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 Posted: Wed Feb 20, 2008 1:49 pm
Goodnight
Slipping further into depression,
I end my life tonight.
No more silent screams,
no more hellish dreams,
no more cries out in the middle of the night,
My sinful life is ending,
as soon as you say;
"goodnight".
Suicide
razors are silver,
guns are black
jumping's an option,
theres no turning back,
slide it across,
load it and pull,
jump from a high place,
for us their just tools,
hide the cuts under sleeves,
hide the pain under smiles,
whichever you choose,
theres no one for miles,
its a self healing method,
its a dangerous weapon,
it's our best frined,
now stick to this lesson,
once roll up your sleeves,
once you accidently pull,
once you show your true self,
no one is fooled,
they'll see your emotions,
they'll lock you up tight,
they'll take away your mask,
they'll watch you at night,
keep your sleeves down,
and your fake smile on,
don't show your emotions,
don't let them catch on.
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Posted: Tue Jul 15, 2008 8:35 am
This is strong emotional song
That talk a bout your feeling of frustration
This song feels intense
I hope you won't do as you advice there thought
There always once who will care there always one who will cry at our death
Please try your best to hold on
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Posted: Wed Jul 23, 2008 1:14 am
Intense poem, and a good communication of the feeling of helplessness that goes along with the thinking suicide is the only way out. Of course, suicide isn't the only way out, but it can sure feel like it sometimes, and people need to realise that if they want to understand why it happens.
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