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I just wanted to say:
This is only the second Guild I ever joined, but it's much better then the first one. With this one, at least I get to DO something.
So I thank you guys. I thank you very much. ^^

i need some advise... i am writing a romance/action book and i want to know if this romantic theme is good or cheesy!!! tanx for reading part of my book mwhahahaha

good luck on reading it mwhahaha

here is the romance seen:

I saw everyone was ether still sleeping or that they were off to look for more stuff in this lonely desert. So I decided to undress and take a bath in the oasis. The soap the nice people in the previous gate gave us smell way better then our earth soap.
I jumped in the water and spread the soap on me. The oasis was refreshing and I loved every second of it. by the time I finished rinsing the soap off me, Angel came out.
When I put my head halfway in the water I saw that she was staring right at me. I blushed (well of course I blushed I’m naked and she is looking right at me).
Even though only half my head was out of the water it looked like she was just staring at me as if I was out of the water.
She smiled and then turned around and went behind some trees. Figuring it was safe I moved through the water and reached for my cloths. Just as I was about to put them on Angel came out…
I just about fainted. She was naked as well and I couldn’t believe how beautiful she was. It felt like my nose was bleeding. But my whole body froze and I couldn’t move from the site of a wonderful thing. Ether I died and went to heaven or I just… oh, its hard to explain my feelings.
She slowly walked over to me and gently put on foot in the water and then she lightly sank in the water. Half her breasts were out of the water and she glided slowly to me. She then put her arms around me and we hugged.
Suddenly I felt like I really was in heaven. She moaned and I just closed my eyes and moaned too. Ah, what am I doing? I can’t stop. It feels too good. We just stood there and then she made a moan so loud it scared me. But nevertheless I still hugged her, tightly this time. Her stomach on mine felt smooth and her breast on mine felt… well, perky.
Then I suddenly felt something I never felt before. I knew what it was but I couldn’t stop. We stayed together and we both gave one last moan and then just simply hugged.
I couldn’t believe what I did. This must be a dream. Yeah it probably is and I will wake up any minute.
But I never woke up.
This was better then going home.
Then we separated.

spell check it O.O dude this was on word i copy and pasted from crying odd...