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 Posted: Fri Feb 15, 2008 5:31 pm
Post your poems, stories, songs...etc....here if you would like. Or, make your own little topic. I just felt like giving this Subforum a topic XD
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Posted: Sat Mar 22, 2008 9:41 am
I'm gonna attempt a different style, so it might suck, hehe. Yeah, it probably is gonna suck, ha.
A fragile heart,
And a fragile soul.
He felt like nothing in the world,
Like nothing at all.
The only thing he felt was pain,
And his heart ached for love,
For someone to pull him from his despair.
And then she came.
Like an angel from heaven,
She helped him up and onto his feet.
She was everything he could imagine,
He loved her.
And best of all, she loved him back.
A fragile heart,
And a fragile soul,
Put so carelessly into her hands.
Everything seemed well,
Nothing could tear them apart.
But then they fought.
They fought, and fought.
Cheeks stained with tears, eyes red and watery,
They fought.
It seemed like hours, but it was only minutes.
They screamed and shouted till they couldn't speak no more.
And when that happened, she left.
She left him,
Heart broken and alone.
In an empty house with no one to turn to.
Falling to his knees,
He screamed to the world,
Why could such love,
End with such a silly fight.
A fight over nothing,
Yet a fight over everything.
He didn't understand what happened,
And he didn't want to.
All he wanted was to die,
To leave the world that was so cruel to him.
A fragile heart,
And a fragile soul.
Torn to pieces by someone he loved.
Days went by,
Even weeks, or years.
He didn't know.
The pain and grief he felt filled him with nothing,
Numbing him from everyone.
Slowly they gave up on him,
Tired of his negativity.
As he sat in his room,
Face red, body shaking, knife in hand,
He heard a knock.
He didn't want to answer,
He didn't want to know who was there.
But he opened the door anyways.
And to his surprise, there she was.
His lost love, standing before him.
What joy he felt to see her.
She hugged him, and kissed him,
And made him feel whole again.
She said she loved him,
And that she was sorry.
She was sorry to leave him like that,
And that she didn't call him,
Or say goodbye.
But he didn't care.
He didn't care where she had been,
Or what she had done.
All he cared was that she was with him now.
Now and forever.
A fragile heart,
And a fragile soul,
Mended back together by one's true love.
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Posted: Tue Mar 25, 2008 12:54 pm
awsome poem....reallt it was wonderful
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Posted: Tue Mar 25, 2008 6:53 pm
with a broken heart,
cold, and in pain
you left me there
sitting in the rain
with out an umbrella
or a coat
all alone
this is what i wrote:
" 'Together Forever'
is what you told me
how you would always be there
but now i see
it was never me
that you cared about
and now i know
and i will take my own route
and when you show up
from out of the blue
i wont be here
and you wont have a clue "
- Spaztastic Psycho
((please... dont make fun of me... i write from what the voice in my head says...then i go back and edit... ))
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Posted: Fri Mar 28, 2008 7:55 am
Really really good poem Repressed, made me cry.... And good Spazzy, I liked it.
I have many poems, Most suck, but here are some anyway.
Shadow
Dust is amongst us
Light slowly fades to gray
It is the end of another day.
Yet, why don’t we all just stay?
The gray turns to black.
Thoughts and words we can’t take back.
The shadow slowly creeps and spreads.
It’s the time of day everyone dreads.
Turn on the lights and hide in your room.
Try to escape from all the gloom.
Hide under your covers
However, you will be discovered.
Call the police or call your friends
For this is the time your life ends..
Seek forgiveness and tell your reason
For your will end before the end of the season.
The shadow spreads through your heart
And starts to tear your soul apart.
The shadow spreads to your mind
You have gone insane, you’ll find.
The shadow spreads to your hands.
Why don’t you try to make a stand?
Your hands grab a knife
And try to end this life.
The shadow retreats as daylight breaks.
You soul the shadow tries t take.
But you slowly open your eyes
And look up at the sky.
It was only a dream
Tears roll down your face in a stream.
Sleep with your lights on
For if you don’t, your life will be gone.
My Plan
Hold me tight,
Make me feel alright.
Because I've got a plan,
Help me if you can
My plan is to give you my heart
Hoping you'll never tear it apart,
Hoping you'll hold it dear
For losing you is what I fear.
My plan is to fiive you my soul,
Hoping you'll make me feel whole,
Hoping you'll treasure it forever
For, I want us to always be together.
My plan is to love you
Hoping you'll love me too
Hoping you'll feel the same
And hoping you don't think this is a game.
So, hold me tight
And make me feel alright
For, I've got a plan
And I'm hoping you'll help me if you can.
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I've got many more poems...even some inappropriate ones that I won't post.
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Posted: Sat Mar 29, 2008 4:20 pm
This is a song I've been working on for a while now. My English teacher didn't like it, but I don't really care. If it sucks oh well.
Untitled
It's dark outside,
A pitch black night.
I stand alone,
Waiting for you,
To come take me home.
It's not that I can't see,
It's just that I won't see,
The dark side of you,
In all the things that you do.
All the lies that you've said,
Are jumbled in my head,
And only misread by me.
I close my eyes,
Holding my breath.
But you keep spouting these lies,
When will it end?
It's not that I can't see,
It's just that I won't see,
The dark side of you,
In all the things that you do.
The walls of my mind,
Are closing in.
The darkness is the only thing to be heard.
It says I should run,
Leaving you behind.
But all is drowned out by the sound of your voice.
You came home last night,
Bruised and scratched from another fight.
That blood on your hands,
Who's is it tonight?
It's not that I can't see,
It's just that I won't see,
The dark side of you,
In all the things that you do....
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Posted: Sat Apr 12, 2008 3:10 pm
Title: My Angel
With the beauty and grace of an angel,
She gently bestows a kiss upon my lips.
The feel of her touch tingling my body,
Making it tremble as I've never felt before.
With the kindness of an angel,
She forgives all I've done.
Making me feel loved,
As if I've never done wrong.
And with such traits of an angel,
All men wish to be with her.
But they drop to their knees,
Knowing they can't.
For this angel loves only one,
And that one is me.
Yes, that's right,
This angel is Britni.
And she is truly an angel,
Sent down from Heaven.
To love me with all her heart,
Forever and always.
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