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 Posted: Mon Apr 21, 2008 8:53 pm
Hey biggrin I wrote some poems and I just want to know what you think of them. And please post your own poems as well biggrin
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Posted: Mon Apr 21, 2008 8:58 pm
I lay here in a meadow
My thoughts are sent away
Happiness is what fills me
My fuel for the day
Different smells surround me
My nose just getting dizzy
My smile explodes
Laughter all around me
Gazing at the clouds
So soft, pure, and white
With many shapes and sizes
Just so many that I like
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Posted: Mon Apr 21, 2008 9:08 pm
I'm sweating
Its cold
My breathing
Is hard
My world is spining
Leaving all behind
I shatter into shards
Break my line
That one Connections
That kept us bind
I'm runing away
Away from my lies
Of a world once peaceful
That was left to die
Secrets like memories
Like tears they blind
No haven to hold them
No place to hide
No warmth to comfort
No lie to hold
This life keeps going
We move along
Some left behind
Forgotten its true
This world has no time
Never could freeze
Lost all its beauty
Nothing between
I close my eyes
I say goodbye
One last leap
I can fly
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Posted: Tue May 13, 2008 7:17 pm
I'm no expert, but I'd say those poems are pretty good.
I hope to see more from you in the future. ^.^
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Posted: Mon May 19, 2008 1:11 pm
Thanks redface You are too kind ^_^
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Posted: Fri May 23, 2008 6:51 am
I like them they pretty >_O
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Posted: Tue Jul 01, 2008 10:32 am
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Posted: Tue Jul 01, 2008 10:42 am
Okay heres a new poem I hope you like it ^_^ I wanna be hot
Be felt by your warmth
This fire it's burning
Scorched by your touch
Kiss me now
Let hell take over
Heaven is too cold
Blissful no longer
I don't need wings
Only just you
I'm in love with sin
But most of all you
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Posted: Mon Jul 28, 2008 8:46 am
i like it. they are really good.
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Posted: Mon Jul 28, 2008 8:50 am
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Posted: Mon Jul 28, 2008 9:00 am
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Posted: Mon Aug 04, 2008 3:03 pm
Tania's poems are always amazing ^-^
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Mistress Drakkard Vice Captain
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Cascading Black Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Feb 08, 2009 4:20 pm
heart heart
They are simply amazing.
I love the imagery they invoke..
Bravo. Bravo. Bravo.
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Posted: Sun Feb 08, 2009 6:44 pm
*Takes a deep bow*
Why thank you Tsuki redface
You liking my poems brings a true smile to my face xp
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Cascading Black Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Feb 08, 2009 6:51 pm
Fiyori_Takeshi *Takes a deep bow*
Why thank you Tsuki redface
You liking my poems brings a true smile to my face xp ^^ Why wouldn't I like them? They are magic in the form of literature. heart I'm glad you are smiling
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