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Another Poem by me, please comment....

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Time_Continues
Crew

PostPosted: Wed Apr 23, 2008 5:59 am


Horrible Smile
She gave me this smile
that didn't take awhile
to settle into my heart
and start ripping my insides apart.

She will hate me
and never let me be.
She will rip my life apart
ripping away all that is dear to my heart.

She smiles at me again
and my life that would've been
if she hadn't ripped it apart.
If that smile hadn't settled into my heart.

She smiles her sickening smile
that is nothing but vile.
It raises fear into my heart
ripping my insides apart.

But, I know I can beat her,
though there is no cure
for the smile that goes straight to your heart
and starts ripping your insides apart.

Her smile doesn't stand a chance,
and she'll give a second glance
when all the love in my heart'
prevents her smile from ripping my insides apart.
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The ryhme sceme is AABB CCBB DDBB and so on.
Hope you like this poem.
PostPosted: Thu Apr 24, 2008 4:51 pm


Whoever this girl is give her props twisted

Memeha
Crew


Kierra10

PostPosted: Sun May 04, 2008 2:09 am


That poem ROCKED MY SOCKS!!!!
PostPosted: Sun May 04, 2008 10:06 am


Thanks.

Time_Continues
Crew

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