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 Posted: Sat Mar 29, 2008 12:16 pm
~*~Yes, this is my own work. Yes, it's mediocre. Yes, it just might burn your eyes, but I've put some of myself into every little bit. For better or worse, read it if you dare. Comment if you please.~*~
oo1) Someday,
Maybe tomorrow,
Maybe a thousand years from now,
But someday,
We will believe again,
And then,
Oh, the things that will happen then.
Someday,
It will be easy
To find magic in everyday things.
Someday,
When we are no longer
Frightened,
Dreams will always come true.
Someday,
It will not be a danger
To walk out your front door.
Someday,
Strangers will be kinder
And no one
Will be without friends.
Someday,
Maybe tomorrow,
Maybe a thousand years from now.
But one day,
One day we will all be free.
Free from pain.
Free from doubt.
Free from hunger.
Free to live.
We will be free.
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Posted: Sat Mar 29, 2008 1:49 pm
OMFG. That poem is awesoommmeeee! And I'm pretty narrow in how I grade poetry. That... Just... Rules...
*Gives you a black ribbon (*Loves the color black, so black=first place*)*
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Posted: Sun Mar 30, 2008 8:58 am
Ohh i enjoyed it very much 3nodding
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Posted: Sun Mar 30, 2008 9:50 am
I think it's great! (A little bit off topic but, I like your signature too.)
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Posted: Tue Apr 01, 2008 5:16 pm
It's a good poem. I aplaud you. All of my poems suck.
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