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 Posted: Mon Apr 14, 2008 6:22 am
On Etna's request I'm posting my Disgaea/Elfen Lied fan fic here.
Chapter 1: A Chance Encounter with the Netherworld’s Prince (If you didn’t already notice I’m combining the names of Elfen Lied anime episode 1: A Chance Encounter and Disgaea game episode 1: Prince of the Netherworld. Elfen Lied belongs to Lynn Okamoto and studio ARMS. Disgaea belongs to Takehito Harada and Nippon Ichi.)
A blue-haired youth with a crimson-red cape flapping in an indoor wind went through a portal with some attendants…
“Nyuuu…” Nyu yawned as she woke up. It has been half a year since the bridge incident involving Mariko, and Lucy/Nyu’s horns have pretty much grown back to their original size. She, both her Nyu AND Lucy personae, has gotten used to living a relatively peaceful life with her beloved Kouta, along with her other newfound friends, Nana, Mayu, Wanta, and Yuka (although there is still somewhat of a rivalry for Kouta’s love from Yuka). Today is a Sunday, so Kouta, Mayu, and Yuka had some time off from school, so they decided that all of them would go out and casually stroll, get some air, etc. As they left the front yard of the Kaede Inn, Nana took notice of a circle of dark clouds swarming over a region of the sky.
“Hm? What are those black-swirly things in the sky?” she asked.
“Those seem to be storm clouds, but there wasn’t any forecasts of rain in the news, and it’s weird that they’re only over that area of the sky.” Kouta responded.
Meanwhile, under the dark clouds…
“I’m going to go outside, and see if there’s anything fun to do, but I doubt it considering it’s a human world, especially Earth”, shouted the blue-haired youth.
“Well. OK, but don’t cause any trouble for the humans, Laharl”, said a cute blonde girl wearing a red bunny girl outfit.
“Humph, it was YOUR suggestion for me to come to my mother’s home world for a vacation, Flonne, and now you won’t let me have fun?” responded Laharl.
“You can have fun without causing trouble”, said Flonne.
“OK, I won’t cause trouble… much”, said Laharl, as he swiftly left.
“OK… Wait… What do you mean by much! Come back here, Laharl!” yelled Flonne as she ran after him.
Meanwhile, Nyu and Kouta were waiting in a long line at a ice cream stand (today was a hot day, so people REALLY wanted some ice cream), when Nyu saw the swarm of dark clouds (apparently she JUST noticed them), so she innocently ran off to investigate. Mayu and the others were wandering around elsewhere.
“Hey, Nyu, what flavor ice cream do you… Huh?” Kouta noticed that Nyu was missing, so he went looking for her (pretty much giving up his spot in the LONG ice cream line).
Nyu was still following the clouds as she walked briskly up to a wall corner, where… CRASH!!! She literally “ran into” Laharl. They both fell down with an “Oomph”, but Nyu no longer had an innocent look in her eyes…
Meanwhile at the Diclonius Containment/Research/Execution Facility, a mysterious white-winged man holding a silver ring appears in front of General Director Kakuzawa…
Next Chapter Preview Skit:
Etna: Welcome to my preview segment, which is more popular than the show itself!
Laharl: Show? What are you talking about? This is a fanfic.
Nana: Hmph? We’re doing the next chapter previews? Normally in Elfen Lied, the narrator does them.
Flonne (to Nana): Well, it’s more fun if the characters do it, dontcha think?
Nana: Well, all right, well in the next chapter…
Etna: In the next chapter, I’ll have more screen-time!
Laharl: This is a fanfic; so I guess the right word would be “page-time”… Also, what do you mean “more” page-time? You didn’t have any here!
Etna: OK, fine, Prince! I’ll have more page-time, starting next chapter! In fact, I’m actually the main character!
Laharl: Wha? What are you talking about? I’m the only main character here!
Lucy: No. Because this is a crossover fanfic, there are two main characters. And I’m one of them. Don’t forget it, or I’ll rip you limb from limb.
Laharl: Hmph, you? A weak human like you couldn’t possibly harm me!
Lucy: I’m not exactly human. I’m a Diclonius.
Laharl: Well, you still smell human. (Author’s Note: Laharl is referring to Lucy’s spiritual aura, not her actual body scent)
Lucy and Laharl begin glaring at each other with increasing murderous aura.
Nana: (Laughs nervously) Heh, heh. Well, see you next time!
Kouta: There was no mention of the next chapter…
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Posted: Sun May 25, 2008 6:00 pm
I need some inspiration for Chapter 2. Feel free to post any suggestions here.
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Posted: Sun May 25, 2008 6:16 pm
Wow, that is a great cross-over fanfic.
You know me, I love it.
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Posted: Sun May 25, 2008 6:18 pm
Thanks, but could you also post some suggestions to help me write Chapter 2?
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Posted: Sun Dec 07, 2008 5:23 pm
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Posted: Mon Jan 19, 2009 1:42 pm
It looks pretty good, although I know nothing about Elfen Lied, so sadly, I am of no help to you.
XD
I hope you find some inspiration soon though!
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