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Colm Cygnat

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PostPosted: Fri Apr 04, 2008 6:09 pm


Sadly, this fic is completely dead, and won't be continued, sorry if anyone wanted to see it grow. sweatdrop
(Deletion or something would be nice. =w=; wink

Okay, First off, this is my first ever fanfic, based on a random idea that hit me when I was thinking about three things, castlevania:circle of moon's Nathen, A certian FE guild, And my original RP charactor, Colm, I am sorry for any misspellings and will fix them later on, this is the intro post, so I will put chapters up here as well, note this is a sacred stones, slightly cracked, fanfic. PM me reviews and I'll ad them on the next post.

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Prologue P1

  
PostPosted: Fri Apr 04, 2008 6:11 pm


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None, they will be loved when chapters are updated.  

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PostPosted: Fri Apr 04, 2008 6:32 pm


Prologue P1

"Are you sure this will work?" A girl, in her late teens asked.
"Of course!" A younger boy around 13 answered, "You think I would even think of it if it was going to malfunction?"
"Knowing you, yes." The girl said, rolling her eyes with her arms crossed.
"Don't give me that Thea, you know how you wanted to talk to the tales of symphonia characters with it?" The boy said as he flipped a few switches.
"Hey hey, you said, 'Lets see how the people in fire emblem sacred stones are doing instead." Thea snapped back, "And plus Coron, Do you even know how to work that thing?"
"Of course!" Coron said his short brown hair getting wirled about as he flipped switches here and there, "Lets see, all thats left is typing the name of the game, continant, and place, and we're all set!" He said as he began typing on a large keyboard.
"This better work" She said, looking at the devices many panals, screens and switchs, "I wonder who we'll see..."
All of a sudden, the largest screen blared a map of a continant alien to most of us today.
"Magval, the country of Renias, town of swallow, 802 A.W." A speaker blared.
Wait, I thought you said Renias castle." Thea said looking at him.
"Well, at least its Magval." Coron said shrugging.
PostPosted: Tue Jul 29, 2008 1:45 am


...Well, seeing as it is only a very small portion of text, there's not much to go on as far as to state how well it's written. It seems somewhat interesting, that's as far as I can say. :3

Double spaces between each break would be most apreciated for easier reading. And I'm sure details are going to be put in later, seeing as this is only one little part of a prologue. wink

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