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 Posted: Tue Apr 29, 2008 5:49 pm
This is assassinmoose formerly known as crazydew i will be posting all of my old poetry here so dont think Im stealing.
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Posted: Tue Apr 29, 2008 5:58 pm
All my Old Poetry:
Evil Inside Me
I am darkness.
I am hate.
I am destiny.
I am the evil that shall be your fate.
I shall be the tip of deaths sword.
I kill all far and near.
I strike with blood itensity and fear.
Darkness is my weapon.
Death is my pride.
Love never Lost
As the war starts.
The soldiers march.
The innocents die.
The angels cry.
The lone hero stands.
Does he fight for good?
Does fight for justice?
Does he fight for evil?
No
He fights for the one that he loves.
He will find her no matter the stakes.
His steed rides upon the shadow the shilouete makes.
When he finds her she cold, she is pale.
To him this is not fair.
His mind cannot bare.
The anger, the passion, the love that is lost.
He takes out his blade.
Strikes himself down.
He thought without her could no longer go on.
He did this because he loved her did not want to leave her.
"Till death do you part"
Has no meaning to them.
Death of one held close
My love stands.Her eyes shining bright.
Aware that her life will end tonight.
The plague wil spread.
People awake with dread.
She is nothing more than a soul.
I love her only.For my heart is as black as hole.
As she stands at the balcony I run to her side.
But what do i find?
Her blood stained dress. A dagger nearest her heart.
I scream in rage.
I feel like a demon locked in his cage.
I shall find the one that murdered her.
I shall rip them to shreds kill them till my anger is gone.
Till I feel no more hate.
Then I will leave , and run away for without her i am not complete.
I will find a dark place and sit there and cry tears blood.
Untill my heart will no longer beat.
If i could relive one day.
It would be marriage
The day she died.
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Posted: Tue Apr 29, 2008 6:01 pm
All my old poetry. Cont.
Love coming and going
You find yourself down
Because as quickly as love came.
It was gone all the same.
She was perfect when you first met.
But now your lying in regret.
And overwhelmed by self-pity.
You think that there is nothing else worth living for.
So you grab the knife.
And are about to strike.
But that comforting hand stops you from making the worst decsion of your life.
So you sit down and talk to her about all your anger hate and strife.
You will soon find out that she is who destined for.
You will comfort like she did you.
You love her so much.
She feels the same for you.
You will hold her close when she feels sad.
You will talk to her when she is mad.
If this isnt love then tell me what is.
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Posted: Tue Apr 29, 2008 6:12 pm
Here is one of my newer poems that i wrote when i didnt have internet sometime around christmas I think.
Winter Bliss
Our Grassy hills once bathed in sun.
Now, covered in white dance to the wind.
Tis' the winter bliss.
A mother whispers to her children
The sound stopped by the cushion of snow
Tis' the winter bliss.
Where the children once played and laughed.
They now sled without a sound.
Tis' the winter bliss
Where the sun once beat down upon us.
A gale of winds blows gusts
Tis' the winter bliss.
In this winter bliss only the strongest dare to face
mother natures cruel harsh kiss.
Now the sun sun peeks out from a cloud
Where the blanket of snow once was
now blooms dandelions under the sun
Thus ends the winter bliss.
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Posted: Tue May 27, 2008 9:18 pm
Untitled poem
Even within the purest peace of mind,
all the souls are going blind.
Empty threats and lies,
propaganda destroying mankind.
All your bombs streaming from the skies,
nuclear currents making the dead rise.
As you storm the beaches,
a dieing voice still preaches.
A bulletline streams,
crushing childhood drems.
Your padded room blocking out the screams.
This bloodshed shall never stop...
not until we get the last body to drop.
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Posted: Mon Jun 02, 2008 4:03 pm
i like the last one, but most of them seemed to need revision. perhaps adjust the wording, change the punctuation. the use of periods at the end of every line in some of these made them sound choppy, though that may just be me.
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Posted: Sun Jun 22, 2008 6:20 pm
I agree with you about how it seems choppy i will work on that. thanks for your opinion.
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