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 Posted: Mon Mar 03, 2008 12:40 am
Seeing as I know a lot of people write poetry including myself I thougt it would be a good Idea to make forum here for people to post their poetry and let others comment on it... Please comment nicely... I know I dont like to hear harsh words and I'm sure others wouldn't either.
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Posted: Mon Mar 03, 2008 3:51 pm
Questions..................written on 3/1/08
Covered in stress
Mounted in pain
Life in a mess
Energy in a drain
Love at a loss
Looked at in shame
Time, what a cost
Craziness drives me insane
Friends become family
Family turns away from me
What is it my friends see
What my family doesn't want to be
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Posted: Mon Mar 03, 2008 6:34 pm
I more than likely know that most of the poetry I've been writing recently is more or less complete angst-responsive s**t, but I'll post it anyway. Comments and flames welcome. Written 3/3/08 (excuse any unwanted spelling errors, I smacked myself with the door intentionally minutes before posting this.)
Thoughts Provoked by Unresponsive Computer
Sing I Hate Everything About You to the mirror.
Pretty? Different? No.
Broken butterfly wings...
Can't bleed out...
BECAUSE OF A TISSUE PLUG?!
Idiots...idiot...
Don't let Uri see this...
Going to smack myself around.
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Posted: Tue Mar 04, 2008 7:25 am
Leigh86: I like the way your poem rhymes. ^_^ It's a bit like the kind of thing I write when I'm miserable so I can emphasise with it.
Silver Nephilim: I have to admit I don't really understand your poem (when my computer is unresponsive I don't have any deep or intelligent thoughts I'm just like: "Work now or I'll smash you to pieces you worthless piece of ****!") but it has an interesting style. Mad in a good way! xD
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Posted: Tue Mar 04, 2008 3:27 pm
Ok here's my poem . Im not that good at poetry.......
Black Lust , White Love
Thought true love had been found
But timed showed , heart break come round
Black lust long gone , now all alone
Lovecraft foresaken , spell long done
Once again free , bound by no chains
Hoping that things won't change
Pull down my veil to hide my face
Walking alone amongst the human race
Yet did I find a new prince of mine
Tan skin , dark eyes , man of a certain kind
Yet again the lust took hold
Oh so tiresome and old
Will he be my vampire
Will love come this hour
Engraved on my tomb a heart goes unbeating
All hope of light and love fleeting
Put away my heart , hide it someplace safe
For now be patient , don't show him my true face
My boxes key safe at my side
The key that unlocks all that I hide
Smile use kind words , but keep the veil pulled down
Lest white lust replacing love come round
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Posted: Tue Mar 04, 2008 7:17 pm
Badgerkin Leigh86: I like the way your poem rhymes. ^_^ It's a bit like the kind of thing I write when I'm miserable so I can emphasise with it.
Silver Nephilim: I have to admit I don't really understand your poem (when my computer is unresponsive I don't have any deep or intelligent thoughts I'm just like: "Work now or I'll smash you to pieces you worthless piece of ****!") but it has an interesting style. Mad in a good way! xD Thanks for yor input... I love getting commentary on my poetry... I'll have more up later...
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Posted: Tue Mar 04, 2008 7:19 pm
The Lord Raven Ok here's my poem . Im not that good at poetry....... Black Lust , White Love Thought true love had been found But timed showed , heart break come round Black lust long gone , now all alone Lovecraft foresaken , spell long done Once again free , bound by no chains Hoping that things won't change Pull down my veil to hide my face Walking alone amongst the human race Yet did I find a new prince of mine Tan skin , dark eyes , man of a certain kind Yet again the lust took hold Oh so tiresome and old Will he be my vampire Will love come this hour Engraved on my tomb a heart goes unbeating All hope of light and love fleeting Put away my heart , hide it someplace safe For now be patient , don't show him my true face My boxes key safe at my side The key that unlocks all that I hide Smile use kind words , but keep the veil pulled down Lest white lust replacing love come round Hey wait haven't I read this before? Oh yeah I have... You a lready know I like it so therefore I was just letting you know again that i like it... lol
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Posted: Tue Mar 04, 2008 7:20 pm
Silver Nephilim I more than likely know that most of the poetry I've been writing recently is more or less complete angst-responsive s**t, but I'll post it anyway. Comments and flames welcome. Written 3/3/08 (excuse any unwanted spelling errors, I smacked myself with the door intentionally minutes before posting this.) Thoughts Provoked by Unresponsive Computer Sing I Hate Everything About You to the mirror. Pretty? Different? No. Broken butterfly wings... Can't bleed out... BECAUSE OF A TISSUE PLUG?! Idiots...idiot... Don't let Uri see this... Going to smack myself around. I have to agree with Badgerkin on this one... I really don't understand it but but it's different and good so i like it...
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Posted: Tue Mar 04, 2008 7:32 pm
Friends Are Like Socks.
Friends are like socks,
One day you need them,
The next you don't,
One day They're there for you,
The next they're not,
Some Dissapier (sp?),
Some don't,
All of them are diffrent,
Some colorfull,
Some not,
There are big ones,
Small ones,
Pretty one,
Ugly one,
Like I said befor friends are like socks.
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Posted: Tue Mar 04, 2008 7:36 pm
Emo Sharpie Ninja Friends Are Like Socks. Friends are like socks, One day you need them, The next you don't, One day They're there for you, The next they're not, Some Dissapier (sp?), Some don't, All of them are diffrent, Some colorfull, Some not, There are big ones, Small ones, Pretty one, Ugly one, Like I said befor friends are like socks. I never thought of it like that... Friends are like socks! I like it!
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Posted: Tue Mar 04, 2008 11:13 pm
leigh86 Questions..................written on 3/1/08 Covered in stress Mounted in pain Life in a mess Energy in a drain Love at a loss Looked at in shame Time, what a cost Craziness drives me insane Friends become family Family turns away from me What is it my friends see What my family doesn't want to be You always have written some good poetry... I don't have any written right now or i would post one...
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Posted: Wed Mar 05, 2008 9:35 am
Losing Grip................. 01/14/07
I'm losing grip on Sanity
I can't find a place where I need to be
Everythings going wrong
Nothings going right
I'm half tempted to give up the fight with life
Give it up, there's no more time
Just be a drone, until I die
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Posted: Wed Mar 05, 2008 10:04 am
Here's one of my poems I wrote a while ago - I wish I could write more happy things! lol xd
I'm Not Here
You can laugh, you can stare,
Do what you want, I don't care,
Your victim is just a body,
My spirit is not there,
Hit me, kick me, scream and shout,
Teach this child what life's about,
I'd only find out another way,
Get it over with today,
I can't hear your scornful words,
Inside I'm flying with the birds,
I can't feel your hateful touch,
I don't exist, I know that much,
Close my eyes and it'll disappear,
Stay calm, there's nothing to fear,
If you hurt me I'll never let you know,
The pain you've caused will never show,
Whatever evil things you do,
I'm ready now, It's nothing new,
You're never going to see me cry,
Cos I'm not here, I'm flying high,
I'm the master of the empty face,
I'm far away in a better place,
I'm not asleep but I won't scream,
Life is only a waking dream,
It's kinder here; perhaps I'll stay,
Make the cruel world go away,
Nothingness, no time for thinking,
About the pain in which I'm sinking,
A young life wasted, filled with sorrow,
All hope lost, there'll be no tomorrow,
One day when you feel sorry too,
I won't be here to forgive you,
No more sadness, regret or fear,
Not even feeling - I'm not here.
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Posted: Wed Mar 05, 2008 10:11 am
Emo Sharpie Ninja Friends Are Like Socks. Friends are like socks, One day you need them, The next you don't, One day They're there for you, The next they're not, Some Dissapier (sp?), Some don't, All of them are diffrent, Some colorfull, Some not, There are big ones, Small ones, Pretty one, Ugly one, Like I said befor friends are like socks.
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Posted: Wed Mar 05, 2008 10:14 am
The Lord Raven Ok here's my poem . Im not that good at poetry.......
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