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Poems by me ^.^

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XGothamGirlx
Captain

PostPosted: Wed Jan 30, 2008 11:40 am


Okay, here are a few of the poems I've been writing.

Her blood runs down her wrist,
The blade in her shaking hand.
It's all been leading up to this.
She cuts as deep as she dares.
It's gone too far this time,
And still....
Noone Cares.


Just because she smiles,
Doesn't mean shes alright.
Even if you don't see her cry,
Doesn't mean she doesn't every night.
She covers up the truth
With intricate lies,
But every day
She still feels like she dies.
She dances with the devil,
And asks for death.
She cries for help
With her every last breath.
She needs to be heard,
But they're all so oblivious.
It's so hard for her to hold on,
When it seems so ridiculous


I just can't stand you
As you stand here and scream.
I can't take it anymore,
As my thoughts flow loose in this dream.
Although I was told to express myself,
And to be unique,
When I show you my true self,
My knees get weak.
Because this is not what you wanted.
This teenager should be exchanged.
Even when I try my best,
You still want me changed.
This is myself,
And who you should accept.
But every time I try to make it better,
All I am is the reject.


((Please comment exclaim ))
PostPosted: Tue Feb 12, 2008 1:11 pm


omg its so amazingly sad! but amazing nun-the-less ((heh. nun =]=]))

OokamiMangetsu3036
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Tora394

PostPosted: Sat Feb 16, 2008 8:43 am


that was soooooooooooo sad, OMJ, do you really feel that way or is it just all made up and stuff
PostPosted: Sat Feb 16, 2008 8:51 pm


Hah. Don't worry. Almost all of my poems are written when I'm being super overdramatic and emo. So maybe I'll feel that way for a bit, but seriously, who doesn't exaggerate their feelings when they're upset? I just happen to write down all of those overexagerated emo-ness emotions, and it all comes out pretty and rhyming. ^.^

XGothamGirlx
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manic mischief
Crew

PostPosted: Sun Feb 17, 2008 2:59 pm


agh! triggertriggertrigger.

do you have a rhyme scheme? it seams like some couplets rhyme and others don't on purpose. I think you need to make it more consistent.
PostPosted: Thu Feb 21, 2008 11:26 am


Wow, that's one awesome piece of poetry right htere and I totally, agree. Who doesn't exaggerate with their poetry. biggrin

- Lady Bloody Ava -


XGothamGirlx
Captain

PostPosted: Thu Feb 21, 2008 5:08 pm


Haha, yeah. And no, I usually don't have a rhyme scheme, I just make it up as I go along.
PostPosted: Sat Mar 08, 2008 6:39 pm


Fwah Kitsune, you know I adore your poems. This is, like, my favorite. I don't think there's a teenager on the planet who can't relate to it.

Fire Lord Ceci
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