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 Posted: Sat Mar 29, 2008 2:57 am
Let he who has eyes to see
World distorted, the song has begun
a sparrow is worth two coins
Am I worth none?
To produce the good fruit
you must have a good tree
a seed in the thorns
I think that is me
I am a lost sheep
doubt has led astray
The path I choose
is running away
I built a nice home
on a foundation of clay
Lord help me now
its giving way.
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Posted: Sun Apr 06, 2008 9:34 am
Hello Willow, I am sorry it took me a week to see your poem. I am so used to there being nothing in this forum that I neglected to look for something.
Your poem strikes straight like a dagger right to the heart of all doubt. These are timeless questions and thoughts that everyone can relate to, but you have worded them in such a heartfelt manner. "Am I worth none?" Who has not asked that question at some point in their life?
Each stanza (Biblical parable) is crafted beautifully.
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Posted: Fri Apr 18, 2008 7:06 am
gee thanks uma , biggrin you just made me blush.
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