for him, including helping him on his bank robbing spree across France. When they left the country she found out the he was cheating and in exchange for her freedom she called the police and turned him in. Knowing he would surely get out and take vengeance on her she joined the Planeteers believing they could keep her safe. Though fragile, she is rather intimidating. The wearer of the ring of water is Anila Feng. She was born in Asia but now lives and surfs in California. She came to America alone, her family couldn't afford to travel with her. She started surfing to make money and hopefully bring her family to America. One day she went to the beach and saw a number of animals trapped or killed by the trash and pollution that accumulated on the beach. Wanting to do something about it she found out about the Planeteers of Earth Corp. Last but not least we head to South America to find the wearer of the ring of heart, Dominic Keaten. Though he was born in Arizona, his parents moved him in with his grandfather who is a shaman of the Kayapo nation. He was always into animals and nature. He volunteered at a zoo in Arizona and lived in the forest in Kayapo. When he saw of an corporation that wanted to help Earth. Dominic, or Nick as called by friends, was very curious so he joined. These are our heroes. There adventures will be recorded by me for future Planeteers to see. That is all the info I have. Is it just me or are they a lot like the Planeteer twelve years ago? I might just be processing it too hard. So, why are you still here? Shouldn't you be planting a tree or something? -Next Time- The new villian arrives. It is time to see if the Planeteers have what it takes to save Earth. Wait, Gaia is missing! Next up... Proving Grounds
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Posted: Wed May 07, 2008 12:25 pm
General_Soren rabbit and coyote LeVar Burton - as in the guy from Reading Rainbow and Star Trek: Next Generation? surprised You forgot a show, it's not hard but can you figure it out? I'll give you your 250 gold tonight, and Part Two of the Intro will be up sometime tomorrow.
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Posted: Fri May 09, 2008 7:45 pm
OK I might put up the next part tomorrow. If it's not up tomorrow it will be up Monday. I'm not going to be on Sunday.
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Posted: Fri May 16, 2008 1:48 pm
New Age Adventures of Captain Planet
Proving Grounds The team meet in Washington D.C. for their first official meeting as the five chosen Planeteers. "Welcome to P.E.C. Secondary HQ. The entire building, believe it or not, is environmentally friendly from top to bottom." said Raymond as he showed everyone around, "Feel free to make yourselves at home." Ryan jumped on the couch and grab the remote as he replied, "You don't have to tell me twice." Just as the team was settling in an alarm went off. "Warning, suspicious oil spill near Miami, Florida," Said Computo, the fully solar powered energy efficient computer created by P.E.C., "Suspected mastermind is Creaton Plunder." Raymond pressed a button that opened a secret passage. "Through here is the Geo-Jet. Creaton is one of the most notorious oil thief on the planet. It may sound strange but he steals from oil companies then sell his gas ten cents cheaper as the ones he stole from have to raise prices to compensate. We've been following him for years. Now we finally got him." Because I am also working on another story so for a while these may be short or in parts. Sorry. This is part one. Part two may come later in the week.
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Posted: Tue Jun 03, 2008 10:16 am
hey .. this is an awesome story... please continue...
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Beloved Conversationalist
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Posted: Tue Jun 03, 2008 7:33 pm
I will. I'm working on so many things at once but I will get back to it.
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Posted: Thu Jun 05, 2008 11:48 am
Proving Grounds Part II
The team arrives at the oil tanker Creaton has sabutoshed. Creaton is not there but his henchmen are. "Okay team," says Raymond, "our main priority is cleaning the spill. Anila and Kathy, since you two are wind and water, you two will go and clean the oil. Dominic," "Call me Nick," Dominic interrupted, "OK," Raymond replied, "Nick, you take care of the animals affected by the spill, Ryan and I will take out Creaton's henchmen. Ok team let's go." The Geo-Jet dropped Anila, Kathy, and Nick off at the beach. Raymond and Ryan head for the ship. Kathy starts a whirlpool to keep the oil in one place. Anila then formed a tornado to remove the contaminated water into the are along with the oil. Nick tended to the animals and with Kathy's help cleaned oil of them and tended to injuries. Meanwhile the Raymond an Ryan were fighting the henchmen. Raymond used his Earth ability to lift the ship so no more oil will spill into the sea. Ryan however was eager for a fight. Forgetting that the ship still has oil in it he used his fire abilities in an attempt to trap them in one spot. Before anyone could react the ship exploded. The henchmen are trapped in a now sinking ship. The oil is once again spilling into the ocean. Raymond calls the Geo-Jet to pick up him and Ryan. Raymond told the team they need help, they need Captain Planet.
Sorry but this will be a three part chapter. I don't know if I can call it a chapter. Anyway I am taking a break, see ya next week hopefully.
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Posted: Wed Jun 11, 2008 7:52 pm
Update: Part III will be up soon.
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