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-GrilledTofu-
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PostPosted: Tue Mar 25, 2008 5:59 pm


Welcome to Round Three: Global Warming PSA

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From now on, I'll make an entry of my own, just like Tyra does
the photoshoot the models do, too. xd

Like always, cast your vote on your post.
Voting ends on Friday by midnight PST.

Good Luck.
This round we had one non-entrie

Meili Cakes


I've given enough second chances. She will be the only elimination this round.

PostPosted: Tue Mar 25, 2008 6:00 pm



Twilima

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go go glam

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L0AD3D NiNJA

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Hattey

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Lady Glompage

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Rainbow Banana Trees

"The angry Garbage bag"

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ScaredCrow Riots

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Eruvanda

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Porcelain Hearts

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Blackmager

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Fredrick-Fuzzball

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JessieBaby`
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-GrilledTofu-
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-GrilledTofu-
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PostPosted: Tue Mar 25, 2008 6:01 pm




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Twilima - Oh wow! Your entry looks so professional, like something I would find in a magazine. The colours are really nice. I love how you're frying an egg outside too. It makes me kind of hungry.
I also like the font you used. However, I think that the picture is a tad too washed out and light. And I don't really understand the message icon_sweatdrop.gif

go go glam - Omg were you really in a recycling bin?! I don't think I would ever be able to do that haha. I really like the concept and the colours. The green is so fresh and really adds to the whole recycling idea. And I think that your pose is perfect. It goes wonderfully with your message.

LOAD3D NiNJA - I liked the concept behind yours one too. The kind of sandy desert vs. the grass was a really good idea. The only things that I didn't really like was the fact that the pictures were blurry and both pictures weren't the same size.

Hattey - LOL! I love this one. The colours are catchy and I love the superhero idea. The font that you used is really neat. However, I think it would have been better if you were holding a real recycling sign or a recycling bin. And maybe a cape... icon_wink.gif

Lady Glompage - Genial idea. It's funny because before I saw you ad, I was telling my parents that we should use material bags instead of plastic bags when we go shopping. The colours are so vibrant and fun. I really like the pose and how you're holding a shovel. I really like the message and the font style you used. This looks like it could be in a magazine ad too.

Rainbow Banana Trees: You are too cute. If my garbage bags looked like that, I'd probably cuddle them instead of filling them with garbage icon_whee.gif One thing that bugs me though: Where did your legs go?! xDDD I really liked the overall idea of this. It makes me go "awwww" and want to recycle. It amused me that you were dressed as a garbage bag and had the bottle in your mouth. The only thing that I don't really like is the font size/colour you used.

ScaredCrow Riots - So this is probably a really weird thing to say but I really like the wallpaper in the background. I like the different sized fonts you used and how you included an email; I found those made the ad seem more legit and realistic. I think that the concept with the flame was a neat idea but I'm not sure if I really like the globe you used... I don't know if this was intentional, but the way your head is tilted and you're not really looking at the flame, it kind of shows that people are careless with the way they're treating the environment.

Eruvanda - Oh gosh. I'm getting so sick of the snow. It's April and it's still snowing! wtf kdsjhfsjkjshfd. Anyways, back on topic. I like your message and your pose. I think that the picture is a bit dark and you could have worn a really huge winter jacket or something to really get the point across.

Porcelain Hearts - I think that your entry is pretty. I like how you used dead flowers and the use of lighting makes the picture seem really warm; almost as if the background was on fire! The Stop Global Warming sign at the bottom is neat. However, I find that you could have elaborated your message and maybe tell people how to stop or what the consequences are, because I didn't feel as if your message really went with the picture.

Blackmager - Your entry made me have to take a double look. I was like "lol wut?!" Brilliant idea. I love how the globe is on the grill haha. I don't get what the other things on the grill are though. I like the font/shadow effect you used too. The one thing that I would fix about this is that you should be standing. I don't think that anyone really barbecues sitting down icon_rofl.gif Well, at least my dad doesn't haha

Fredrick-Fuzzball - This is such a cool idea (not just because ice cream is my favourite food dramallama ). I like how you represented the world getting eaten/used up. However, I think that it would have been better if you were standing outside or around some plants to give it a more "environmental" feel to it.

JessieBaby` - My first impression when I saw your entry was "Ooo la la". Your message is genial. I think that your picture goes well with your theme but like I said to Twilima, it's a bit too washed out and light. I think that it would have been better if you really brought out the trees in the background.


Voting for this round was a REALLY hard choice icon_sad.gif
My top 5 picks are: go go glam, Lady Glompage, Rainbow Banana Trees, Blackmager, and Twilima.
My vote goes to Lady Glompage


PostPosted: Tue Mar 25, 2008 6:29 pm


Ho crap, first post.
My evil assessments:

Twilima: Much improved!
It goes greatly with the theme, and it's original.
I like the glaring sun, and your obvious adversion to it.
Cooking the egg outside instead of using kitchen appliances
reinforces the theme.
Excellent!

go go glam: A great shot as usual.
I like how the text matches what you're doing in the picture.
Sitting mournfully in a recycling receptacle was a nice touch.
I also loved the background, because it's very earthy.
I must say, your old hair color probably wouldn't have worked with this
picture.
Call me weird, but I see your vibrant blonde hair as the sun to your earth.
Very beautiful overall.

Loaded Ninja: I like the idea, and it's original.
No one else did drought, and the split photograph works well,
since this round is basically like magazine ads.
It shows the viewer the two results that they could cause depending on their actions.
The only downside is that I don't like the clarity.
Just a tad fuzzy.
But it's definitely an improvement.

Hattey: Love ittt. It's bright, colorful, and fun.
It literally makes you want to recycle.
That's basically the point.
The colors flow seemlessly, and I love the background.
You look like quite the spiffy super hero.
My favorite of yours so far.

Lady Glompage: It reminds me of the picture of ground zero
with the firemen hoisting up the american flag.
Except in this case it's a plot of dirt and a bag and you.
xD
But that makes me like it.
You have a powerful stance, and it's very commanding.
You look so proud of that bag!
It shows that even the little things make a big difference.
I like the location.
Nice job!

Rainbow Banana Trees: I love the idea.
It's playful and funny and gives a different tone to the theme.
You look very grouchy, and so it is definitely believable that
bottles should not be thrown at garbage bags.
Fantastic!

ScaredCrow: I was expecting someone to do something like this.
The classic literal interpretation of the globe being warmed.
I like the lighting, it's mysterious.
I also like the simplicity of your globe and string, though I don't know why.
xD
I just don't think you should have been smirking.

Eruvanda: I like the gloominess.
There's an interesting sort of feel to it.
My favorite part is your bright sweatshirt.
Like the earth's last ray of hope.
:]

Porcelain Hearts: This one I will say I did not get.
At first glance, I wouldn't see this as an anti-global warming picture
if the little sign at the bottom wasn't there.
It just looks like you staring at plants.

Blackmager: Also love ittt.
It's completely original.
All of the props and details all make sense and are well-used.
I love the feel of the picture, like it's just another day at the grill.
A very successful upbeat global warming ad.
My favorite of yours so far.

Fredrick Fuzzball: Love the idea, and I love your face.
Your eyes sold the whole thing.
The way you're licking away at the earth as though you have not a care
in the world perfectly portrays how that's what's really going on.
We're harming our planet without taking much notice.
It's pleasantly simple, and yet the message is loud and clear.
Brilliant!

Sorry if this was long.
I think overall I was nicer than usual.
They were all good, but few blew me away.
Still, there wasn't much that irked me, without me over-analyzing that is.
So this will be hard to decide.
I looked for inner meanings and symbolism throughout.
My vote goes to Frerick Fuzzball.

Jeymz


Eruvanda

PostPosted: Tue Mar 25, 2008 6:59 pm


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Oooooooooohhhh!!!!!!!

Awesome!!!!!


[insert critique...later]


EDIT:

Twilima - I love this picture. The lighting, the text, everything is great.

go go glam - It was alright. It was a bit busy I think. With the globe and the recycling and the bag dress, there was just a lot going on.

LOAD3D NiNJA - It's a neat idea, but it looks like you rushed it.

Hattey - Loooooove this pic. The idea is fabulous, i just wish you had some kind of expression on your face. You don't look very excited about recycling.

Lady Glompage - Super awesome. It looks like you're conquering the dump.

Alex - Love it! I laughed hard while I was shooting that, your idea was really cute.

ScaredCrow Riots - The idea isn't that original, but I like it. Contrary to what others have said, i like the little smirk on your face. "Haha, I'm burning up your planet...Take that!"

Porcelain Hearts - It doesn't really seem like a global warming PSA. If it weren't for the small banner at the bottom, I wouldn't know that it was.

Blackmager - It's cute, but the shopping is really obvious and the idea is not that original. A globe, being warmed. I do like the twist on the warm globe though.

Fredrick-Fuzzball - The idea was really awesome. It's very simple and draws your attention to the few things in the picture that are important. The ice cream and the text. There isn't much else to distract from them.

JessieBaby` - I like that you toned down the shopping this week. And the slogan that you picked works really well with the theme.
PostPosted: Tue Mar 25, 2008 7:04 pm


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I like them!
I will give my say tomorrow.
BED TIME SOON!

kawaiiluu

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Hattey
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PostPosted: Tue Mar 25, 2008 7:41 pm



Huzzah, the entries are up! It's looking pretty good guys.
We should spread our photos over the internet and
actually use them to raise public awerness. Right?
But yeah, glad to see these and hopefully I'l post
some comments about everyone's later. *is sick*

@Njord-kun: Thanks, I appreciate it!
PostPosted: Tue Mar 25, 2008 8:00 pm


Here's my top 4 picks:

4. Frederick-Fuzzball - on seeing you picture, I went, "Awww! D:" Poor world! It's melting and you're eating it like you don't even notice! But your expression is true to reality; people DON'T seem to notice, or they don't care. On top of that, the ice cream earth is in my opinion very creative and amusing. Interesting take on the subject. Outside of you and the ice cream, however, everything is very very simple and boring. confused


3. ScaredCrow Riots: I realllyyy like this picture. At first, I didn't, 'cause your face was really throwing me off, but the more I looked at it, the more I liked it overall because I realized that the ONLY thing I don't like about it is your face. You're just like, "Oh well. -shrug-" when you should have a dead serious face. I know the globe on a string and the tiny flame aren't exactly serious, but the atmosphere of this picture makes it much more serious, so your face should be the same. Love how the background is simple enough that the focus is on you and that globe but not too simple that the picture is boring. And the text looks like that of real magazines and stuff. Great execution [though the idea is a little uncreative], and once again, just fix your face.


2. go go glam: You look really sad and caring, which fits well. I can tell you mean for people to recycle in order to save the world, but I'm not sure why the globe should be on the recycling stuff. But anyways, great choice of background. Every time I try to pick out something that I don't like about the picture, I realize exactly why it needs to be the way it is. Like, I didn't like how the trash was out on the side of the bin, but then it would look really simple and plain if it weren't there on the side. This picture is more complex than it at first seems. Good job.


And my vote goes tooooooooooooooo....


1. Twilima: Great lighting, great idea, great everything. I love the text. I love how you're looking up towards the sun, and your pose is good. And I love the frying egg idea. I just love this picture. There's nothing wrong with it in my opinion. But can you explain the multitasking bit to me? D: I don't get what that's talking about. But anyways, great job, keep it up. [:




To the rest of you, your pictures weren't necessarily bad, and some of them I even liked, but they just weren't enough for me.
I have seen some improvement in some of you, though. [:
Keep trying hard and bring your best!


EDIT: I think I wanna make a special mention for those who almost made my 4 and for others who deserve a special mention.
But that'll be tomorrow or another day.
So if you didn't make my top 4, keep your eyes out for my next post here.
I may be talking about you. ;O

Sher!ock
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squirely

PostPosted: Tue Mar 25, 2008 8:01 pm


So basically I'm in love with Twilima's entry.

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(Like, seriously.)
PostPosted: Tue Mar 25, 2008 8:02 pm


Twilima is absolutely beautiful.<3

Ivoriii


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PostPosted: Tue Mar 25, 2008 8:02 pm


"Thank you Njord-kun! :] "
PostPosted: Tue Mar 25, 2008 8:16 pm


Gah!
gonk
I hate my entry so much.
But I love everyone elses.
D:

But thanks Njord-kun.
3nodding

Blackmager


Blackmager

PostPosted: Tue Mar 25, 2008 8:29 pm


Well, I'm voting for Hattey.
Hers just made me laugh so much, and it's creative. XD
Did you get your idea from Captain Planet? That's what it reminds me of.
PostPosted: Tue Mar 25, 2008 8:54 pm


Oh wow Hattey and Twilima really stepped it up this week.

But I really especially love Hattey's entry. Everything just works. You amped up your retro style and the colour scheme is brilliant. So you get my vote.

Armic
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Kyuuchan

PostPosted: Tue Mar 25, 2008 9:07 pm


Twilima: I LOVE this picture. It's a definite improvement from the last round. Last round you were one of my least favorites, but this one you are one of my top choices. I love how you're cooking the egg all eco-friendly and it also shows that it's very hot out. Your pose and background is great and I love the sun glaring down at you. I don't get why you mentioned multitasking though.

go go glam: I love how you have the earth in your hand and it's above a recycling box. The background is great and goes with the theme perfectly. Also, are you wearing a trash bag? O__o it looks like you are, and if so, that's awesome. I love how the black dot at the corner of your eye looks like a tear as if you're crying for the earth. I also agree with Njord-kun, your hair does look like the sun for the earth. You are one of my favorite contestants. =] so far you've gotten great pictures for each round. The hand on the shoulder looks a bit awkward to me though, but that's just me nit picking.

L0AD3D NiNJA: Much better picture than last round. I like it's split down the middle and shows the dirt and the grass and the text shows the theme effectively. This picture gives you options and makes you think about it. I didn't like how the picture was blurry though, and the two sides didn't exactly match up to each other.

Hattey: XD This picture made me laugh. The idea is great and it definitely makes someone remember it. Like someone before me mentioned, it's like captain planet! I love the background and how it matched you outfit, and the text it just like something you would find in a magazine. It's really easy to tell that you colored in the mask though because there's this white spot in the blue, but that's just me being nit picking just like I was with go go glam XD

Lady Glompage: This is a FABULOUS shot! Something that you would find in a real magazine. I love the pose, the background, the bag in your hand, and the easy way to help prevent global warming. You're facial expression is great. It looks like "AHAHA VICTORY!" and goes great with the picture. I don't think I have a bad thing to say about this picture. You are another one of my favorite in this contest. =] great pictures every round!

Rainbow Banana Trees: XD Another funny picture. This is really a step up from the last round, where as last round was a bit boring and not very memorable, this one I will remember. Text is great, shows the theme very well. Your face doesn't really look angry though. It's a bit like a bad actor trying to be angry and it looks a bit sad instead.

ScaredCrow Riots: This looks like something that can be in a magazine. I love the text and how you added in the website, very ad-ish. I like the worn out earth you used. It looks tired, beaten, and about ready to die. The flame could be the last straw, and it makes a person want to act and try to prevent global warming. I don't like your expression though and the idea was a bit cliche. The picture is a bit dull too.

Eruvanda: Much much MUCH better than the last two rounds. I can understand this picture because it's happening where I'm living. We have extreme weather. Snow one day and bright sun the next. I like the dark and dreary atmosphere of this picture, and your yellow hoody looks like it's the sun trying desperately to stop it all. The text is exactly like it would be in a magazine, and I love how you added in the website. The rain looks a bit too photoshopped, but again, that's me being nit picky. I'm doing a lot of that tonight. XD you can't really help there not being rain.

Porcelain Hearts: The dead flowers was a nice touch, and this idea could have probably been expanded, but I didn't really like this picture at all. It didn't really show the theme except for the text at the bottom. The picture is boring and there's nothing really special about it.

Blackmager: Very original idea! Using the grill as a symbol for the sun was nice, and the background doesn't distract. it's a nice picture, but it doesn't really pop at me either. You aren't really a focus, but for this theme, that's alright since the focus is the earth. I liked the picture, not really love it, but the idea behind it is great!

Fredrick-Fuzzball: I love your idea, very original and very cute. I like how you look like you don't even notice what is happening, and that' exactly what it's like in real life, just as someone mention before. For your pictures, simple is always more, and I love that about your pictures. Everything else besides the earth cone in the picture is a bit dull though, and if I was looking through a magazine, I would've given it a glance and continued on because the picture as a whole doesn't pop. Looking at it now, it does. You have to be another one of my favorites. You work hard for your pictures, and they turn out great each round.

Lady Glompage gets my vote for this round. There's nothing bad about the picture I can see, not even something I can nit pick at XD

Twilima was a very close second though.
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