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 Posted: Fri Feb 22, 2008 7:36 am
I finally made my dream avatar a reality! But now I want to know, am I ready for the Avatar Arena? And if so, what kind of written component should I write? I already have a poem, but it's kind of crappy...I'm not so good at poetry. Anyway, any feedback is appreciated! Vote here!
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Posted: Fri Feb 22, 2008 9:18 am
I love it. cool You should definitely enter!
I'm always terrible with the written stuff though. D: A poem sounds good even if it's crappy... at least you tried, right? ;D
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Posted: Fri Feb 22, 2008 1:11 pm
You look wonderful. Really well put together. ^^
As for the written section, Fyrae's right. Go for it. :'D
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Posted: Fri Feb 22, 2008 8:27 pm
Oh,I have always loved your avi! Go for it.
hmmm I'll keep thinking on the written bit.
I'm sure you'll come up with something smurftastic.
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Posted: Fri Feb 22, 2008 8:38 pm
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Posted: Fri Feb 22, 2008 8:41 pm
Thanks all of you! I do have something written, bu I feel like it's overdramatic. I'll post it here and see what you all think: Song of the Ancients
Leading us across time,
Shield this young one,
Her innocence unbroken but attacked.
Send your guardian, your shining bright avatar
To keep her safe, to care for her.
Ancients' pure guardian,
Essence of wisdom, essence of hope,
Stay close by this young one.
Stay by her side, your presence a comfort.
Your love will be a candle
In the middle of the night.
Her childhood is past but still close
And her monsters are not yet forgotten:
They hang over her like a cancer.
New-fledged young angel,
Your wings yet weak and untried,
Keep joy in your heart,
Reach out to the beauty of your dreams.
Hold them close to your heart, a jeweled talisman.
Soar as high as your wings will take you,
Light of the darkness...
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Posted: Sat Feb 23, 2008 3:07 am
I like your poem and your avi is great. Go for it and be sure to link us so we can vote! 3nodding
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Posted: Sat Feb 23, 2008 3:49 pm
*deep breath* Okay, I entered. Thank you for all your help! Voting starts at midnight; please support me! heart
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Posted: Sun Feb 24, 2008 5:42 pm
Erm...maybe not. I thought it started Sunday. Is it Monday, then? My bad. sweatdrop
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Posted: Sun Feb 24, 2008 10:54 pm
If I can stay up another hour I will vote for you first!
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Posted: Mon Feb 25, 2008 12:46 am
I got the first comment! 4laugh
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Posted: Mon Feb 25, 2008 7:13 am
Thank you so much, citrimax, Ada, and if anyone else voted without commenting, thank you so much too! I'm at a 9.5 right now; I'm so happy!
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Posted: Sun Mar 02, 2008 6:57 pm
Let us know how you end up doing!
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Posted: Sun Mar 02, 2008 7:16 pm
Awe.. You totally should have placed.
Is anyone else tired of "rich" and cosplay avatars winning? Because I certainly am getting tired of the lack of originality out there.
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